[Longevity] [Slow-Paced] [White Hair Is the Best] [No Marriage, No Yuri] [Invincible] [Travel] [Alternate History] [Slice of Life] [Little Girl Protagonist]
People have wondered what it would be like to live forever, yet spend their whole lives chasing something they can never attain.
But she had long since tasted every facet of it.
To others, Longevity was an unattainable dream. To her, it was nothing out of the ordinary.
She had watched civilization rise from ignorance, reason flourish amid conflict, dynasties rise, and the chaos of troubled times unfold…
Her name was Qian Zhu. Immortal and indestructible, she walked alone through the long expanse of history.
“Are you saying this newly founded country is different from all the ones before it?”
“That’s right. It will usher in an entirely new era. The prosperous age countless people have longed for is just around the corner!”
Having lost hope in the world, she had sat alone for decades at an inn beyond the frontier, until a white horse arrived and told the people there that the world had changed beyond recognition.
Because of a promise, she decided to take another look at the world.
Hiding her white hair, she set out from the deserts of the far north, crossed the frontier pass, entered the capital, and traveled south of the Yangtze…
Her journey had no end. Her only purpose was to witness and remember, one by one, the many faces of humanity and every form of suffering.
How should I put it, the writing style is relatively mature and practical, but the plot structure of the story is relatively bland. The first one is not suitable for the short-term and fast market of tomatoes. If I were you, I probably wouldn't write Huo Qingchen as the first chapter, because you will find that obviously deleting or not deleting this chapter will have no impact on the main plot of the story, and it is very suitable to be written as a side story. The second point is about the cool points of Changshengwen, which are not very clear. The protagonist is indeed an immortal person, but a very important and enjoyable part of the immortality novel is to see those who are already older and get to know the protagonist. That's one of the cool things. Maybe the author hasn't written it here yet, but with more than 200,000, the overall reading is relatively dull. It is suitable for reading slowly when you have time. However, it is obviously not suitable for the online article market where there is a climax in the first few chapters. I don't know whether the author wants to make money or write what he likes. All in all, as a story, the writing is okay, although it looks a bit anxious, and the updates may not be too fast. But generally speaking, the writing style is relatively sophisticated, and it is suitable for people who have time to calm down and take a look.
The longevity text with personal characteristics is relatively slow and relaxed overall, and can be consumed as a lubricant in life. In addition, the author's writing style is also my favorite style, so let me continue to evaluate it before publishing a follow-up review.
Nice! The story is really well told, and it's as interesting as watching Frilian without magic.
A very good book. Bland, but true.