Naruto: When Everything Begins Again

First of all, the writing style is really getting better little by little, looking from the front to the back. Secondly, this kind of Naruto novel about two worlds is really rare. In addition, some of the author's ideas are really eye-catching. I'm still looking forward to the subsequent plot. In terms of character creation, there is indeed a bit of a stretch at the beginning, but fortunately, with a little bit of patching later on, the settings of the main characters are basically fixed. Personally, I prefer the portrayal of some characters. Take Minato on both sides as an example. Their main themes are all gentle and powerful. However, Minato in the main world, his gentleness is unique to Hokage and cares about the whole village. However, Minato in the Tsukuyomi world, his gentleness is limited to his family. In terms of narrative, the early plots of the original work were written quite quickly 🤦 The Land of Waves seemed to be finished in less than five chapters. The Chuunin Examination (excluding the plot of the limited Tsukuyomi) can be said to be quite long in the original work, and it seems that it does not exceed ten chapters here. Let's talk about the advantages first. The pace is quite fast, and you don't have to read the long original plot like other novels. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. The pace is fast, and the character creation is neglected. This also leads to the continuous patching of these characters in the later period. Then there is Kazuma's chapter, including the chapters that follow the legend. These chapters have the most serious problems, and the plot selection is not done well. Take the chapter of Thunder Dream and Thunder as an example. The title is Thunder Dream and Thunder, but the plot deal with the four people can be basically summarized in a few sentences. Those chapters were really bland to read. Personally, I still like Chapter 91's portrayal of Naruto's complex psychology when he is about to meet Minato. I feel that the author has a unique perspective on this aspect. Generally speaking, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. This type of writing is really hard to find. The previous one about dual worlds was originally very good-looking, but it fell apart and broke after writing. It is a pity. I hope the author will continue to persevere and not give up 😢

It's so exciting, but can the protagonist have no CP? If not, it's okay.

It's really good. The idea seems very interesting so far (I've read 40 chapters). There will probably be surprises in the future.

Why do I feel like there's no one around? It's very well written. It's a different Naruto story.

Author: Naru Sakura or Naru Hina