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Reader comments
It's pretty good, basically no problems. By the way, Sykes and Fubuki also need to be taken away [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] Oh, by the way, the protagonist's mental limiter has been unlocked. When will the physical limiter be unlocked? [Laughing evilly] Or remove the limiter mentally [laughing evilly] For example, from the AT position [laughing evilly]
There is also telepathy, which is basically your thoughts, your thoughts, rather than force as the main force. It is mainly about your thoughts, and the force is the secondary [face covering]. It is originally the spirit of the spirit, plus your thoughts, and the telepathy power formed by the combination of your thoughts [laughter]
Another point is, it's best not to write a partial group portrait until the end. This kind of unsightly [face covering] is not as good as describing the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine? [Awkward laugh]@Forbos Oh, by the way, why did you write about the divine body? You wouldn't write a breakthrough gene lock, just like a breakthrough limiter [laughing and crying]
It's pretty cool, the pace is fast, but not chaotic, just invincible
Just be a beast, be a beast, and even have a harem. My mother-in-law is coming, isn't it true that you write whatever you dream about? 666
So far, there are no poisonous points, it doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and there are many female protagonists. She is not the kind of stud who accepts every one she sees, which is quite refreshing. But now we have reached all the worlds, and there are more and more good-looking women. Let's see if we can keep it up.
It's a very good one-punch fanfic, it doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and the character settings are very close to the original work. The plot is not watered down. It's hard to imagine that there is so much content in only more than 20 chapters. It's a rare masterpiece. I recommend everyone to read it.
This is a good one-punch fan work, and the characters in it are not OOC. Saitama's character is very consistent with the original work. It can be seen that the author has paid attention to it. The first 30 chapters are very exciting, but the introduction of a different world later makes it difficult to understand. Shi Kuan, who can only throw a few mountains, can actually break the Boros defense. . . I seriously suspected that someone had changed, and I didn't bother to look at it later.
The scolding in the comment section is probably not for punching, so don't pay attention to it.
It's so "amazingly good" that everyone should read this book! "Save the book shortage!" "It's simply a god among gods!" "I have never seen such an awesome book in my life." The author really has something good about him. "Everyone who has read it said it is good." I really can't imagine how the author wrote this awesome thing. It's really awesome. I also heard from people I know that the author seems to have lost his parents since he was a child. Everyone should take care of the author. After all, it's not easy for the daughter to live until now. Remember to mention the author's support to prevent the author from thinking about it one day and the book will not be updated. Of course, I said take care of the author, "There is no other meaning."
It's very well written, but it feels like it develops a little too fast. I don't know if the author has a good outline, but I have to say that it's really very interesting. The heroine of Tornado is so cute
It's so cool. It's an excellent fanfic written in One Punch. It's just that there are too few of them now. As far as it goes, it's very good-looking and its combat power is invincible. But I don't know if the plot will fall apart. Come on, author!
It doesn't stress the combat power, and it also looks better.
When I looked at the comment section, what happened? Why are so many people criticizing this book as not good reading? Anyone else tell me how much it cost? Five-star praise. I only looked at the front. It was okay if I slept in the front. I didn't read the rest.
Not bad, not overwhelming, this is my type
I have an idea, since you are so mentally strong, can you seize the precious jade from the body?
It's cool enough, not too poisonous, doesn't overwhelm combat power, and is not a glass cannon [Like]
Good
A masterpiece, no need to say more. [Like]
This is the emperor's uncle! [Sinister smile]
Good looking. Love to see more.
I feel like this is okay.
Purely neutral, no evaluation, as long as it is not messy and can be viewed
After reading it, I felt very comfortable.
It's very beautiful. Come on, the author, I hope you can stick with it and don't stop updating.
It's fast-paced, not stressful to stand up, and can also eat meat. It's very comfortable to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard [laughing evilly] If you don't let me know, I will download it [laughing evilly]
Undoubtedly strong, unparalleled good-looking
But does the author need to lower his score?
It's okay, a little bit naughty
It looks good, no need to say more
Let me see what happens.
Okay, okay, worth a look
It looks okay
A very well written book.
The Seven Gods of War of the Wild Book King
The best thing I've seen so far
Very nice and a good book
It's a bit interesting. I have developed my mind power. You can learn from Chen Laomo.
