Who Said I Belong to Lei Zu? I Am Obviously Tongtian!

It's a good novel about cultivating immortals that is worth reading. It doesn't seem to have any bad points so far. The plot is novel and I recommend it. I feel that the rating will definitely increase in the future, but there are not many people reading it now [laughs]

This book is definitely delayed by the title. The content is really beautiful, and some places are very artistic. The part about ten thousand years ago was better written. Really, although I don't know why the rating is so low, but come on, author, this book is currently the best in fantasy in my mind. The plot is very novel, such as the setting of Tianfu. The biggest shock is the poetic and picturesque writing, as well as the atmosphere of some environments, the character of Daozu, the redemption of Master ten thousand years ago, and the closed loop of cause and effect in the timeline. It is really good. Wan Wangjun encouraged me to write a shocking book Thousands of years later, he became his disciple since he was a child. He cultivated Qingqing, but placed his remaining feelings on one person. That disciple was a young man. In order to save his master's feelings, he traveled to ten thousand years ago and unintentionally saved the world. Thousands of years ago, in the snow-capped mountains, there was a "mouse" standing in the sky. A boy from ten thousand years later was driven into the gutter. But a young girl regarded the boy as the most brilliant sun. It turns out that if it weren't for the girl's apprenticeship ten thousand years later, there would be no boy who would have gone to ten thousand years ago. If the boy had not gone ten thousand years ago, the girl would not have lived ten thousand years later. At this point, time has closed the loop, and the effect is the cause, and the cause is the effect. It's mysterious, like falling into a dream

It's good to watch, but the only shortcoming is that there are too few. The plot is as enjoyable as it should be, and it doesn't drag on. The entries given by Goldfinger are also very good, with gold content and a strong character. Unlike some novels that give a bunch of entries that are of no use

There is no bitterness, hatred, embarrassing plot of pretending to be a slap in the face, nor is there a little villain who pops up out of nowhere to laugh without thinking. It is quite comfortable to watch, but it is not boring, there is conflict and lyricism. The protagonist gives people the feeling that even if he does not rely on the system, he is an absolute genius. The only thing that feels a bit unpleasant is the plot of the empress. The rest is really good

5 Points is encouragement. The emotional line is too awkward, but the president is good. When there is a book shortage, it is okay to read. If there are emotional lines from the author of the next book, you can include them. I will only write one. The setting and other aspects of this book are quite good, but the writing is a bit vague. I hope you can change it and keep up the good work.

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This book is really good [OK], especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short [note], this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is in place! There is still time for Zihan to fight with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, and Li Kui goes to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he is tempted by foreign persimmons, and strays into the depths of the lotus root. He starts a relationship with Xiao Longnu in the Huanshi Water Pavilion, but is seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma gets angry and goes to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally becomes a generation of Emperor Yan! ! ! After thinking about it for a while, I found that the part where Lu Bu and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds was well written, but the logic of the overall combat power was as messed up as spaghetti mixed with No. 42 Concrete. The length of the screws directly interfered with the output torque of the excavator. The high-energy particle UFOs erupted from the collision of the two sides' ultimate moves, directly exploding the charging equipment of Huaguoshan into nuclear radiation pollution. Xue Baochai's numerical value is seriously over the top. If it weren't for the Noxian guillotine scraped on the outer ring of Nuo's hand and the burst of M4 six-fold scope shooting, Lu Bu would have been killed on the spot. Only Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang" poked me, perfectly describing the resentment after being hit hard by the three golden cudgels. Foreshadowing is hidden everywhere in the book, and the description of the fighting scenes is immersive. It is a mixture of various dimensional settings. It is as unstructured as using trigonometric functions to capture the wild winter Yin base. It is really a fly in the ointment, but it is still very beautiful!

Le Ziwen is quite funny. Some of the battles in the early stage are also good and have some jokes. But until the Lord of Disaster begins, I feel that it is inexplicable. In this place, both the battle description and the overall combat power are exposed. To put it simply, winning or losing depends entirely on the author's words and does not need other setting support.

