Dimensional Knowledge, Reforming Douluo

This is a "half" fanfic, to put it directly, it is an optimization of the original work.

Although Rotten Persimmon did not have the copyright and was rectified, resulting in some confusion in the name, the flaws are not outweighed. The protagonist has grown from an ordinary good-for-nothing boy to a master tactician. The protagonist has grown from an ordinary person who has awakened the fifth-level book seal to a tactic master who can be called a humanoid plug-in. Among them, the youthful spirit of the seven monsters has been brought to life, and the protagonist's plug-in seal has also written a sense of satisfaction. In the following five years, the protagonist remains alone and anonymous, slowly gaining a foothold in the complicated whirlpool of power, and becomes a In the midst of strategizing, the counselor who is thousands of miles away chooses to face his heart in the struggle between emotion and reason; in the end, the protagonist and Dongfang Qingxue, the counselor and the lord circle around, from surveillance and forbearance, to use and planning, then exposure and confession, and then the two people's heart-to-heart talk and mutual trust, you can vigorously knock Ayan and Chuxue's cp [love] [love] [love]. To sum up, this book can be read by those who are Douluo Chefs, and it is worth reading if they have read too much about Master Hei Tang Hei (it is worth mentioning that the master in this book is a comic version) One thing to say, is the original DL work really as good as this fanfic? ——Questions from the soul

At the moment, I think it's okay, and I suggest that Oscar's martial spirit be changed to the comic version of the God of Cookery's martial spirit. I would also like to suggest that some of the minor flaws in the original work should be changed. Like destroying the Killing City or something.

The author's writing style is very good, the ideas are clear, the plot is not too brainless, and the characterization is very detailed. It's just a pity that he doesn't have the copyright and has changed a few exclusive words in the original version, but it is still acceptable. Overall, this book is excellent.

Yes, I think the Five-Year Promise can be written according to the comics, and the plot of Bai Chenxiang and Ma Hongjun can also be written. If the author wants to write more plots, the plot of Poseidon Island can also be written according to the comics 👍👍👍

So far, this book is pretty good. Keep up the good work, author.

Not bad, let me help you

Very interesting novel

This is the first Douluo fanfic that uses historical fiction.