Arknights: No One Is Perfect

The writing is quite good, the writing style is fluent, and there are few basic word order and grammatical problems. It can be seen that the author has good reading and writing habits, and the narrative rhythm and story frame can be seen. If the plot line of Haiji can be expanded, the upper limit is actually very high. Now it can be gathered together Focusing on the Croton-style narrative and the suffering of the people in Iberia, it can later turn to the arrogant grand narrative of the Agor civilization and the heroism of the deep-sea hunter storyline. Finally, it can end with the sense of despair at the ending of Water Moon II. My fellow fans who are also writing boats have learned from each other. I suggest you sort out the synopses of the first few chapters and add some hooks or suspense that lead the plot, such as Skadi's purpose when she appears, some weird situations that can be seen on her, etc. Come on, write!

Put a Pierli and a white dragon here to encourage them. The writing is good but the plot is a bit too fast. From Skadi's landing to the new chapter Under the Tide, there is generally a faster pace. It may also be a rushed work. It is a rare book that can be read normally among a bunch of cyber scraps written by middle and high school students in Zhou's Persimmon fandom. Conclusion: A book with foreseeable potential and a bright future. Ps: 500,000 words. Let me read it.

The writing is smooth and stands out among a bunch of fanfics written by high school and junior high school students. The posts with Didi are very well written.

Don't be like that😦😢(crying)

I feel pretty good at the moment, but I haven't released any ratings yet, so the author must not act like this.

This book is also very good, so please do your best, author 😏 😏

The subject matter is relatively new and interesting to watch.

The author writes very well!

Not bad, come on author

Overall it's pretty good, but the pace is a bit too fast and the plot is a bit flawed. Also, when will the Earth Explosion Star be scheduled [laughter]