White King*******

The introduction was written as a family fun, and I thought that the protagonist would slowly change the character of the Black King to make him abstract or human, and then go about his daily life with the Eight-Headed Dragon King, and then follow the history and write 500,000 to 600,000 to the modern day. Unexpectedly, he was tricked to death inexplicably [eating melon]

The writing is good. In terms of plot, the protagonist's pride as the dragon king and the responsibility he has to bear towards the dragon clan as the master are written. It would be great if more ups and downs could be added, such as the protagonist striking out at those capitals who want to cause trouble, etc. For the rest, as long as you are not remarrying, it doesn't matter if you are alone or not (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The first volume is good, and the rest is also okay. It just advances the plot, but I still want to ask when Daye-sensei will appear [pouts] Isn't it my brother's book? Can he still be saved?

What's going on when I go? Why is it gone?

Five-star support, the first time I saw the real body was the White King's

I've read so many Dragon Clan fanfics, and it's the first time I've seen the protagonist Bai Wang. It's quite refreshing. Personally, I've read it OK, but there are still a lot of negative reviews for this book. I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. In addition, I want to read Xiami and the protagonist Bai. I wonder if the author can refer to this suggestion [Sending my heart]

It's pretty good to watch. I hope Xiami and the protagonist have sex. No, why is it gone?

What happened? Why did you send it?

Brother, what's wrong with you?

It's strange to die, it's gone all at once

I still really enjoy watching the plot of The White King. As long as it keeps updating and doesn't cut it in half, I will watch it to the end. How come? Can it be continued with a new book? [Cry]

No, how come you were locked up in a small dark room after not seeing each other for a few days?

It's good to watch and will lead into the plot later.

It looks good, but I don't know whether to follow the plot of the road or what, so the road is equivalent to not choosing to enter? A plot without a road

Beautiful, I like the special perspective Why is it gone? The points have been reduced to this, but why is it still sealed?

I guess later Mo Xi and Teacher Daye staged a betrayal scene in front of Lu Mingfei.

Although from a professional point of view, there are indeed many shortcomings, but I am not a professional, so I like to watch [laughter] Removed? Why is the author gone? [Cry][cry][cry]

It's a very nice and warm life. It's written in big letters and is very warm.

I don't know what to say, because I didn't seem to understand it, but I thought it looked pretty good. Suddenly I remembered that I hadn't rated it yet, so I gave it a five-star rating first.

Rebirth of the City White King, right? [Laughing evilly]

Come on @ scattered dust bar

No, I was confused when I just finished reading the first volume. I read the key points two or three times. Although I understood most of them, I was still a little confused.

Has the author been tricked?

Rate it first and look at it later.

Why has a good book been taken off the shelves? I waited for several months before I found out it was removed from the shelves.

It's a pity that it's gone and I haven't seen enough [smile] Shenhe, please fly for me!

How to say it? Not bad, right? Come on

Based on feedback from some readers, it is recommended that newcomers start reading the second volume of Cong.

Very nice, five stars straight away

It's very well written, keep it up [blowing kiss]