Western Fantasy: the Straight Male Knight Lingers on Me

Well, it's like a male video versus a female video. The pace is very fast, and the writing tends to focus on the emotional line and is more secretive. It can be said that it satisfies people who want to watch both male and female videos. Overall, the two male protagonists are very neat and tidy without being whiny or anything. It's not as straightforward as other dual-male protagonist stories where the genders are changed, but the overall role in the relationship remains the same. Really, I've always wanted to complain. In some stories, the male protagonist is written to be more female than the female, like Xiangxiang's cute little p. What's so disgusting? This book is well written [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Beautiful! The protagonist is rational and decisive but not the Holy Father, which is great! After entering the city, it didn't look as good as during the adventure in the forest. The highlight gradually shifted from the protagonist to the attacker, and the protagonist felt a bit reduced to a foil. I originally thought that the protagonist finally got the potion book and could develop new skills. －－－－－－ Start high and go low, and add 3 slutty characters from the adventure team. Now they are focusing on being a nanny. Looking at the development later, the protagonist should also step by step towards the destination of being a free nanny.

A lot of people always make irresponsible remarks about the word "nanny article", which I really don't understand. If you really want to be logical, in a relationship of sincere companionship and walking together, the stronger person will instinctively protect the temporarily weak companion around him. When everyone reads the story, the strong person can calmly accept the protagonist's efforts to pave the way, provide opportunities, and offer golden fingers. How come the protagonist takes the initiative to help people around him and distributes resources to his companions, and is labeled as a nanny in the story? Readers who prefer mindless and solitary novels don't have to force themselves. The Tomato platform, which only revolves around the protagonist, has a large number of streamlined novels that are more in line with your reading preferences. This article itself follows the path of group portraits. Most of the supporting characters have complete roles and will appear repeatedly in the future. There are reunions and separations, and the ups and downs of the bonds between people are the core of this article. A good story is never qualified only if it is a one-man show that focuses on the protagonist throughout. The supporting characters should not just be tools to set off the aura of the protagonist.

It is a very novel article that combines male and female stories in a sophisticated way. What is commendable is that the emotional line does not appear to be abrupt. Although the writing is relatively green, the plot can be supplemented. This is also the usual method for male stories. However, the plot design dropped significantly after entering the city. From my point of view, the Golden Clover adventurer and the fangs lack attractions, the logic is obviously reduced and the protagonist is out of touch. To put it bluntly, the poisonous points are greater than the pleasant points. There are also some flaws in the character creation. Contradictions in plot, characters, etc. Are the key elements to attract readers. The author may wish to boldly add contradictions, whether it is the protagonist's personality, plot design, or emotional line. A plain plot that is divorced from the emotional line is very fatal. Since this article is characterized by a male channel carrying a female channel, you might as well stick to it. For a simple example, from the perspective of the protagonist, the main choice is small skeletons in the early stage, and large ones in the middle and late stages. The incremental changes have made some readers uncomfortable. As far as the character of the protagonist is concerned, being too kind will appear indecisive, but it cannot destroy human nature. There is a degree, that is, a principle. The overall contradiction between the personality differences of the two male protagonists and the contradiction in the emotional line is a good entry point. Of course, this is just a small suggestion. The key lies in the plot design. Maybe a relative main line can be added? Extend corresponding subplots and emotional lines? In fact, when it comes to reviews, I tend to hesitate between three and four stars. There are many male videos and they are mixed. Most of them are really too lazy to rate or think more carefully. It is really difficult for female video writers, so it is okay. I usually give five stars, but this one is not pure, and there are indeed some flaws in the plot, so in the end I will give it four stars. Finally, I still hope that the author can read my comments (I think it is relatively pertinent and objective). I did read this article for a while, so I am still very sorry for the decline in the quality of the plot (I will decide whether to adopt the suggestion, maybe the author has other plans? Just pretend I didn't say it [laughs]) Finally, I wish this book a good result (after all, novel articles are rare, haha) Come on [Like] [Like]

It's very good-looking, and it's updated every day. Although it's not perfect, it's still considered a high-quality product in Tomato. And I read the bad reviews, don't you know this is a female-channeled female-channeled female-channeled female-channeled essay? [Laughing and crying] What are you asking for with the fast-paced and refreshing male-channeled content? The emotional description between the two male protagonists is also very delicate, which is quite good. This is a highlight. And we can't just start scolding Xiaobai for writing too much about Resuzel just because he appeared early. Look forward to the subsequent plot development, author, come on!

