This is a book written by the author who misses the old version and is obsessed with the European Emperor. Please be merciful if the content is not good.
In addition, when I wrote this book, I just did it for my own entertainment. I couldn't find any Tomorrow novels or national destiny novels that fit my preference on Tomato, so I wrote one for myself. Unexpectedly, the novel I just wrote a few days ago was urged to be updated and liked by everyone. I was quite happy.
However, due to work reasons, the update is unstable, so I hope you can forgive me.
Reader comments
Let me talk about some places that I personally feel uncomfortable with and what I think about these places. (Personal opinion)
1. The game overturned at the beginning and lost two teammates.
Personal opinion: Since it is a game plot, a car rollover will definitely happen, and since it is not a game, it is acceptable for two teammates to go offline (question: there should be a downed state), provided that "everyone has a 50% probability of dying directly" is set.
Conclusion: It weakens the protagonist's starting strength, but it's not a big problem and it's acceptable.
2. In each process of the Hope Valley plot, when the protagonist has memory, the performance is no different from other teams (even the performance is not as good as other teams).
Personal opinion: In the real version of After Tomorrow, the advantage of a 4-person team is much greater than that of a 2-person team. The possibility of a 4-person team completing the novice plot is much greater than that of a 2-person team. This is acceptable. However, from the perspective of the ladder climbing plot, the protagonist should have a small advantage, but even with the advantage, the protagonist is almost red-blooded, and there is a high probability that other teams will lose one person. On the contrary, it is a laboratory plot. When there are 4 people in the other team, someone can seduce the boss. When the boss is red, he will retreat first, and the full blood will carry the bomb together with the boss. Later, the red blood will avoid contact with the red blood state. Finally, the three people will defeat the boss and then return to the team. It is reasonable for the full team to pass the novice level. In the end, I feel that too many people survived the novice mission of this difficulty. If we go by the final survival ratio and the protagonist's advantage, the protagonist's last teammate should not and cannot be disconnected (or the performance of the novice level can be simplified, and if the middle is not difficult, the laboratory plot can still cause teammates to be disconnected.).
Conclusion: Maybe I wanted to make the novice mission more difficult, but the protagonist's side was too difficult. After the end, it didn't show that the novice mission was difficult, which made it a bit uncomfortable to watch (it's acceptable only to see this, so it's not a big problem)
3. Move bricks in Happy 101 and meet female characters such as nuns.
Personal opinion: I don't dislike these plots, and I personally don't even like the lack of female protagonists, but in this level of novice missions, I can't think of how they survived. Of course, if the protagonist's teammates survive (the two who are offline at the beginning are of high physical fitness, it is not reasonable, especially with the plot of the subsequent female characters), then this plot is acceptable.
4. The plot of Japanese female characters.
Personal opinion: There is no problem in essence, but like 3, the protagonist's teammates have all dropped, which becomes a problem.
5. Send supplies to female characters in other countries and the four big men of els.
Personal opinion: There is absolutely no problem, especially in the context of a global crisis. As a person who has received nine years of compulsory education and other countries have not shown hostility to the protagonist, it is completely acceptable for the protagonist to send materials that cannot be sent back to "friends" in other countries. The problem is still the same as 3. The portrayal of the female characters makes me personally feel that if they can survive, the protagonist's last teammate should not be dropped.
Finally, just my personal opinion.
The overall feeling of the book is okay. Let me talk about the parts that I am not comfortable with. 1. The author wrote three teammates to death at the beginning. Although I saw the later part and knew that the teammates may be resurrected as semi-infected people, I don't know how the author will write about getting along with the three teammates later. They may be sent back directly. However, the death of three teammates made the protagonist busy in the early stage. 2. The author made the Hope Valley of China too difficult. I don't understand why so many people from other countries passed the novice trial, although many died later, resulting in Nancy City being almost empty at 30V30. 3. The author later wrote about competition among many countries, which is not a problem in itself. After all, it is a novel about national destiny, and there is nothing wrong with competition. But after tomorrow, it is mainly about teamwork, and I prefer teamwork. 4. When I read Chapter 201, I found that the only ones that compete with the protagonist are Sakura and Curry Country, especially Curry Country, which always wants to fight against the protagonist. ! ! Who! ! ! You! ! ! Write! ! ! Of! ! ! Too! ! ! Few! ! ! Got it! ! ! I! ! ! Want! ! ! Urgent! ! ! Even! ! ! I finished it in one day. In short, the whole book feels good. I highly recommend it. It comes from a bookworm who has read the novel for 1657 hours (also, there are many women around the protagonist, although it is clear that he only has one girlfriend, but I hope not to have a harem)
Good news, I have caught up with the big army. Bad news, I have caught up with the big army. The author will update it soon. It is not enough.
