No system, no heroine (tentative), no time travel.
This is the story of Li Qingshan and the Qingshan Sect.
It is also the world of Eastern immortals in my heart.
The story is very flat in the early stage and will unfold slowly.
Reader comments
That's the taste. The book overall is very good. It has the flavor of ancient immortality cultivation. There are no fancy settings. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in today's various imaginative environments. It is purely about becoming stronger while cultivating immortality.
After reading the latest chapter, the overall feeling is still very good. For me, the biggest advantage is that it has a strong flavor of cultivating immortals. There are no crazy ideas and no fancy settings. Nowadays, all the settings and imagination are really tired.
But there are definitely still shortcomings. The protagonist's character is still not distinctive enough. If I remember correctly, the protagonist has not made a joke so far. The plot is bland and can be watched but to be honest, it is not interesting enough and lacks spices. For example, plain water is best to quench thirst, but you also need drinks to change the taste. The characterization should not be too decent. Everyone can also have some shortcomings. For example, he is lustful but not obscene.
There is also the writing technique. The author likes to over-describe and over-describe, and there is a glint in the eye that is easy to criticize. This kind of thing happens too often.
Of course, this is just my personal feeling and does not represent all readers. It may be just personal pretension. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
Just look and that's it
I read a chapter and found it interesting. Let's take a look.
I've read more than 20 chapters and it's okay.
That's the taste. The book overall is very good. It has the flavor of ancient immortality cultivation. There are no fancy settings. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in today's various imaginative environments. It is purely about becoming stronger while cultivating immortality. After reading the latest chapter, the overall feeling is still very good. For me, the biggest advantage is that it has a strong flavor of cultivating immortals. There are no crazy ideas and no fancy settings. Nowadays, all the settings and imagination are really tired. But there are definitely still shortcomings. The protagonist's character is still not distinctive enough. If I remember correctly, the protagonist has not made a joke so far. The plot is bland and can be watched but to be honest, it is not interesting enough and lacks spices. For example, plain water is best to quench thirst, but you also need drinks to change the taste. The characterization should not be too decent. Everyone can also have some shortcomings. For example, he is lustful but not obscene. There is also the writing technique. The author likes to over-describe and over-describe, and there is a glint in the eye that is easy to criticize. This kind of thing happens too often. Of course, this is just my personal feeling and does not represent all readers. It may be just personal pretension. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
Just look and that's it
I read a chapter and found it interesting. Let's take a look. I've read more than 20 chapters and it's okay.