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It looks good, the author's writing style is very good, but the more I read it, the more uncomfortable I became. Qingyue is not like the original person... It makes people feel strange. But it is undeniable that the author's writing is really good (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

Although it is very beautiful and well written, Hⅰm, has he destroyed Qingyue's free will? Qingyue feels so desperate and has no freedom. I feel like my personality is a bit different from the previous one. However, it's very nice. Qingyue is a bit pitiful. Can the author make a non-abusive side story? I feel like my whole person has changed... I hope there can be some double strength... Mainly, I feel that Qingyue is so weak... That is, the character design in the front has a light sense of aloofness, but later it turns into a strong sense of survival. It's so strange how he changed... Wasn't his initial wish to be in a daze...

Author, take a good rest and don't be too tired. The writing style is really delicate, and it's really fun to push the emotions and plot together. It's super beautiful, and everyone who clicks on it will show it to me ( Author: Do you know why you push for less? It's because you rush too fast and you can't see it (sure)

It looks good, but later on Qingyue's desire changes, from being in a daze to living. The front is sweet, but the back is very sharp. Yes, light and darkness, which side does he belong to? He is like an alien caught in the middle, constantly wandering, neither up nor down, in a daze, and finally wants to live. Qingyue, you become... Author: Have you ever really loved Qingyue? It's sweet in the front but sharp in the back

Author, please put it down... Sweet, so sweet, I hope everyone can read this sweet article I feel that the author is not very good at writing about intimacy. The main formula is not... Not... Not... But a kind of...

It's the first time I've seen an MC fanfic and it's so awesome. It suddenly broadened the scope of my exploration of fan fiction, and there are so many more things to read [Admiration] I can only say that it is a very interesting and exciting book, it is amazing. Even after watching it, I quickly returned to MC and felt that I had found the motivation to continue playing.

I've read Chapter 145 so far. Can you give me a review? I feel like not many people have reviewed it, so I'd like to give it a five-star review. Does it feel like a formula? Many sentences feel like they have appeared so many times that I can't even place them in words. My memory is really bad. It has happened many times that I felt familiar in a short period of time. The subsequent torture didn't feel too cruel. After all, it was just a one-sided torture of the protagonist, just like the torture of the heroine in a female pornographic novel. It didn't feel sharp, but the protagonist was so pitiful that she couldn't be free and couldn't have sex. Several times I thought it would be better to just do it. Later on, who else remembers that the main character just wants to be in a daze? How did it look like? The protagonist and him are not equal, so I feel like I can torture the protagonist. It's a bit frustrating to see the protagonist, and the love is not equal and it's hard to describe...[Thinking] I haven't seen the end, I will add new ideas when I have them. The part where the author was abused is quite sympathetic. It's well written, but it would be a little less repetitive, otherwise it would be a bit strange. Chapter 166, don't read it if there is a hint of childbirth, it's a girl, I haven't read the rest. I feel that the love between my king and the protagonist is a bit deformed. This deformity comes from the various gaps between them. (The following are my personal thoughts, not for reference) How can gods and humans be the same? It can be seen that the protagonist is a normal person. The only difference is that at the beginning, it is normal for a normal person to pursue things related to the origin and freedom. However, he changed the protagonist's nature by forcible means and deprived the protagonist of his freedom. In his opinion, destruction and control are normal, but the protagonist cannot accept it. In my opinion, this doesn't look like love, or the "love" of the public. Let me describe it as PUA + Stockholm on the protagonist's side. It's hard to say on his side. Is it special to God? The main point of view is from the protagonist's side, so I can't describe him very well. I can't understand whether I love him or not. He was loose before and cold at the back, which makes me not quite understand [what] The latter is really like the heroine of a sadistic novel, all kinds of abuse + small misunderstandings + mental breakdown + later amnesia and resurrection + continued abuse after recovery. Maybe they reconciled because of the children? I haven't watched it but I'm a little curious. Is this a bit cliche? [Think]

I think it's pretty good, but I feel like there aren't many comments or views. I've tried to read other people's comments many times, but no one has commented [smile] Again, it's very interesting, but I only listened to Chapter 66. The protagonist's psychology is torn between light and darkness. I feel that this pair must be the feeling of be, and then the emotion feels a bit strange, a bit like... Like a disease, and then I feel a little tight in my chest. I feel like I need to watch it a few more times, otherwise, I can't figure out his emotional line and the true psychology of the protagonist, but it's pretty good to watch (๑•.•๑)

A very interesting fanfic^ω^. In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist had a faint feeling of death.

... I admit that I like this book very much, the delicate emotions and... The Fall of Qingyue... I have only read a third of it, and I will continue to read it later, with a touch of sadness and occasional resonance (to be honest, I never thought that I would meet a normal love, because I can't believe that one day I really want to fall in love and maybe I will be forced to, so I'd better not fall in love. I am determined that I will not fall in love. At most, I will just dream and make up nonsense. In short... And then there is a mysterious resonance) good night

Let me tell you, this is sadomasochism, very sadistic! But very nice

It's hard to say, I feel like Qingyue is a bit feminine in the back

Madam, madam, madam, great looking! ! ! ! And the author has such a miraculous update speed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Shy][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

Really nice Character descriptions are very detailed I just don't know if the author's liver still matters [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

So sadㅠ⩊ㅠDon't imprison Qingyue

┗( ´∧｀)┛A bit sharp but pretty ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

It's so beautiful that I want to scream [send my heart][send my heart]

It's really super pretty! ! ! [Adoration] [Blowing kiss] And the author, do you still want your liver?

It's very annoying, what should I say next? Well, just experience it for yourself, it feels right, anyone who has read the article will understand.

It's very interesting. I like to see the author update it within 12 days. More than 200 chapters.

The best novel I have read so far

Ahhhhh, my wife is so pretty! ! ! It's getting more and more bt from now on. It's too good for my taste. It's so delicious.

It's so delicious, so sweet, and the entire process is knife-free.

Super pretty! ! The protagonist's obsession with being in a daze is really deep, and Alex and Steve's vigilance is really high!

Good looking @ Lin Yue just wants to show off

Damn, can Qingyue and hⅰm make guest appearances in the next book? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Love, love, exciting [send heart][send heart][send heart] It's so beautiful [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] Super loving, super possessive [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

Awesome woo woo woo

Very beautiful, rare, rare

So delicious! Very well written!