One Piece Is a Girl? If I Defeat Her, I Will Become Stronger.

This short article generally follows the original work, but it can be seen that there is no trace of AI. Based on this, I will give it four stars. It is already very good in the era of rampant AI.

The conclusion is good-looking and can be improved to 8.5 Points. It's just a little strange at the beginning. The male protagonist's affection for Lu Fei is a bit inexplicable. It doesn't feel like true love, but a systematic mission to give himself a reason to live in a different world. In addition to her own lack of love, Lu Fei's unwillingness to accept that the male protagonist is also telling her intuitively that being used as an excuse to love is a task. This kind of relationship is unstable. I hope I can write about this aspect later. She loves Lu Fei because she really loves her, rather than deceiving herself to love in order to stay in a different world and not be lonely.

It's pretty good. There's not much of a problem so far. It's just that according to Luffy's original skill set, he should be indispensable for wearing explosive clothes. How to deal with this [sneaky laugh]

It's a relatively good story about a ship, but I don't know if it's a single heroine or multiple heroines. The original protagonist may be a little weaker, but if it's the same as the original, then time travel won't have much effect. Then the flow of the ship is bigger, and the poisonous problem is the nanny. , But the sex change, the nanny problem is not that big anymore, I personally don't think it is a big problem, and then, there are too few updates, not ten or 100 updates a day, and I haven't caught up with the progress of the animation yet. I hope the author can catch up with the progress of the animation as soon as possible, preferably after a week.

Nice! Highly recommended! Sex changes to Luffy, 1v1 pure love, the characters are very restored, it's a fairy tale. The emotions are written more delicately and smoothly, and the male protagonist has a single arrow. The flaw is that the system settings and the like are relatively ordinary, but they are not toxic, and are average with no highlights.

It's very good. The plot is also very good and not sloppy. I feel that it has become much better since the appearance of the beauty's second personality. The protagonist has also become more handsome (charming), especially when he gave up sailing with Feifei. I would like to give a critical review. The writing is okay and needs to be improved. Also, the heroine Feifei is not like a girl. The contact with other men is a little too much. I don't know if anyone likes it like me. People with mental mysophobia don't like it. Also, the protagonist knows the plot well and speaks too plainly. I can't stand it. The most important thing is why the heroine keeps writing about Feifei. It makes me always think about a certain pink pig [angry][angry] Summary: This book is still very good. It may have been a little dull in the early stage. The portrayal of Red Eyes and the transformation of the protagonist are very good, but I feel that the other characters are a bit underdeveloped. I will give you another suggestion. As long as the protagonist Feifei's love and the transformation of Hao Feifei are well portrayed, as well as the inner feelings of Red Eyes and the protagonist, then this book will be the top one in One Piece fan fiction. I feel that the plot after the protagonist leaves Feifei is very important. I hope the author can write it well. I'm very optimistic about you [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Author, please answer me, did you really not think of the female version of Luffy as some kind of silicone toy when you wrote it? [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

It is indeed possible, but the protagonist before forty or fifty photos in the early stage has a little possessiveness, which may make some people feel uncomfortable, but it will be fine later. Of course, some people may also disagree with the digitization of favorability, but this does not have much impact on the plot itself. After all, most of them still follow the plot of the original drama. Of course, some people may think this is a poisonous point. And as soon as the theme of One Piece comes out, it means that this relationship cannot quickly heat up to a love till death, or something like that. Otherwise, how would the middle story be written? I'm still looking forward to it. Also, I want to know whether the protagonist and Lu Feifei were together during those two years, or were they separated? After all, Luffy seemed to have no choice but to separate from the group members at that time. He just made an agreement. I still want to know.

How to put it this way, the character of the protagonist is really weird. At first, he was even jealous because Feifei wanted to recruit Zoro to join the group. In fact, if he is regarded as a male version of the female emperor in a sense, many things will not be so poisonous, and there will be a lot of changes in the future. For example: Alabasta, when Usopp poked Lufi in the face, the protagonist had no reaction. Overall, this book is really worth reading

The protagonist blends in well, giving me a feeling of truly blending in. It's rare to see the blending in so naturally. However, I'm curious if the number of battles where other crew members need to improve is reduced. Will it affect the overall combat effectiveness?

The protagonist looks like Roger Locks, which is depressing enough [laughing and crying]

I was attracted by the title at first, but then I found out that it is a rare work. There are many pirate fanfics on Tomato, but most of them I couldn't stop reading until halfway through. This is the first one that I could finish reading. It's very informative, neither too fast nor too slow, which is just right.

Come on, author, this is my first time seeing this kind of subject matter

Anchor, do you like Luffy as a person, or do you like his rubber girl?

Luffy's sexual transformation is the highlight. The protagonist has his own personal charm in dealing with others. The writing is good, you can read it A little thunder and lightning, not too much, and it will go its own way in the later stages.

Okay, okay, it's also a supernova.

It's well written. The protagonist was too possessive in the early stage, but he got a lot better after his transformation. Keep up the good work [laughing]

There are very few traces of AI, which can be considered as gold in tomatoes.

Why don't many people read such a beautiful book? I do not understand! Why does such a beautiful novel have such a low rating?

This is the best One Piece I have ever seen. Luffy's sexual transformation is very interesting. This is the first time I have seen it. The protagonist is also three-dimensional and the plot is well written.

So pretty. . . After watching it, I still want to watch it again, but I still have more to say. Pure love Saigao! The plot chain is not brainless, the characters' emotions are flowing, and it is very interesting to watch! People like me who haven't watched One Piece can still understand it. In short, it's very interesting☝🤓

It is said to be a single female protagonist, but I am always worried that it will become a harem [grievance], but it is still very interesting so far, highly recommended The author definitely has a single heroine. The setting of this article simply touched my heart. I highly recommend it! Highly recommended! ! Highly recommended! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The fighting strength is over, get off the car

The content is entertaining enough and the food level is good

It's pretty good-looking, at least there's nothing bad about it

So good, so good, one more couple [laughs]

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Beautiful and innovative

Just so-so, don't like the style

Come on, Lao Da! Your rating shouldn't be so low!