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Very good, the content is well written (I hope Ron will not have a bad ending later, I really don't like this character)

The plot is quite novel, and I think the protagonist's character outlook is quite upright. The family relationship between him and his adoptive father Snape is also very good, and the other three deans are so beautiful, the author should work hard to [learn more]

Five stars for chapter 104 before I like to watch stories with no censorship or ambiguity (if I am really good at writing about emotions, I will accept it). Chapter 104 is in line with my idea, and the male protagonist is not a virgin. Later, I felt that Nagini was very much like the heroine (personally). Nagini was written as very important and the hero lost control because of it. This was something I didn't understand [a bit abrupt, I don't know why it was so important for the hero to care so much, or maybe I just couldn't understand [laughing awkwardly]] (Of course the author didn't say it was a CP-free article [laughs])

This book is not bad! Time travel, system, golden finger, male protagonist, no CP, fan fiction, many private settings, high-dimensional, invincible, group favorite, interests first, family and friendship orientation. The setting is novel, the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The male protagonist is hot on the outside and cold on the inside, elegant and calm, paranoid and protective of his shortcomings, smart and clever, calm and decisive, humble and studious, and powerful. Great, keep up the good work^O^~ "Nicolas Flamel said: "Lucas, I have lived for many years, and the experience of so many years has taught me a truth, no matter what your process is, no matter what your process is. It doesn't matter what your results are, as long as this is what you want to do, then it's right! Your heart is stronger than mine, so Lucas, no matter what you want to do. So as long as you are determined that you are right, then you are right. I hope you will remember this sentence forever. ""

It's so good to watch. The interaction between the protagonist and Snape is so good. I'm looking forward to the plot in Slytherin. Don't be fooled.

It's good-looking. In the fanfic, everyone is written in a harmonious way. It's not the kind of life-and-death fight. When I get older, I like to watch the protagonists and their relationship.

The plot is quite novel. It is the best one I have read in HP. However, if the author wants to finish this book, it will have to be next year. It feels a bit slow, but it doesn't matter. I am willing to wait. ⌯'ᵕ'⌯…🐾

The designs of cycles, dimensions, split souls, and destiny are quite interesting, and I have to say they are exquisitely designed. It's a pleasure to read the whole story, and the writing is refreshing. There are many non-original settings and reverse designs that are eye-catching. There are also many elements. It can be seen that the author has worked very hard to enrich the content. Complex settings really add depth to the writing. If it is fully filled in, it will be a sacred text. If it is not filled in enough, it will give people a sense of unclearness. In fact, no matter how you think about it, it is a good thing. If you read it carefully, you will feel that the core content of this article is to write a story about the confrontation between the protagonist and the consciousness of the world. He starts from the beginning as the Riddler, continues to foreshadow, and finally explodes. The main line is very clear, it is separated from the main line of the original world, and it even uses the original main line as a springboard. Hmm... I actually accepted it well. I feel like the biggest problem is still the long preparation. If it's the length of a short story, it's okay to focus on the reveal at the end. After all, the early stage is only so long, and the expectations that can be mobilized are limited, so I won't have high expectations for the ending. This kind of chapter is relatively long, and the foreshadowing stage keeps pulling people in, and keeps making people step on and look forward to it, which can easily make people tired. When I was reading this article, I noticed a long time ago that I was foreshadowing the pen and hiding something, and I kept looking at the various lines. Then I started thinking about how to end it. It has been laid out for a long time and has been anticipated for a long time. The author and the readers all want to give a grand and perfect ending. So what is written in this way is actually, it is either a god or it will collapse. The expectations are high. Even if the ending is grand, I will feel disappointed after watching it and feel that it could be better. What's more, with this kind of overloaded setting, I felt a bit overwhelmed with information and confused after watching it. Suddenly flashing into reality, it is indeed a very unconventional way of dealing with it... It feels like cheating has been done... There is also a feeling that if the cheating is the best in a cool article, it is reasonable to shake the author... How about making an outline next time...

I've finished watching it, and I hope there will be more scenes of father and son getting along. In addition to being kind to those who treat him well, the protagonist has an arrogant attitude that is none of my business. He is a pure villain. Everything he does is for self-interest. If he offends him, he will be killed directly. It's quite cool.

It looks good. Can someone tell me if there is a female protagonist?

Not bad. The author is a male fan, but the logic is still there and the writing is smooth. The absolute protagonist of the entire story is the protagonist. It is considered a new story. It just uses the background of the Harry Potter world. It is not particularly related to the characters of the original story. It is not a nanny article, or even a newspaper article to a certain extent. It kills Harry Potter [face covering] Of course, the introduction of the concepts of timeline and dimensions makes the story seem larger, but the story line is smooth. It is recommended to read📖

The plot is very exciting, and the protagonist's character is very decisive. This book is currently my favorite among all the HP fan books I have read (except for the two male protagonists) about the relationship between Sri Lanka and the religion. I am not very good at evaluating, I can only say that this book is too good [Sparrow Food Masterwork]

Before reading it, I thought it was the same as other books, just average, at most better than others. I know that I saw chapters 269-270. No need to say more. Come on, author. I am also reading another Erwin book [Like][Like][Like]

The structure is really big, but the ending is a bit stiff, but the overall logic is online, and the settings that jump out of the latitude are also good, but a bit vague, and the sense of presence is not particularly strong, but it is considered a closed loop. Looking forward to the new book [Like]

I watched it because I like Snape. I feel like the protagonist looks like the Big Devil in other people's eyes ()

I finished reading it in one go. There is nothing to say about the plot. It is very interesting and exciting.

Collapse system, new main storyline

It's still very interesting to watch so far, but many people are talking about the problem of female protagonists. There should be no female protagonist at present. The author said in Chapter 197 that Nagini should only play the role of a sister, but I still feel a little weird about it, but overall it is still very interesting.

This book is very well written. The plot is good even before the start of school. It's a good book [like]

Very nice ending, Severus and Lily

Seeing 177, Nagini won't be the heroine, right? Don't do it. If there is a female protagonist, can you tell her in advance?

It's great to watch. The content is not that scary and the pace is just right. The plot is pretty good. I think it's more suitable for people who like to watch warmer movies. The content is also more humorous and not so tense.

I hope Niu Er you can write this book well

It's good to read. It's really good to read. I also recommend the author's other books, which are also good.

The plot is quite good, the character settings are also very innovative, and the images are full-bodied, but the author keeps using exclamation points, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch.

It's nice to look at, and I think it's quite interesting.

It's very beautiful. I personally think it's very good.

The male protagonist is huge, huge, huge and good-looking. Snape's adopted son is super strong. Snape loves the male protagonist very much.

It's very beautiful, especially amazing. If you don't say anything else, you must see it.

This is the first HP novel that I have finished from chapter 12. The last sentence made me feel relieved and disappointed, but I really like it.