Very pretty [like]
It's pretty good, basically no problems. By the way, Sykes and Fubuki also need to be taken away [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] Oh, by the way, the protagonist's mental limiter has been unlocked. When will the physical limiter be unlocked? [Laughing evilly] Or remove the limiter mentally [laughing evilly] For example, from the AT position [laughing evilly] There is also telepathy, which is basically your thoughts, your thoughts, rather than force as the main force. It is mainly about your thoughts, and the force is the secondary [face covering]. It is originally the spirit of the spirit, plus your thoughts, and the telepathy power formed by the combination of your thoughts [laughter] Another point is, it's best not to write a partial group portrait until the end. This kind of unsightly [face covering] is not as good as describing the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine? [Awkward laugh]@Forbos Oh, by the way, why did you write about the divine body? You wouldn't write a breakthrough gene lock, just like a breakthrough limiter [laughing and crying]
It's pretty cool, the pace is fast, but not chaotic, just invincible Just be a beast, be a beast, and even have a harem. My mother-in-law is coming, isn't it true that you write whatever you dream about? 666
So far, there are no poisonous points, it doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and there are many female protagonists. She is not the kind of stud who accepts every one she sees, which is quite refreshing. But now we have reached all the worlds, and there are more and more good-looking women. Let's see if we can keep it up.
It's a very good one-punch fanfic, it doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and the character settings are very close to the original work. The plot is not watered down. It's hard to imagine that there is so much content in only more than 20 chapters. It's a rare masterpiece. I recommend everyone to read it. This is a good one-punch fan work, and the characters in it are not OOC. Saitama's character is very consistent with the original work. It can be seen that the author has paid attention to it. The first 30 chapters are very exciting, but the introduction of a different world later makes it difficult to understand. Shi Kuan, who can only throw a few mountains, can actually break the Boros defense. . . I seriously suspected that someone had changed, and I didn't bother to look at it later. The scolding in the comment section is probably not for punching, so don't pay attention to it.
It's so "amazingly good" that everyone should read this book! "Save the book shortage!" "It's simply a god among gods!" "I have never seen such an awesome book in my life." The author really has something good about him. "Everyone who has read it said it is good." I really can't imagine how the author wrote this awesome thing. It's really awesome. I also heard from people I know that the author seems to have lost his parents since he was a child. Everyone should take care of the author. After all, it's not easy for the daughter to live until now. Remember to mention the author's support to prevent the author from thinking about it one day and the book will not be updated. Of course, I said take care of the author, "There is no other meaning."
It's very well written, but it feels like it develops a little too fast. I don't know if the author has a good outline, but I have to say that it's really very interesting. The heroine of Tornado is so cute
It's so cool. It's an excellent fanfic written in One Punch. It's just that there are too few of them now. As far as it goes, it's very good-looking and its combat power is invincible. But I don't know if the plot will fall apart. Come on, author!
It doesn't stress the combat power, and it also looks better. When I looked at the comment section, what happened? Why are so many people criticizing this book as not good reading? Anyone else tell me how much it cost? Five-star praise. I only looked at the front. It was okay if I slept in the front. I didn't read the rest.
Not bad, not overwhelming, this is my type
I have an idea, since you are so mentally strong, can you seize the precious jade from the body?
It's cool enough, not too poisonous, doesn't overwhelm combat power, and is not a glass cannon [Like]
Good
A masterpiece, no need to say more. [Like] This is the emperor's uncle! [Sinister smile]
Good looking. Love to see more.
I feel like this is okay.
Purely neutral, no evaluation, as long as it is not messy and can be viewed
After reading it, I felt very comfortable.
It's very beautiful. Come on, the author, I hope you can stick with it and don't stop updating.
It's fast-paced, not stressful to stand up, and can also eat meat. It's very comfortable to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard [laughing evilly] If you don't let me know, I will download it [laughing evilly]
Undoubtedly strong, unparalleled good-looking But does the author need to lower his score?
It's okay, a little bit naughty
It looks good, no need to say more
Let me see what happens.
Okay, okay, worth a look
It looks okay
A very well written book.
The Seven Gods of War of the Wild Book King
The best thing I've seen so far
Very nice and a good book
It's a bit interesting. I have developed my mind power. You can learn from Chen Laomo. Very pretty [like]