The Mortal’s Rebellion Against the Spirits

The type of mortal cultivator who has no spiritual seeds, but has to forcefully cultivate immortality, accumulate wealth through business, and use the active wealth to assist the internal strength of mortal cultivation, and then use the internal strength to forcibly polish the acupoints, and find a different path of cultivating immortality. Because the number of acupoints is large, the accumulated spiritual power is much larger than the amount of a single Dantian, which has certain advantages. The overall design idea is okay, but the writing skills are still insufficient. There are certain problems in the plot design and plot advancement, which makes many people want to abandon the book in the early stages of business. If the writing method can be adjusted, it will be a good book. However, the author's other new book is good. He should have learned from the failure of this book. The other new book is: I am physically weak but have invincible cultivation. It is a completely different style. The new book has been promoted for less than half a month, and it has already exceeded 1,500 people read it, which is pretty good.

The overall idea of this novel is clear. An ordinary mortal who cannot cultivate immortality must pay a price if he wants to cultivate immortality and break the rules. The protagonist Li Yan started to accumulate raw resources from ordinary business, and gradually came into contact with immortality, relying on the memory of his previous life and business talent. , Gradually accumulate a large amount of wealth, use it to purchase spiritual materials, forcibly cultivate immortality, temper the acupoints all over the body to accumulate spiritual power, and transform the Dantian, so that you can cultivate immortality normally, but it is still a new path, leaving many hidden wounds, and also leaving hidden dangers for subsequent cultivation.

Looks good, okay The overall concept of this book is okay, and the plot is okay, but it is still a bit cliche, especially the business part in the early stage. It feels like it is just changing the map, not the medicine. The plot is too long and dull, but the later part of cultivating immortals is okay.

This book is okay. Those who like to read about time travel and cultivating immortals can read it.

There is no system, no slap in the face, just a normal pace of cultivation, self-created techniques, unlimited lifespan. Warm type The first chapters of this book are a bit dull, and many people may not like to read them. The previous chapters are being rewritten, the pace of mortal business will accelerate, and Li Yan will once again reach the peak of mortals.