Demon Slayer: Awakening the Tremor-Tremor Fruit

I sincerely commented on it. First of all, it is a good first book as an author. The biggest problem in this book is the setting of the power system. The pirate's set in the Demon Slayer World must be a super model. Either weaken the Haki and fruits, or strengthen Demon Slayer. It is also necessary to clarify the intensity of strengthening or weakening. For example, the transparent world can be compared with Roger's listening to all things. Personally, I think it is enough to add Haki to the setting. The novice gift pack does not require Devil Fruits, but replaces it with six-style proficiency. Two-color Haki and Haki training methods will be better. The teaching pillar masters the return of life, and coupled with Zhu Shi's medical skills, then the side effects of the stripes can definitely be solved. If so many Devil Fruits are not written well, it will be a burden. And in terms of relationships, the author is a little too lethargic 😂 Looking at other comments, I think it's okay to accept or not accept the protagonist. Shinobu must have family affection > admiration for the protagonist, and Shinobu does have a crush on Giyuu. Personally, I don't think this is considered a gift. My definition of giving a girl away is something like "Xiao Li's flying knife". I hope the author's future books will get better and better ❤️ @

Rogue enough, I like it

It's good. Tragedy has been avoided.

If you don't delve into some details, it's really good.

Not bad, good book 👍👍👍