The Alchemy Furnace Exploded, Senior Brother, Save Me!

It is a very sweet book about two men practicing in an imaginary dynasty. The author is very good at delicate emotional descriptions. There are many sweet places in the whole text. After reading the author's remarks at the end of the extra chapter, I think it is really outstanding that the author can write a work that has a sudden inspiration so sweetly. In terms of the plot, there are a few bugs, such as the small world behind the reincarnation mirror. The main text says it is a real world, but the extra dream says it is false. Then there is the relationship between Wei Qing and Feng Xiaoran (Wang Linfeng). Both the original protagonists died in the main story (the reincarnations in the extra story are sweetly together, which makes up for the regrets in the main text). The transition from Feng Xiaoran to Wang Linfeng was actually written in a hurry, lacking some foreshadowing, and the transition was a bit stiff. However, I have a high acceptance rate and quickly digested this problem. In the end, after coming out of the Mirror of Reincarnation, the two of them had their first real physical kiss and fell in love. There was also a lack of some foreshadowing, such as why the two of them transformed into gods and overcame the tribulation together. They could write some more foreshadowing of their previous memories. Apart from the above-mentioned problems, the whole thing is very sweet. The author also gave Wei Qing and Wang Linfeng a happy ending where their souls and bodies blend eternally sweetly. The small world of Wei Qing and Feng Xiaoran is reincarnated, which can be said to be very satisfying.

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Good looking, smooth plot

Good-looking, unexpected reversal, very fragrant setting 😳😳😳😳

After reading it, it's actually pretty good. Senior brother is stuck in an endless cycle of jealousy + asking for favors. Although I prefer the upgrade stream, this kind of purely emotional one is okay. What I didn't expect was that the author actually completed all the realms in the extra chapter 🤦 Okay, I just recently finished reading a book about the whole process of upgrading to become the only two controllers above the Immortal Lord. It was really about fighting monsters, fighting monsters, and leveling up, just in time for some sweet supplements.

The characters are three-dimensional and emotional. The protagonist has a good relationship. There is a car and a Mary Sue. In the early stage, the writing gave me a feeling of immature writing. After reading it, it is very good.

Although it is a fairy tale, the emotional line is very sincere, and it is not the feeling of falling in love for the sake of falling in love.

The prince is actually his elder brother in the previous life, and he is still jealous of himself. The plot is sweet, funny, and very top-notch.

The characters are very three-dimensional. The teacher wrote them well [KISS]

It's pretty good. I think the ambiguous period at the beginning is the best, but the later part is okay.