Comprehensive Comics *********

The author is a rare artist. He/she has become obsessed with his/her own art world and has forgotten what the world is [face covering]

The writing is okay, which is pretty good for a newcomer. I hope that in the future, the protagonist's character will be more stable. In other words, don't be so cool, be a bit calm like a big boss. I remember there was a novel called Starting from Naruto and Becoming the Mastermind at Qidian. I felt that the character of the protagonist was very suitable, or it could be said to be the character of Amon in Lord of Mysteries.

After all, I am a new author, and I have to study for exams every day. There are countless common problems among new writers, such as not having an outline, and my writing skills are not very good. I have been studying a lot online recently, and I found that the writing is stiff and stiff, and the writing is a bit broken. I am still in a hurry. It can only be said that I am crossing the river by feeling for the stones. Now I have to sort out the plot and outline. Don't worry, the author will keep saving the manuscript. His Taoism will never die and updates will always be there. Book lovers, just put them on the bookshelves to keep them, as long as they can't support the author to death [Salute] Also, the exam period is coming soon, and the author has to prepare for the exam.

It's good-looking, it's so good-looking. What makes me wonder is whether the protagonist will return to the original world after ascending to the top, and what will happen?

There are very few books written about all karma. I would like to support it with five stars regardless of emotion or reason. The writing is okay. I hope it won't stop updating.

? No, I was planning to raise one, why did it fail?

Why can't those things be done in advance? Wouldn't it also be possible to cause huge karma if those things are brought forward?

This writing style can only be said to be very good for a novice author, and the ideas are also what I happen to like to read, so I give it five stars. The only bad thing is the author. You should at least update it every few days, at least every two or three days, for example, every two days and every three days. Otherwise, it won't be enough to read.

Good looking, the second book Wan Ye The author added the world of Pirates and Naruto, both are Japanese comics.

The author must persevere under the erosion of time! ! !

Six lives and five lives, six lives and five lives

Very well written. (I'm not very good at commenting, that's all)

Good luck, really good

Gua, strong, strong and powerful [like]

In theory, heaven and hell in the first volume will be reborn even if they are destroyed.

I went, why did I hang up suddenly?

Not bad, not bad. Remarkably, I didn't smell it. AI's shit-smelling writing is already pretty good. But I don't know why your traffic is so low?

Interesting, you can observe it

It looks very good, I hope to continue

Come on, book writer

Great writing, awesome! ! ! ! ! !

Good luck to the author!

I don't know what to say. Anyway, keep going.

Support your imagination.

No, what's wrong? [Shock]

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? ? ?

I can't even update two chapters a day. It only takes three months to update about 50 chapters. I feel like I'm going to get cold at any time.

The author is talented. It would be better to write stories with peace of mind and less self-pleasure.

Author, why is your book gone?

Looking forward to looking forward to looking forward to