Some people say that the protagonist works as a nanny and carries three bottles of oil. Well, actually I don't think much of this, but the protagonist is portrayed as flesh and blood, not a pure monster. There are also those who say the writing is not good, well, I thought someone would say this book is not good, but I never thought it would be for this reason. I think I have read a lot of books of this type on Tomato. In comparison, I still think this writing is pretty good, but I feel comfortable reading it at the moment. From other aspects, this article is very suitable to my taste. I like the settings, plot and the author's writing style. It can be regarded as the alternation between daily life and combat. This kind of sometimes loose and sometimes tense can give people a certain sense of freshness. My opinion is, no Two people come up and get together (this is one of the things I hate the most). You are not here to read cool articles. It is best to read this book by yourself. Even though I am not good at words, I still hope to be able to help you who are looking for books. Thank you for watching✌🏻️

At present, I have tied it and I have continued to chase it for a while. There are no surprises. I am very happy. I am very picky. I can't read many popular books. It must be fun where it should be. The protagonist suffers a lot. If I don't pull it in the later stage, I predict that the book will be rated higher than 9.3 In the future. The only thing that may be regarded as a surprise is that after the two protagonists enter the city, they want to join the adventure team for experience, but there is a requirement for the number of people. I was uncomfortable watching it at the time, and thought that being a nanny might affect the enjoyment. After watching it, I discovered that a large part of the plot later depends on this adventure team. Many of the slaps in the face are related to this adventure team, and it is not too much. The family disputes between the members of the adventure team, and it is quite refreshing to watch the protagonist abuse the genius haha. To follow up again, the protagonist and the adventure team are a bit like poverty alleviation. Those who don't like it can eat it and run away (the specific situation is that every time the protagonist helps the adventure team, he does not need to repay, but when the protagonist asks for help, he will give good things. Although the people in the adventure team said no, they still gave it in the end, and the main character Every time the character requests something, it is actually beneficial to the people in the adventure team, and the benefits are huge. It is obviously a process of sharing risks and enjoying benefits, but the protagonist has to throw out extra benefits every time. In short, it is really a bit like poverty alleviation, and it may not be good for some protagonists.)

It's so beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this kind of golden-fingered protagonist. She has wheat-colored skin. It really hits my mark. I beg you for more updates [Adoration]

It's a very good Western fantasy novel. I like the story of a young couple who adventures together from the beginning. There won't be a problem of one being the main character and neglecting the other. The dual male protagonists should have a good relationship! The main story and emotional development are equally important! ! Ps. It seems that the two male protagonists, one focusing on wisdom and the other focusing on force, complement each other very well. I also hope that the author can pay more attention to the wording and avoid using words that are too oriental, such as hour, inn and so on. .

What I like is the setting of magic + two male protagonists. Neither of them fall in love at first sight, but the relationship gradually heats up, and both have the bud of love in their hearts. This kind of love but uncertainty is awesome, plus both parties are working hard to enhance their own strength while seeing the wonders of the world and exploring the other side of the world. It's simply perfect! ! ! Come on, author! This novel will definitely reach the top of the list, so be sure to update it every day! Looking forward to updates every day..[Blow kiss]

It's really good-looking. The protagonist is the kind of person who is normal in the Western fantasy world where the weak and the strong eat the strong, but has the compassion of modern society, and will not be too much. I really like this one. I look forward to the boss's update. It's delicious😋😋😋😋

The setting is relatively novel [Thinking], and it feels a bit like an upgrade in the early stage, which makes it more comfortable to watch. The protagonist changes very quickly. He can travel from a student who is about to take the college entrance examination to a place like that. He has good intentions, but he is not a virgin. Although there are two male protagonists, I still believe that Bai Anli is the orthodox protagonist. I hope the author can give him more roles [I almost cried]. Resuzel's image is also quite plump. Bai Anli came to the city and felt that his strength had not even improved significantly. If this were the case with Bai Anli, I would rather he met another protagonist later [almost crying] [almost crying]. I didn't say that Resuzel was not good. I just think that the orthodox protagonist is more important. I hope the author can give him more plot [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's good to watch. In the upgrade flow, the emotional line is proportional. At least the other male protagonist appears not too late, and he still pulls the two male protagonists to one place step by step. In the double male protagonist, there is a plot and the supporting characters are flesh and blood. It does not distract the focus of the protagonist too much, and some supporting characters are well created. I don't think the protagonist should be a nanny or anything. First of all, he is strongly bound to another male protagonist. He needs his blood every time he evolves. Secondly, it is a rational use of resources. If the protagonist only buys an extraction scroll for himself, he will not have his exclusive high-quality and low-priced primary potions. And the male protagonist really needs weapons and combat skills. Secondly, it is impossible for a person to fight alone to collect precious materials in six months. Finally, the protagonist naturally develops a friendship while getting along with each other.

