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It's a rare cheerful and light-hearted fairy tale. Although the big brother who came out of seclusion is top-notch in cultivation, he doesn't treat the world as minions and kills unreasonably like other fairy tales. Instead, he follows the rules of the world. The apprentices he accepts don't have any extraordinary talents. They have nonsensical and funny personalities. Overall, it is lighthearted and funny. This is my favorite fairy tale. I hope the author can keep writing it until the end.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. There are six or seven updates a day, what else is there to say?

The plot is exactly the same as in the Ancestor era with many changes. But it's really not that good if there is no other plot that is easy to learn from. But the subject matter is still very good. I give it 4 stars. I hope the author will read it a few more times before coming back to write.

This is my first book, and I really didn't expect that I could insist on writing so many words. When I saw that it was close to 300,000 words, I was really impressed that I could actually write such a long book. I have no experience, but these are not excuses for writing those vicious points. I will scold me when I need it, and I will give it a bad review when I need it. From the beginning, no one has read it, and no one has criticized it. Now, more than 1,000 people have added it to the bookshelf, and more than 100 people have urged me to finish it.

Give it a good review. A novice author writes in general, but this kind of subject matter is relatively rare. It's much better now than when I first started writing it. If the beginning of the next book is good, some people will probably read it. Good luck, author⛽

The character traits are described in great detail. I have read dozens of chapters so far. The writing is quite in-depth and there is a lot of content to write about. It seems to convey a lot of world information, but it is very vague. This vague expectation is also one of the motivations for reading. Come on!

It's okay. Although the writing is not very delicate, and the character creation, portrayal, plot design, and world setting are relatively green, but overall it's okay. It's lighthearted and funny. It's good to relax and read. It's a pity that there is no rating.

There are no major bugs except that the 800 years of seclusion is a bit short. However, although it is a funny and light-hearted novel in which the protagonist does not kill decisively, it is difficult to create something interesting in this kind of invincible novel. Overall, it's more daily, funny and light-hearted, you can take a look It started well. You can incorporate any content into the structure at the beginning, and it's okay to keep reading. Although it didn't show what everyone wanted to see, the description of the supporting characters from multiple angles still highlighted the strength of the protagonist, which was still a bit satisfying. After Chapter 300, it's like a child who is mentally retarded and keeps doing hydrology. It used to be artificial hydrology, and he said whatever he dreamed about. Now it's AI hydrography, all written by AI.

It is a masterpiece. In the early stage, I thought it was similar to the story of the ancestor who came out of the mountain and accepted a female apprentice. In fact, it is not the case. The author has some writing skills and has a personal style. It is funny but serious, and even reflects the various human natures of cultivators. There are also some flaws. In the early stage, the modernism may be stronger, but later on, it is still fantasy in nature, and the modern feeling is a bit weak. Although the story may not be fresh, but the description is stylish, I feel that it is a good book. I hope you don't have an appendix. I have only read 200 chapters. I will review it after reading it.

In the early stage, it was a simple and unpretentious invincible flow. It was readable, but it was not a high-quality book, let alone the one next door. But starting from the middle period, the author began to try to explore some more profound things. It was really enjoyable to watch. The main line and the branch lines were each very distinctive and you could learn something. It is worth reading.

It looks good, I love reading it, the author is interesting. The plot is divided into two lines. One apprentice, Ling Xiaoxiao, is humorous. Lin Xuan, a front-line master, explores the truth about the aura of heaven and earth. It is also interspersed with plot extras of several minor characters. The writing, plot, and characterization are all very good. Although some parts are quite childish, it really made me laugh to death.

It's okay, it's okay, it's funny [Thinking] The low rating should be due to some pitfalls in the front. The clues are okay. No procrastination.

The subject matter seems very old-fashioned, but when you click on it, the content is still very novel. Give it a good review

It's very interesting to watch. I'm addicted to follow more chapters. The author is like an octopus. I like both lines very much. Please explain why the protagonist was so good-tempered in the early stage and why the staff were so courageous in the past. Looking back, you will see that the protagonist is still very charming and knows what he wants. It's not a bad traditional online article. In fact, you can feel it from the author's words in the early stage, otherwise I would have given up on the article long ago. The protagonist has just come out of seclusion and sees a lot of unfamiliar things. His first reaction is to endure it and understand the situation first before making a decision. Of course, this may also be because he has offended a certain country before and was hunted down. He learned a lesson from the experience. Why does the protagonist have a good temper? First, the weak are just ants, and he doesn't care. Second, he can't read minds. He doesn't know what others are thinking. Third, the people he comes into contact with are all civil servants. If he kills civil servants indiscriminately for a trivial reason, he will probably continue to be wanted. Why are those staff so brave? First, they are very weak, and those who are strong will run away early. Why is it that being weak makes you bold? Because he builds the foundation, does it matter whether you are a golden elixir or a Yuanying, a transformed god or a Mahayana? He doesn't have the real sense that you are so strong that you can kill him casually. He only knows that he can get opportunities from you. If he bets right, he will reach the sky in one step. If he bets wrong, what can you do to him? He didn't realize that you could kill him casually. You were the only transformed god he had ever seen, but he had seen many Jindan Yuanying who could kill him casually. If you see one person and be afraid of the other, you will have trouble getting through life. Second, they are very naive. They have lived in an ivory tower all their lives. They went to junior high school, high school, and college seamlessly, and they still have some money at home. For things like going out for internships, they can just ask relatives and friends to stamp them out. They may have never seen a dead person in their life, so how can they know what fear is? About the protagonist's true character. Calm, decisive, and cold. Weigh the strengths of both sides. If you can't beat them, just listen to them. Collect clues, analyze the pros and cons, and hide when you need to. If you can beat him, immediately lift the table and search for souls.

A very innovative novel, very interesting [laughing]

This book is quite nice

The rating is a bit low, but this book is still good

No big problem, there are still seven updates a day, so I will definitely give you good reviews.

The two-line story was just not enough to read at the beginning. The plot is good, one line is extremely exciting, and the other line is funny and nonsensical. Come on.

Very nice, good luck to the author

Looks good, not mindless

Very nice, I like it very much.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

Not bad, the master is kind and the disciple is "filial piety"

I quite like it, not bad

This book is really good

Good-looking and loved by the family

Wow, oh, oh, oh

It's innovative and interesting

Well enough. It's good to pass the time and watch it during your leisure time.