Mortal*************

In fact, in this era of violence, it is really easy to write a good book. In most cases, a good book is about one million words long. Just distribute the main points. More than 100,000 words are more than enough for the entire map background (including time, location, and weather description). Passerby A has more than 200,000 words (including the character's appearance, personality, background and power), More than 200,000 words for supporting characters (character appearance, personality, background and power), Then the rhythm of the story, the protagonist's realm is improved, and he is promoted and recruited along the way, 500,000 words. (The progress of the story is compact and golden, so it is more than 500,000 words. If it is too much, it will be watery. If it is too little, there will be no sense of substitution, so more than 500,000 words is just right). As long as you avoid being brainless and being too dramatic when writing, and the fans follow the original plot, the book's score will not be bad. At least 7 points or above. In the first year, the income was between 10,000 and 20,000, and then the number of fans gradually increased year by year. It's not uncommon for authors with connections to earn hundreds of thousands in the first year. The relevant authors are all written by Party A's father, who directly writes a book and then goes to film a stupid short play. [Laughing] Authors don't make money from books, they make money from relationships.

It's very interesting, but I don't know how long I can live [laughing and crying], come on, it's one of the rare novels about ordinary people leaving their families.

It's a good read and I love to read it [shy]. I've also read the author's previous book. Who knew I'd die because of it [face covering]? This book is also very good. Anyway, it's a refreshing article. Anyone who likes to read it will read it [smile]. When there are more people, the author won't let the pigeons go [shy]

I'm a bookworm, and I'm tired of reading those stories where I'm either fighting or on the way to a fight (Flathead Brother), I'm either being framed or on the way to being framed (the duel between the protagonist and the villain), and I already know what's going to happen next (too many routines and repetitions) because I read too many novels. Now I like plain, everyday, beautiful women, direct, low-key and capable. The most important thing is that there is a clear distinction between classes. For example, in some novels, no matter how powerful, magnanimous, doing things, and temperament are like gangsters, the villain is also a bird. No matter how strong the strength is, the villain and the protagonist are just gangsters fighting. Cultivation of immortals is not only about fighting and killing, but also about worldly relationships, like... Sword Comes!

It's super good-looking, and the characters don't have OOC. I'm looking forward to how the protagonist will treat Han Laomo in the future [laughing][laughing]

Ready to verify, give yourself a five-star rating [I understand]

Don't describe the child's affairs, just write it off in one stroke. Thank you. I will update it soon.

The three sisters of the Mo family had such a good life that they made a lot of money when they met the male protagonist who defied fate and changed their lives. It was not a waste of time to win so many beauties one by one.

A rare common person

I patrol the bookshelf every day, and when I look at it, I'm dead [face covering]

I've finished watching it and now I'm keeping up with the rest. It looks like it will take about a month to write and read.

I just don't know why others don't suspect that Jiedan is so arrogant

You've already made elixirs, why don't you refine your natal magic weapon?

Things are getting interesting From Sasuke's own second brother's personal verification, it's guaranteed to be smooth and flying [laughs][like]

The writing is very nice, keep up the good work, author! [Admiration][Like]

So far, it's pretty good, and the story is cool. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Come on! ! !

The author is very cute and writes well (＾ω＾)👍🏻

OK, but not pleasant

I think it's pretty ok, just a bit lacking🤓

It's from the author's last book. It's from the author's last book. The writing is quite good, but the self-selected rewards in this book are always not included. I don't know if I forgot or did it on purpose.

Why is the rating so low? I think it's pretty good. 8 Points is still more than adequate.

Yes, it's all collected without being pretentious, and it's a good review. The only drawback is that Han Li is so miserable. At least he is dedicated to the Tao. It's okay to collect some thugs with some resources.

Why is it only 6.3 Points? Personally, I think this mortal fanfic is the only one Tomato can read at the moment.

Good, good, good

Not bad, the harem is relatively complete

Ha~ There is one book that makes me die~ [face covering]

Nice! A good fanfic [Adoration]

Tomatoes are okay [eat melon]

Not bad Xiao Huang Shu [laughs]

Okay, okay, come on [Adore][Adore] Not that poisonous [Bookshelf plus one]