I like it~ It's a dual-male protagonist with male porn style. It's fun to have a career, and it's twice as fun to have a career together. I've read more than 80 chapters so far, and the protagonist is still developing. His career and skills have only begun to develop, and his relationship has taken a long way to develop, but it has tied... Alas. The writing is good, the author is skilled, the pace is slow, and the setting unfolds with the plot. I haven't read the rest of it yet, I will review it after reading it.

Nice! Love watching! There is no over-description of the character's appearance at all, the female characters are not mindless and the male characters are not mentally retarded to find faults. The plot is completely based on the development of the character's position. The overall look is very comfortable and natural. A great article that I highly recommend to everyone! ! ! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Generally speaking, it's okay. It's a type of long-form fantasy novel with two male protagonists that is relatively rare. Currently, the two protagonists are a bit kind, and the two protagonists are not decisive enough to kill. The protagonist of the little skeleton used to be a high school student, and I can barely understand it. The other protagonist is also more righteous, but in In this western fantasy long-form upgrade flow, in the context of the strong being respected, the early stage was a bit frustrating. For example, the protagonist tried his best to stun the enemy without killing it. What impressed me deeply was that one of the more poisonous points was the fang. He tried to kill the protagonist twice, but the protagonist let him go. Well, the protagonist and they have also added a team. The other three people in the team are pretty ordinary. I haven't seen anything outstanding so far. It's just like the two protagonists and three ordinary people. I don't feel that they have much potential. I feel that they don't get much stronger even if they become stronger. I feel that if you want to write a group portrait, they shouldn't all be the proud ones. For example, each has his own potential. , If divided, each is king, but if united, the world is invincible, such as the Shrek Seven Monsters in Douluo Continent, etc., It is too ordinary, without that kind of attraction, I will only feel that the two protagonists are carrying a few oil bottles, and there are no poisonous points in the emotional line. I hope you will continue to work hard, push forward, and it is best to optimize the people you meet after the protagonist. [Sending Hearts]

The author's writing style is online, the plot is compact, the characters of the two male protagonists are relatively full, and the supporting characters are also full of flesh and blood. In particular, I like the author to write some of the supporting female characters with characteristics and their growth can be seen. I feel very comfortable. The emotional line is a bit slow but I think it is reasonable. Although it is not very close and there is no mutual understanding at the moment, the small details, ambiguities and psychological descriptions are still very interesting. Destiny has connected the two people. They are both paying for each other and trusting each other. The gold finger I received was also very satisfying, and it received good reviews. I am still growing up like a puppy. I love you so much. It doesn't matter, baby. Your wife loves you so much. Hehe. Personally, I feel that the author is getting more and more energetic in writing. In the early stage, I felt a little embarrassed in some places. Later, I bought some to equalize it and found it really interesting to read! Come on, author, the rating will come up. This article should have a rating of nine or above.

Nice! A book with a very normal outlook! The plot is a bit cliche in the early stages, but becomes more and more interesting as I read it, and I read it from morning to night without even realizing it! Super nice teeth! I want to see all of Chapter 3 now😭😭😭😭😭😭! ! And this is not a nanny article! Can making friends and connecting with each other to help each other be called a nanny? Some of the negative reviews are really baffling. This book is indeed not perfect. There is one word that is used too frequently, and there are also some places where the description is a bit strange, but it is absolutely flawless. It is not because of a little unpleasantness that you deny the entire book or even insult it in a negative review.

I think they are the two men with the most normal and well-written emotional lines that I have seen in 🍅. There is no sudden plot where they fall in love at first sight and fight to the death for each other. Everything is logical and the characters have distinct personalities. The main thing is that the main plot is very enjoyable to watch. There is no very frustrating plot. Although it is not smooth sailing, I don't feel stomachache at all.

