Demon Slayer: What If Kyojuro Were the Eldest Son of the Tsugikuni Family?

A very warm and powerful article. In fact, there are not many plots in Big Brother, but every seed sown by Big Brother is taking root and sprouting, and the tenacious children are saving themselves. Everyone is the protagonist. It also has a touch of fantasy. What I don't understand is that it's very advanced (serious). But I still hope there will be more plots for Big Brother! !

The writing style is light, but mixed with some of the author's unique humor. I feel that the author's vocabulary and knowledge reserve are very sufficient. I never thought that the collision between the third brother and the eldest brother, Yan Sheng, who is as bright as the bright moon, and Liu Xian, who is at the lowest level of society, will be so touching. I really feel a sense of fate. Brother, he is really white moonlight. At the same time, everyone's characters are not OOC, which makes people really feel that if Yan Sheng had not been too polluted by the dye vat of Jiguo, he would have looked like this. He is really a gentleman like the bright moon. The author loves you [blowing kiss] After reading the whole article, I feel that the shortcoming is that there is no transition between events. Of course, this is only a small problem. It would be best if it can be perfected. If it is not perfect, there is no big problem. Then, other readers have also mentioned it. It's too small an opinion. If the timeline is confusing, it's best to mark it in the introduction. That's all I have to say. I hope you will finish the whole book. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]. I will keep following up ヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ"

It's very touching, really, as if the characters come alive in the author's writing, and I can feel sorry for them. A good article can really arouse the reader's emotions. Madam, you are creating real hearts. Please keep writing. I like them very much in your writing. (Also: Madam's writing style is very good and it is very comfortable to read.) [Love]

This is the real moon. In order for his brothers to have support in the Demon Slayer Corps, he rebelled against the family leader at a young age and took on the important responsibility of the entire family; in order for his eldest brother to change his surname to Purgatory and bear the reputation of his jealous eldest son; in order to protect Yunu, he faced the samurai encirclement and suppression alone. He is no longer the twisted and jealous brother Shang Xueyi in the original novel, nor is he the weakly portrayed brother in the fanfic. The Lord Yan Sheng in the teacher's novel simply shines on the world like a bright moon. In addition, the sense of fate that the eldest brother saves Akasha and Soryu Dojo is also very good.

This book is so gentle. Even Tong Mo felt so sorry that I couldn't keep him alive. The actions of Xiaomei, Taro, Jiguo Yansheng, etc. Made me really feel good. Rihei To be honest, I love brotherhood, and I feel that this Big Brother has solved the problem of their getting along very well. I really hope that there will be other people in this Crescent Moon City who can heal the pillars or people or ghosts of parallel time and space, and see people I haven't seen for a long time, instead of having so many people die in the finale, seeing so many people leaving, and I can only cry when I win (┳◇┳)

Really nice to look at. In it, not only Iwakatsu and Enichi, who are the younger brothers of Anjuro, have their emotional and relationship problems solved, but even other poor Onizuki are also helped, such as Xiaomei, her brother, and the third brother are all helped and saved. Moreover, after being helped, Naru became the most special character here. I can only say that Naru is indeed the strongest supporter (´◊ω◊`) Later, the Crescent Moon City was built, which solved the problem of no misfortune. There was no ghost queen, and it also helped people in the future Taisho period, such as Qiang Usagi. He survived, and met Giyuu who would become a water pillar in the future, making Giyuu feel less guilty. There are also Butterfly sisters. Although one is a soul body and the other has become an insect pillar, at least the two sisters can meet each other, and they can miss each other less painfully. It feels great to see Butterfly Ninja who does not fake a smile.

Family members, it's a state banquet [crying] [crying] [crying] The teacher is a god. I'm so touched. My eldest brother is living with two lovely little stepmothers. It's so healing [crying] [crying] [crying] It's really beautiful!

The characters are very cute, and Yuanyi's dull personality is not broken. Yan Sheng dotes on his younger brother, and the eldest brother dotes on his two younger brothers. I think it's good. The original one is used as the youngest son in the family. It feels like the burden in the original work has been relieved and he is not so tired, which is good.

The "contradictions between people" that were avoided in the original work are brought out to clarify and heal. The "controversy between humans and ghosts" is the secondary conflict in the story. Everyone has a bright future!

It's well written and I feel like everyone has found their own meaning. Everyone is awakening. From just wanting to live to wanting to live well, everyone is working hard. It is well written and makes people feel warm and happy. You can create your own happiness.