Become**********

Come on, the writing seems to be above average at the moment, but the writing style does feel a bit awkward. I have only read about 50 chapters so far. Overall, it is okay. The psychological description does take up a bit too much space, but I personally can accept it, but I still hope to improve it. I have read two-thirds of the book, and the author is really good at designing twists and turns in the plot. From the looks of it, the tone of the book is always going up and down, or in other words, it is always pushing the main line. After watching it in one breath, the emotions rise and fall along with the protagonist's mental journey. It is understandable that after all, the scope of urban background creation is indeed limited, otherwise it would easily become a running list. And although it is definitely too late to say that I have finished preparing the book, it would be great if the turning points in the plot stages could be written slower (write a little plot and small daily events in each stage to smooth the transition). Giving the protagonist some buffer time also gives readers some buffer time. I believe it can give readers a better reading experience. (Actually, the rhythm in the early stages is pretty good, but the middle and later stages are obviously very anxious. Maybe it's because I didn't get good grades, so I wanted to finish it earlier, alas.)

Good time, place and people To be honest, this book feels like it has a foundation in the works of great masters. It's a pity that the time is wrong. I'm too old. This book seems to have been written 10 years ago. I almost wondered if it was a sealed book from the previous Qidian that was moved. It can only be said that it is a pity that there is no time Checked the homepage and update time It's almost certain that it's either transportation or AI. The quantity is large and the tube is full. It is a super fine fine rice bran. If you don't mind the cliche plot and the female-oriented style, you can join it without thinking. 10,000 Times better than being slapped in the face and pretending to be cool

Overall it's good, just keep updating it steadily! The psychological description is a bit too much and messy, and I feel like I can't bring into the protagonist's evolving heart. The author must have just passed through the new stage, come on~

Isn't one of the main attractions of reading transformation novels is the psychological changes? The author writes it very well. Some people don't want to read this, why don't they just read the heroine novel? I'm really convinced. . . . . .

It's very interesting, good luck to the author! Some places need to be patched

It describes a very real reaction, unlike other novels, there is no fear of the unknown.

Yes, support, support, support

Good, good, good looking

The details are too detailed.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty good, but there's a bit too much psychological description. It's obvious that the author has an outline.

From what we can see so far, the main reason is that the protagonist's personality is a bit awkward, and Su's emotions are only limited to observation. It makes me feel a little uncomfortable, but the problem is not big~

It's okay. It's not that I can't read it, but it sounds a little uncomfortable in some places when I listen to it.

The description of the characters is meticulous, the content is interesting, and the updates are stable.

It looks good, and the quantity is okay. I'm adding it to my bookshelf. I hope I can see it and it won't leave my bookshelf before it's finished.

The writing is very good, but I don't know why the rating is a bit low. Can the author reveal approximately how much space there is left? It feels like it's almost over

The AI ​​traces are a little heavy, and the overall plot design is good. I have finished one tenth of the game so far. The relationship between the characters is a bit bland. I hope there will be a better plot.