Wow, I haven't seen such a good Western fantasy novel in a long time, and it has two male protagonists! The most important thing is that the plot progresses slowly and has the flavor of a male video. The writing is also very good, it's really good, it's fine rice! [Like][Like]

It's so good. I especially like reading this type of Western fantasy novel. Mainly writing plots and emotional spices. The protagonist's control of the field is awesome, and the battle scenes are all written in a very high-burning and graphic way. It is not a mindless and cool text. Anli slowly grows and learns and becomes stronger and stronger through tempering. Anli and Ruisu99. The world background is also well written, and there is no sense of illogical logic. I almost read this book from the first chapter in one breath. Fortunately, this book is a long article and I enjoyed reading it. The author insists on updating, I will keep following it [please update]

It's really good to watch and I really like the way these two people get along. They fight side by side, consider each other, take care of each other, and grow with each other. Their relationship is slowly getting along through battles and escapes again and again. Although there are very few emotional lines described, in their daily interactions, from their conversations and thinking, it can be seen that they cherish each other. They are not each other's drag, but each other's harbor. Moreover, the description of the battle plot in this book is super top-notch, and it looks really enjoyable. It is not the kind of nonsense. An An's image is that of a mysterious, reliable, and super sure-footed person. Zell has the image of a big boy who is resolute, calm, and a little shy when facing An An. Anyway, the two of them match up well, and I really like watching them get along.

Now I am reading the first chapter of the second volume. The first volume is really good. The two male protagonists are growing up. Bai Anli is adapting to the rules of the Western fantasy world, and Resuzel is also adapting to his new identity. There may not be too many ups and downs in the plot, but the ordinary daily life, upgrading and finding materials, meeting some partners, and adding money-making skills (potions) are all good, and there will be sacrifices of partners in it T_T (this part is very painful to watch). Overall, it makes me want to read more. Come on, author, don't stop updating. Please ♡ please ♡ you ♡ (人'∀'*)+♡

I left a comment after reading the first volume. The well-written Western fantasy novel about the two male protagonists, their reliance on each other to grow together, and the description of the characters around them are all very appealing to me. Compared with other dual male protagonists, the emotional line is slower but progresses step by step without being abrupt. The plot progress is not too fast but not draggy at all. I really like this smooth and long-lasting feeling. I would like to express my gratitude to the author here. As a reader, I am very happy to see such a beautiful article. Thank you to the author for your hard work! I will continue to support you in the future!

Overall, it's pretty good. It gets more exciting as you go to the end. The only drawback is that it's a little bit Madonna in the early stage, and there's also the Venomous Fang of the adventure team. But after all, they are both good young men who have never killed anyone. They must have a sense of justice in their hearts from the beginning. It also grew up a lot later on. I saw the changes in the characters. They were very decisive in killing, neither too evil nor too kind. It was very good. There were also many battle scenes. I felt very happy watching it. It's just too short. I hope I can write 3 million words to give it a closer look. I plan to keep it for a while, and I tied it in two days.

It's really, really, really good to watch. I watched it last night before going to bed, and then I watched it desperately, and then I almost tied it all. The writing is very delicate, and the emotional line gave me the feeling of "simmering slowly." Everything happened naturally, without any abruptness. All the settings, plots, and emotional lines are all serving the world. The setting is very complete. I personally think it can be used as a game. I think it is great [already planted][already planted] Then there is our protagonist, Bai Anli, who fits my imagination of the necromancer, with the feeling of "Pale Lord" and "Gloomy Lord", and our little brother Ruisu gives me the impression that he is a paladin ➕ warrior ➕ weapons master, handsome and reliable. The two protagonists of this book have very complete growth arcs [Bird Food Masterpiece] [Bird Food Master Work] I have been thinking about it a lot, and I hope that the author will never give up or stop updating, please, please, otherwise I will be depressed to death [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

It's super good-looking. It has the plot of a male channel and the emotions of a female channel. In my opinion, it can get a score of more than 9 points when it is finished. Those who love to read cultivation articles are in luck. This article is rare. It has a Western cultivation system, a grand world view, a great magic system, and a very novel subject matter. And the updates are stable and updated every day.