Dear author: Are you feeling well lately? Siberian winds are colder and stormy It has been snowing for a few rounds, but the scenery is very beautiful. Please be quick Update, let me read more exciting things, otherwise Siberia has not been dug yet Finished potatoes will become your daily work and food, a wonderful thing Berea, beautiful scenery is waiting for your arrival. Hope it's early See you new chapters every day, my dear author. ——Josef Vissarionovich Stalin

I have read Chapter 262, which is also the last chapter introduced in the introduction. I think the main character of this book is very good. He is not funny just for the sake of being funny. He is funny but not ridiculous. The plot is quite grand. There are several shortcomings in giving four stars: First, the main character is a bit forgetful. He feels familiar when seeing many things but just wants to. Second, the timeline stretches back to ten thousand years ago when the protagonist rescued a little girl. He clearly asked her name to determine whether she was his master, but he didn't ask and just made wild guesses. I can understand that this was to advance the plot, but it was very uncomfortable for the viewers. Readers basically guessed that she was the master, but the protagonist didn't know if he had guessed it. Well, after seeing the back part, I think the protagonist is a bit too arrogant. I don't understand why the protagonist chokes when he sees someone. I can understand it because of his high status, but I can't understand why he has to be so poisonous. His coolness disappears as soon as he opens his mouth. In reality, do people really like people who open and close their mouths to scold someone? But the female protagonists are all like McDonald's. Those Xia Yanshuang and Xia Huaizhi, they will take them if they want to, but if they don't, they will keep yelling at people and either kill them or take them away. Why do they have to make so many arguments? This is direct, not ambiguous, not proactive, not responsible. The emotional line is the master. It is reasonable. The remaining few women are all caught up and given away; the combat power immediately collapsed. I don't know how many levels the protagonist can kill now. Given a lot of entries, I think the author has forgotten it. Fighting always uses those moves.

Unconventional, in order to be different, reverse the heaven and the underworld, create some kind of heaven and earth.

I don't think there's anything wrong with it. One thing I don't like is the system. With the emergence of the system, I feel that the protagonist's degree of freedom has become lower. Certain actions are done because of the system, rather than personal actions. I personally don't like this kind of behavior, but some people may like it.

If not for anything else, just because there are more than 50 swords and immortals with bells hanging on their ears. How did the author come up with this top-notch design? The protagonist looks like he is flirting when he flirts with her [laughs evilly]. The design is so visual.

It's good-looking. It's fast-paced, but it's better to describe less about the shyness of women. It's embarrassing to watch too much [face covering]. The emotional line is too fast and awkward in some places. But overall it is quite to my liking. The style is quite brisk and just right for killing time.

It has multiple heroines, but each heroine has an emotional line, so it's still worth watching [Chigua]

The writing and plot are great. On Tomato is a great book.

I see it's pretty good so far, I hope the updates won't be interrupted, cheers for the author [Like]

The writing is still very good. The author has his own ideas and the plot progresses relatively smoothly. I hope the author can continue writing and stop being a eunuch.

The protagonist is a fun person, very interesting

Although there are multiple female protagonists, everyone has their own emotional lines. They are not messy and look relatively clear. Secondly, the characters are very individual. What I recognize most is the progress of the story line. The logic is clear and organized. It looks very comfortable. It should be rated highly. Come on, come on.

It's pure cool, so far no big poisonous points.

The pressure on the realm was too harsh, the junior sister broke through the spiritual sea, and the protagonist is still in the original big realm.

A good book is not popular, no need to say more I can't understand the rest of it. What is it? Were they written by the same person before and after? It was written inexplicably. Where did the previous Shuangwen go?

It's okay for now, I'll keep an eye on it later

Very interesting, with an invincible male protagonist and many female protagonists

Recommended Recommendation Although it is a bit overwhelming, the writing is smooth, the plot is attractive, and the emotional lines are reasonably arranged. There is no problem except that the word count is a bit short.

Well written, almost invincible

The title of the novel was mistaken. The two female protagonists, Master and Calamity, have a good emotional relationship in the back. They will accompany each other for a long time.

Good food and grass, not bad, not bad

Beautiful, love it, love it