A Mortal: Inheriting Leo's Light

Give it a five-star rating for encouragement, it still seems to have quite a lot of potential. Briefly summarize the advantages: +Full and reasonable Ultra spirit: Compared with many protagonists who are ordinary people but risk their lives in trouble, the psychological growth of the protagonist in this book is more reasonable and the character arc is fuller. It is a very real transformation process of ordinary people, but some people will feel that it is not satisfying and have no choice. Today's readers are very impatient. + Well-written text: It's good to have good grammar and punctuation, especially no misuse of exclamation marks. The switching of the characters' perspective and the way they speak are smooth and natural, without the common mistakes that occur when everyone is the same, and the reading is very immersive. + Pretty good action description: Although the author laments that action scenes are difficult to write, the actual viewing experience is pretty good, and the action scenes are quite good. I look forward to improvement. +Diverse and three-dimensional character images: Being able to write a character with non-original facial makeup is a good start. The author does not rely on the public's impression to advance the story, but fully expresses his own understanding of each character, which proves that he has put in a lot of effort. This is what I feel so far. Finally, I feel that there are very few fans of Leo, and even fewer can write well. The spirit of the sad lion is not something that ordinary cool articles can express. I look forward to the author's subsequent performance. [Praise]

To give you some context, the pace of this book is relatively slow. I will try my best to write it according to the setting. I welcome your criticism. The author welcomes all questions and doubts. If you have any bugs or questions about the plot, you can post them here and the author will reply in time.

It's not bad. The plot has been changed from Tiga's plot and variables have been added, but it doesn't completely deviate from the outline, and the plot can justify itself. It's very good. I'll give it a good review and recommend it to see what happens next. As for Ultraman's transformation, although he didn't actually transform into Leo until Chapter 22, some of the previous plot foreshadowing didn't look like water, and it wasn't particularly uncomfortable to watch. If you want to watch the protagonist's transformation directly, you can skip ahead and watch the previous plot (the following is a summary of the plot, there is a risk of spoilers, so read with caution) Basically it can be summarized into a few key nodes, The protagonist discovers that there are changes in the plot of Diga As a foreshadowing, Leo was suspected of being severely injured by Zoffie. Ultra signed his signature to inform the Kingdom of Light, causing shock. The protagonist saves Sawai and gets Leo's protection Pass Leo's test, start the tutorial level, and truly gain the power to transform into Leo.

The author, now that I see that the protagonist has just gained power, is generally very good, both in terms of creativity and content, it is in line with my point. But one thing to say is that there are too few updates! When I read it, it was only about fifty chapters, and I didn't dare to read too deeply [face covering] And another point is that I remember Tiga said in the first episode that Sawai persuaded all countries to give up their weapons before reaching peace. It is because of this that in the first episode, when Melba and Balzan only had smoke bombs, in the second episode, when they fought against the stone monster, they had to wait for the Feiyan to arrive. Weapons were added at the time, and then after it was confirmed that monsters were resurrected across the country, weapons were added to the Victory Team across the country. Therefore, there should be no such team as the Self-Defense Force, and they were basically maintained by the Victory Team. Then during the Dyna period, the Victory Team selected combat talents from the army. Although the second and third episodes are very short, Tiga is a unit drama. In fact, the time interval between each episode is very long, but the flaws are not outweighed. But maybe I remembered it wrong. If the author has clear information, he can reply to me [awkward laugh]

It must not be a conspiracy theory. The setting of Ultraman is justice and childhood is beautiful. I prefer other disguises or more settings, but it should not be that Ultraman himself is the opposite of justice.

It's a very good book. It's a slow-burning type. It's not the kind of invincible style at the beginning. It's very impressive when you're an ordinary person in the beginning, and you can become Leo later, but the growth process when you're still a rookie is also great.

I really didn't expect to see such a fanfic with a plot, foreshadowing and growth in an environment where Tiga's world view is poorly written. I thought the author would take the protagonist and fuse Leo with an invincible instant monster, but the result is a growth flow, and also adds the setting foreshadowing of Master Zoffie. I am looking forward to the growth of the protagonist and the truth behind the scenes. Also, I really liked that there was no identity reveal with Da Gu at the beginning. Maybe I was a little bit amused. I really wanted to see Da Gu's shocked expression in the finale when he found out that Ultraman Leo was his teammate.

The writing is really good. It is rare to see novels written by Leo in 🍅. Of course, as a reader, I have also seen other readers say that there are many sources of Ultraman's power in the book, such as Ultra Psychokinesis, Leo's Flying Kick, Purifying Light, etc. The author's explanations of these are what I understood after thinking hard and pushing myself to the limit. But I think writing about these "heart" powers will not destroy the combat power of the plot. High-quality Ultra novels should explore the Ultra spirit that belongs to Ultraman, rather than the so-called collapse of combat power. The Ultra spirit embodied in this novel is protection, isn't it? Just like Ace said, enthusiasm cannot be annihilated, be considerate of the weak and help each other, and you can become friends no matter which country you are with. Don't throw away that feeling, even if it has been betrayed thousands of times!

It's quite good, very detailed, and some foreshadowings are buried that make you want to continue reading. All in all, if the writing level of this book can be improved a little later, it can be on the same level as Decca, in my opinion. I only see the protagonist who just joined the winning team. So, maybe the judging criteria are different, or there are some errors. Anyway, the first few dozen pictures are quite beautiful. Just look forward to what's behind him

Finally, I've been waiting for an excellent Leo fanfic. It seems to have great potential so far.

How to say it? It has an Ultra spirit, no system, and three correct views. If you continue to maintain it, it may be as famous as Lao Feng Mo's book. Let's leave it like this for now.

Ultra warriors must have the Ultra spirit!

Not bad. Nowadays, there are more and more people reading books with real Ultraman spirit. But they are too short. Save them first.

Beautiful, rare and must be tasted

Come on, great author.

Not bad, pretty good

Ultra spirit, I just want to see this mouth and teeth. The author quickly updated the mouth and teeth. It's not enough [crying]

It's so on point. I want to see this kind of thing. It reminds me of a book I saw in 2018 that also featured Leo as the protagonist. It seemed to be called Ultraman Fighting Evolution?

Okay, give me some encouragement

I feel like I can reach B+ level

Good looking, I like Ultraman 👍🤩 Beautiful and well written

Five stars, I like watching it

Real, relevant, and special spirit

Leo, the hero in despair

Good book worth reading

This person is very lazy, so he gives five-star reviews

Ultra key? Ultra key? ! Ultra Key! ! (Fish mirror Zoffi face)

So far, I can give it 4 stars.

It's okay and pretty good, but I don't know when I can get to the next world.

Praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise! ! ! ! ! ?