The Century-Old News About the Immortal White-Haired Lolita

How should I put it, the writing style is relatively mature and practical, but the plot structure of the story is relatively bland. The first one is not suitable for the short-term and fast market of tomatoes. If I were you, I probably wouldn't write Huo Qingchen as the first chapter, because you will find that obviously deleting or not deleting this chapter will have no impact on the main plot of the story, and it is very suitable to be written as a side story. The second point is about the cool points of Changshengwen, which are not very clear. The protagonist is indeed an immortal person, but a very important and enjoyable part of the immortality novel is to see those who are already older and get to know the protagonist. That's one of the cool things. Maybe the author hasn't written it here yet, but with more than 200,000, the overall reading is relatively dull. It is suitable for reading slowly when you have time. However, it is obviously not suitable for the online article market where there is a climax in the first few chapters. I don't know whether the author wants to make money or write what he likes. All in all, as a story, the writing is okay, although it looks a bit anxious, and the updates may not be too fast. But generally speaking, the writing style is relatively sophisticated, and it is suitable for people who have time to calm down and take a look.

The longevity essay with personal characteristics, the overall rhythm is relatively slow and relaxed, and can be consumed as a lubricant in life. In addition, the author's writing style is also my favorite style, so let me continue to evaluate it before publishing a follow-up review.

Nice! The story is really well told, and it's as interesting as watching Frilian without magic.

A very good book. Bland, but true.