The logic feels good
Originally I could have given it five stars, but the deduction points were for helping Xiaoli.
This book only ends here for me. Enemies of country and family hate whoever can let go. Four generations of my family have been in the military. My great-grandfather died in Korea, my grandfather was a Vietnam veteran, my eldest father is an active-duty colonel, and my brother is a second-class sergeant. Personally, I don't want to read pro-Japanese books.
I can understand the story in the front of this book, which is the beginning of tomorrow's story, and Xiaolu's sacrifice. After all, this is how the uncle left. When I played Tomorrow Ever After, I fell into the trap because of the phrase "live on, let's live together."
Besides, deducting points, being pro-Japanese is just a point. Don't forget that you are writing about the national destiny. How can you selflessly help others? The behavior of some countries is simply speechless.
The national fortune is a blessing to you, right? I really like the saying "Humans are united and fight among themselves". But not the Japanese.
To be honest, I originally wanted to give it three stars. I also like Tomorrow very much. For the sake of Tomorrow, I will deduct one star.
After tomorrow! It happened many years ago, I really miss it
I suggest you find someone to go in later. One country, one camp. It's no fun to play alone.
I also give myself a five-star review [cool]
Very nice and highly recommended
It can look good ah ah ah
Quick code words, quick code words
It's ok and looks good
It's different from other taunting and pretending to slap people in the face. Also, there aren't that many barrages and I don't know how to do them.
Come on, come on, come on
I like this book
Did I look too fast? Why is that Miaomiao gone? Then there was an extra field
Six-year old players give positive reviews every day [Love]
It's very well written. Although it doesn't exactly follow the plot of the first season (adding some things from the current version), it really reminds me of the past hahaha
It looks good but is too short [laughs evilly]
It's amazing that I can hold on for so long. I feel like my book is attacking me after I have been generating electricity for love for so long [laughing]
Come on author, I am a veteran player of Tomorrow and I like to read it
Very interesting, but the number of chapters is a bit short
Let me talk about some places that I personally feel uncomfortable with and what I think about these places. (Personal opinion) 1. The game overturned at the beginning and lost two teammates. Personal opinion: Since it is a game plot, a car rollover will definitely happen, and since it is not a game, it is acceptable for two teammates to go offline (question: there should be a downed state), provided that "everyone has a 50% probability of dying directly" is set. Conclusion: It weakens the protagonist's starting strength, but it's not a big problem and it's acceptable. 2. In each process of the Hope Valley plot, when the protagonist has memory, the performance is no different from other teams (even the performance is not as good as other teams). Personal opinion: In the real version of After Tomorrow, the advantage of a 4-person team is much greater than that of a 2-person team. The possibility of a 4-person team completing the novice plot is much greater than that of a 2-person team. This is acceptable. However, from the perspective of the ladder climbing plot, the protagonist should have a small advantage, but even with the advantage, the protagonist is almost red-blooded, and there is a high probability that other teams will lose one person. On the contrary, it is a laboratory plot. When there are 4 people in the other team, someone can seduce the boss. When the boss is red, he will retreat first, and the full blood will carry the bomb together with the boss. Later, the red blood will avoid contact with the red blood state. Finally, the three people will defeat the boss and then return to the team. It is reasonable for the full team to pass the novice level. In the end, I feel that too many people survived the novice mission of this difficulty. If we go by the final survival ratio and the protagonist's advantage, the protagonist's last teammate should not and cannot be disconnected (or the performance of the novice level can be simplified, and if the middle is not difficult, the laboratory plot can still cause teammates to be disconnected.). Conclusion: Maybe I wanted to make the novice mission more difficult, but the protagonist's side was too difficult. After the end, it didn't show that the novice mission was difficult, which made it a bit uncomfortable to watch (it's acceptable only to see this, so it's not a big problem) 3. Move bricks in Happy 101 and meet female characters such as nuns. Personal opinion: I don't dislike these plots, and I personally don't even like the lack of female protagonists, but in this level of novice missions, I can't think of how they survived. Of course, if the protagonist's teammates survive (the two who are offline at the beginning are of high physical fitness, it is not reasonable, especially with the plot of the subsequent female characters), then this plot is acceptable. 4. The plot of Japanese female characters. Personal opinion: There is no problem in essence, but like 3, the protagonist's teammates have all dropped, which becomes a problem. 5. Send supplies to female characters in other countries and the four big men of els. Personal opinion: There is absolutely no problem, especially in the context of a global crisis. As a person who has received nine years of compulsory education and other countries have not shown hostility to the protagonist, it is completely acceptable for the protagonist to send materials that cannot be sent back to "friends" in other countries. The problem is still the same as 3. The portrayal of the female characters makes me personally feel that if they can survive, the protagonist's last teammate should not be dropped. Finally, just my personal opinion.
