[Magical Girl] [Villain] [Pseudo-Parenting] [Mastermind] [Daily Life] [Getting Close]
Daily-life stories make up a considerable portion of this novel. It isn't a mindless power fantasy. I want to depict a world that feels as real as possible, where every character thinks about their circumstances, makes mistakes, and has their own troubles. It may not be for everyone, but I'm having a blast writing it~
After being unexpectedly chosen by a magical girl fairy and transmigrating to another world, Bai Xiaoming becomes an active presence online as a white-haired catgirl Villain magical girl.
Every day, her mission is to lose to the good magical girls and help them grow by giving them experience.
Along the way, Bai Xiaoming also has to manage her relationships.
She has to keep her identity secret, maintain her social media accounts, and complete her daily defeat missions.
If she gets caught one day, will that trigger a defeat CG?
After reading 20 chapters, I will give it four stars. At first glance, the setting seems to be a magical girl theme of the type of demon, and then it is somewhat borrowed from another fox-villain magical girl. However, because I am a newcomer, the writing is a bit messy, and the control of the protagonist's character and cognitive changes are not well written. It is not as comfortable to read as Huhu's book, and it feels a bit stiff. Then, in the world view of this book, I wanted to add a bit of darkness, and also wanted to show a bit more "girly", and a bit more relaxed, but it seems a bit fragmented, but in fact it is still a problem with the author's own unfamiliar writing style. The dialogues and paragraphs of articles often contain several buts in one paragraph, but they are too cumbersome and not concise, and the reading experience is not good. But generally speaking, he is a new author, and I don't see any major flaws. Except for his writing style, everything else is okay, so I will give him four stars for encouragement. Come on 😄
What does it mean after chapter 40? What is the meaning of writing about the emergence of this omniscient being? Originally, it looked cheerful at first, but it felt good to follow this tone. Then a layer of shady stories about goblins immediately changed the mood. What is it trying to do? 🧐
Originally, the goblin system seemed good, and the little goblin depicted was quite interesting, so I just kept writing. Later, an omniscient and omnipotent system was added to overthrow the goblin system, and the goblin system was written as a conspiracy. However, the weirdo seems to have not made it clear yet. At present, the weirdo is still made by the witch, so it is probably like this. If you can see through the conspiracy of the goblin system, do you have to get a weirdo to elbow humans? At present, it seems that the fairy system is actually protecting people no matter what. Even if the fairy system turns fairies back into magical girls in the end, it's probably to protect humans or something.
To be honest, the atmosphere before Chapter 40 was relatively relaxed. The protagonist was powerful but sometimes arrogant and in a good state. The growth of the five-person group was also very interesting. However, when the omniscient life came out, all the previous content was overturned. The protagonist was inexplicably suppressed, which made people feel aggrieved. It was even more uncomfortable for the five-person group to turn against the protagonist, and all the previous emotions were in vain. Your introduction is very different. If you want to write a dark and profound story, you should set the tone from the beginning, rather than changing the direction of deus ex machina.
Many chapters are incomprehensible and I don't know what I want to express.
It feels like it has nothing to do with the introduction from the beginning)
It felt a little off topic and a bit disconnected after (Someone at Home), but it was very good before so four stars.
I feel like there's a big difference between the plot before and after
There are many settings that make the book boring
In the first forty chapters, I thought it was the same as Xinyue Fox next door, but there is indeed a reversal later on. Let me read it first before continuing to comment.