It's a Western fantasy novel with a very good pacing and a sense of romance. It's so enjoyable to read it in one go. Although the emotional line is stable, it is flowing slowly. To read this article, you need to follow the traditional writing ideas. First, watch the upgrading flow to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. Then taste some subtle emotional changes in a large number of upgrades and fight monsters. Uu Meng who likes the ups and downs of the dog-blood type will be a little acclimated. Generally speaking, the two of them have smoothly entered the mode of an old married couple while constantly fighting side by side, so the early version of the young knight is particularly precious (I will miss it forever. Jpg). When I write this, I can't help but think of Samurai Flamenco. This is also a story in which the protagonists constantly fight side by side, heal each other's past pain, and finally move towards a happy future. It is also very delicious. It's a bit far-fetched, and I look forward to the author's follow-up stories of knights and undead.

This book is really good. First of all, I read a lot of reviews and said that the male protagonist Resuzel is like a nanny in this book, taking care of the team members. In fact, I read it and found that this part of the plot is about 100 chapters (I read it roughly here, maybe a little more). I am reading it now and it is almost 500 chapters. This book The proportion of sub-plots is not very large. If it is divided into volumes, it is just a chapter. In fact, everyone has parts of a book that they do not like, but it does not hinder the quality of other plots. If you just simply enlarge a certain part to evaluate each novel, then there will be very few truly perfect novels. If you really want to find a novel to read, then please read it slowly Another thing to say is that Bai Anli is very accommodating to Ruisuzel. I think this is a matter of cultural differences. Bai Anli has traveled through time. In our culture, love is implicit. It may not be expressed directly, but it is meticulous care and silence. I can understand your feelings and understand you. Then let's change together for the better. The background that Resuzel wrote is that of the European Middle Ages. In foreign countries, when they express their love, they express their love with such enthusiasm. I want to tell you right away, and I want you to know my emotions. This kind of cultural difference seems a bit awkward. I feel that Bai Anli is accommodating, but in fact it is just two people trying to get along. And I don't think that Resuzel's experience in the adventure team was just being a nanny. I think it still depends on what a person has gone through. At that time, Resuzel realized the darkness of the Holy See of Blessed Light and was betrayed by his relatives. I think this is the time for his values ​​and worldview to be reshaped. Just like Xiangzi in "Camel Xiangzi", he went from being very active in working and having dreams in his heart, to finally becoming numb and decadent. This is the result of his reshaping of values ​​​​again and again in major changes. At this time, Bai Anli asked Resuzel to go to the adventure team so that he would be less exposed to the black market and let him get in touch with the adventure team. I think this was a transitional period. This period taught Resuzel not to be as rigid and upright as before, but to become flexible and ruthless. At the same time, taking care of the team members also allowed him to retain the friendly and kind qualities in his heart. Some people may find the daily life of being a nanny boring, but everyone's character is developed in daily life, not in big scenes.

From readers who have given up on it for a while since it was not popular, I have nothing to say about the plot. I personally think it is perfect and more authentic and ancient than other Western fantasy novels. I read what others said about "nanny stories", but I didn't think it looked like a nanny. If I did, I could analyze the thoughts and current situation of the two people at that time. I am a reader who mainly reads love flow novels, so I would like to comment on the love flow. I added that the two confessed, and now, the slow-burning emotional line is similar to the two-way redemption. It is two hearts slowly getting closer, and the true love runs through the whole text. The gentle daily companionship heals the wounds of the two hearts. How to say, like two injured animals, tied together for survival, in the long When we spend time together, we will lick each other's wounds, protect each other, worry about each other, care about each other, and open our hearts to each other. The pain in the past will be scabbed by each other, and the inner uneasiness will be healed by companionship. Besides, the twin contract makes them become lovers even if they don't talk about each other. They are each other's only special existence. I feel that this is "destined". From the moment Ruisu helped Bai Anli make a choice, their fates were entangled together. Their fates were entangled and their breaths blended. They had long been inseparable from each other. The entire emotional line was generally very good, and there was a sense of naturalness that came naturally. I hope they can all be happy, especially Bai Anli. Looking forward, you have already been reborn. Finally, I wish the author to be happy every day and make a lot of money. Don't give up on this book, because no matter whether you are new or old, or those who abandon books and go back to the pit like me, they all like this book ❤️So don't give up (Tonic feels weird to me QAQ)