The overall feeling of the book is okay. Let me talk about the parts that I am not comfortable with. 1. The author wrote three teammates to death at the beginning. Although I saw the later part and knew that the teammates may be resurrected as semi-infected people, I don't know how the author will write about getting along with the three teammates later. They may be sent back directly. However, the death of three teammates made the protagonist busy in the early stage. 2. The author made the Hope Valley of China too difficult. I don't understand why so many people from other countries passed the novice trial, although many died later, resulting in Nancy City being almost empty at 30V30. 3. The author later wrote about competition among many countries, which is not a problem in itself. After all, it is a novel about national destiny, and there is nothing wrong with competition. But after tomorrow, it is mainly about teamwork, and I prefer teamwork. 4. When I read Chapter 201, I found that the only ones that compete with the protagonist are Sakura and Curry Country, especially Curry Country, which always wants to fight against the protagonist. ! ! Who! ! ! You! ! ! Write! ! ! Of! ! ! Too! ! ! Few! ! ! Got it! ! ! I! ! ! Want! ! ! Urgent! ! ! Even! ! ! I finished it in one day. In short, the whole book feels good. I highly recommend it. It comes from a bookworm who has read the novel for 1657 hours (also, there are many women around the protagonist, although it is clear that he only has one girlfriend, but I hope not to have a harem)
Good news, I have caught up with the big army. Bad news, I have caught up with the big army. The author will update it soon. It is not enough.
The logic feels good
Originally I could have given it five stars, but the deduction points were for helping Xiaoli. This book only ends here for me. Enemies of country and family hate whoever can let go. Four generations of my family have been in the military. My great-grandfather died in Korea, my grandfather was a Vietnam veteran, my eldest father is an active-duty colonel, and my brother is a second-class sergeant. Personally, I don't want to read pro-Japanese books. I can understand the story in the front of this book, which is the beginning of tomorrow's story, and Xiaolu's sacrifice. After all, this is how the uncle left. When I played Tomorrow Ever After, I fell into the trap because of the phrase "live on, let's live together." Besides, deducting points, being pro-Japanese is just a point. Don't forget that you are writing about the national destiny. How can you selflessly help others? The behavior of some countries is simply speechless. The national fortune is a blessing to you, right? I really like the saying "Humans are united and fight among themselves". But not the Japanese. To be honest, I originally wanted to give it three stars. I also like Tomorrow very much. For the sake of Tomorrow, I will deduct one star.
After tomorrow! It happened many years ago, I really miss it
I suggest you find someone to go in later. One country, one camp. It's no fun to play alone.
I also give myself a five-star review [cool]
Very nice and highly recommended
It can look good ah ah ah
Quick code words, quick code words
It's ok and looks good
It's different from other taunting and pretending to slap people in the face. Also, there aren't that many barrages and I don't know how to do them.
Come on, come on, come on
I like this book
Did I look too fast? Why is that Miaomiao gone? Then there was an extra field
Six-year old players give positive reviews every day [Love]
It's very well written. Although it doesn't exactly follow the plot of the first season (adding some things from the current version), it really reminds me of the past hahaha
It looks good but is too short [laughs evilly]
It's amazing that I can hold on for so long. I feel like my book is attacking me after I have been generating electricity for love for so long [laughing]
Come on author, I am a veteran player of Tomorrow and I like to read it
Very interesting, but the number of chapters is a bit short