Open the Door! It Was You Who Deceived Our Feelings First!

I hope you can leave more comments. Whether it is positive or negative, the author will read it carefully, but may not reply (I don't want to cause possible disputes). Thank you everyone. The author is a pure newbie! I hope you can give me more comments and suggestions, and you can also point out the mistakes in the book. Many people came to read the book today. I am very happy. Meow [blowing kiss] As long as you don't scold the author, it is acceptable. Meow. Thank you in advance for being willing to point out the problems to me. Meow [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] The author knows very well that his level is not high hhh. If he said that he has never thought about a book becoming popular, it would definitely be a lie, but he can still keep his feet on the ground. It feels like the traffic will be greatly reduced on the second day of the debut. The author himself knows that this book is not an excellent work, and it is only readable at best. It's not that the author is belittling himself. As a newcomer, the writing style and plot of this book are quite satisfactory. So many people have read it, and so many people have given encouragement and suggestions, or opinions and criticisms, which has far exceeded the author's expectations. So I am very grateful to every reader who has read it. I love you, meow [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

The description of the emotional drama is small, the author's writing style is good, and it is beautiful.

Finally, it is no longer the classic green-haired turtle man's article of Green Eggplant. It is completely in line with the aesthetics of Y Bar. Come on, the author, update it quickly [love] [love] [love]

I have read Chapter 160. There are relatively few people who read daily novels. I personally like to read this kind of thing. In addition, Lu Bao just came out to shake hands. It was a bit uncomfortable to reach out without knowing that the other party was Lin. Although I knew that the author wanted to get in touch with him about an incident. There's nothing sinister about him. The other two female protagonists were a little overdone in the early stages. For example, the tsundere part is relatively small. The male protagonist has always been the weaker side (although he has always taken advantage). It was good to have the first love show his delicate side around Chapter 98. In terms of lightning protection, it can be said that it is quite good. Apart from the handshake I mentioned, there are no other interesting points. For the same type of daily harem novels, I recommend a book called "Rescuing the Dark Girl, Why is Shura Field". This book can be said to be very good at lightning protection. Like the author, it is the first book. It is a bit difficult to read in the early stage, but after the plot develops, it becomes a bit more interesting. The author can learn from the style.

The author has a strong awareness of lightning protection. Unlike other novels where there are always men who like to flirt with women or strike up conversations with them, in this book the author seems to talk to Yi Wanzhu about that king, although she ignores him. I still hope there will be as few of these plots as possible. I really don't like it. Every time I read a book, I have to search for keywords to block it [smile]. The heroine also eats her food very quickly, unlike some authors who wait until the finale. There is also the issue of handshakes. Before I read this novel, I saw someone commenting on the heroine shaking hands with other men. I was so scared that I quickly searched for keywords, but when I looked carefully, Manager Liu was clearly a woman. I was almost misled, otherwise I would have missed a good book. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and give you five stars [shy]

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You guys are happy with it, but what about my privacy [shy]

After reading Chapter 38, I feel that the male protagonist is not as passive as the comments said. You will know after five minutes of reading. I have read for more than five minutes. I have read Chapter 38. I feel okay and not too weird.

The writing is okay, but it feels like it's a pity to throw away the food.

Love to watch, love to watch (I am a native dog [full])

Author, you win [laughs] I just confessed my love to the earth today. It seems to like me very much. I was like a shameless wild dog on the roadside. I thought I had eaten chocolate but died sweetly because I ate chocolate [laughs] I don't think the score should be so low.

Come on, the author is big [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

From this point of view, the author's level of obscenity is higher than mine.

Suspected author's fantasy before sudden death after falling in love online [laughing]

As a new author, the writing is already very good. It would be better if the male protagonist could be stronger [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's over, I was hanged up with my lips turned upside down.

Great book! The author is very nice!

Good-looking. Love to read. Write more. I'll read it. Good looking meow Good looking meow Let's read together, meow

It's nice to watch. There aren't many interesting ones with this kind of subject matter.

Beautiful, the author is really interesting

It's a bit girly, but overall it's okay, recommended

Good looking. I love watching. I am a loser.

I am Shen He, and this is Liu Bei [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on, the book is still very appetizing.

Okay, okay. Apart from the author's writing style being a bit jerky, the plot is pretty good. I wish it a great success.

Great. This is my favorite Goblin Final Fantasy. I have material for my dreams tonight.

Waiting for the continuous updates, the plot is quite smooth, please use more tricks to give the male protagonist more strength. [Eat melon]

Good luck, come on. The author is great and writes very delicately.

For tomatoes of the same type, it is very good.

Very good, worth a look! ! ! ! ! ! [Note][Note][Note]