Collapse of Iron********

What you need to know before watching: I know that many people may like to read cool articles, after all, the pressure of reality is so great, but the storyline of this story closely follows the cycle of fate. Therefore, the main tone is very depressing. I just feel very uncomfortable at the moment, although I also think it is quite reasonable. After all, the protagonist is not really him. More like a cosplayer, and a poor one at that. But this clumsiness is one of the most important points to watch. See how the protagonist struggles with his fate and see the prophet of failure. How to make things more tragic in a cage is both a poisonous point and an interesting point. It's very contradictory, isn't it? Being used to reading cool novels, I feel quite awkward. I also want the protagonist to have the power to change everything, at least not to be so powerless or so aggrieved! But I thought about it, maybe when I have this point of view, it will prove that this article is successful. This kind of writing is really rare. If it comes out, I will definitely support it. Looking forward to subsequent plot developments.

I have been reading it for a while and I like it very much. The author's atmosphere is very good. It was completely different from what I thought the powerful Xi Lian could solve the problem easily. She is more of an observer, providing little but costly help. Especially Sayaka's part makes people feel slightly powerless. "The fate of this world deeply binds everyone. Even if you are as strong as Xi Lian, you don't dare to use too much force, for fear of making the fate of the people in it fall deeper into hell." This is especially obvious when telling Sayaka the story of the golden descendant in order to enlighten Sayaka. After telling the story, Sayaka obviously fell into deeper pain and even almost talked about witches. I can no longer imagine how Xi Lian should save these children. Although the cute Xi Lian was a little unhappy to be guarded by others, he couldn't bear to say harsh words after learning about their fate, and the bond of the same soul from another world also slightly reduced the loneliness. I really hope that this ray of soul can accompany Xi Lian in a healthier form in the future. I'm looking forward to the author's follow-up updates! Full star rating. 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

I feel that I can give the protagonist a story as I wrote it, and write a story about the Magic Circle protagonist group for the fans, or write about a golden descendant. This way, I can write a few chapters. When the game is updated, I will read the official Xi Lian and character setting supplements to prevent backstabbing. And just like Xi Lian herself said, she has never changed from beginning to end. Everything is the same at the core. A girl who is as gorgeous as a flying flower, and all golden descendants are like this. The shaping of Xi Lian has never been the memory of the previous Xi Lian, only Mi Mi, so she has been completing herself by the side of the pioneers. She is Xi Lian who belongs to the pioneers (players), so she basically does not have the main process of getting along with others. The author can write about a story about whether his own existence is valuable or correct, and he strives to explore and become a real Xi Lian with the intentional or unintentional help of his companions or strangers. It does not necessarily have to be the original version. This is the author's own choice [OK]

No more pretending, I am the author. Reading your own book gives you a different feeling. It's broken, it's a bit "sophisticated" [exploration] Have you heard that if you want to rise, you should suppress it first. Without the suppression in the front, there would be no rising in the back. No more tricks [cover face]

Nice to see, thank you. Stories are not cookie-cutter. This book made me fall in love with Xi Lian, and the story of the golden descendant is also very vivid. When I think that Xi Lian is also a golden descendant and has golden blood in his body, I look forward to the follow-up development and hope to see the follow-up soon. I can't help it anymore, my ticket will be delayed again. I bet it will be delayed in 2027 as well.

"Everyone will be separated from one person, but that person will see a miracle, and that's what destiny means-" Wan Enemy: "One day, you will be wounded in the back and die." Tibao: "You will be broken into a thousand pieces and wither in the soil of a foreign land." Aglaia: "You will bathe for the last time in the warm and dazzling gold." Polycia: "You will wither, so that the dead will sprout from the remnants, and the fire that died together will be reborn." Xia Die: "At the end of the sea of flowers, the souls of the living will warm your fingertips. After embracing each other, there will be eternal separation." Saifeier: "You will walk with greed, and you will die without any money." Nakesia: "You will transcend to the ultimate purity and return to the darkness of corruption and suffering." Feng Jin: "At the end of the Rainbow Bridge, the children of the sky will mend the morning and dusk." Bai E: "You will bear the scorching sun on your shoulders until the gray dawn appears." Cerydra: "You will conquer the sea that is the realm of heaven and earth, and you will sleep in the sound of the waves--" Haiseyin: "You will sleep forever in the sound of the waves and complete your conquest of the sea that is the realm of heaven and earth -" Huangdi: "You will dig your own grave and be burned in the furnace of rebellion." Xi Lian: "You will close the end when the flowers bloom, just like the end gives birth to the beginning."

In fact, I feel that I am inspired by Xi Lian and Lin Ye. A new personality is formed, which is our protagonist. This is so much better than acting. Many protagonists in fan fiction start to collapse themselves while pretending. If it doesn't crash, you must have cleared the cache. Some wives wrote it out, and some wives didn't. Some have been discontinued. Some of them are mixed and directly turned into background plates. I feel. Very few people write story fanfics that form a circle. Or just write a little bit, such as Madoka or Chronicles. From the version I've seen, there is a twisted version. And a little bit of Cthulhu. There are discontinued versions. It's not as happy as the original version. So it's quite difficult to write something like this.

It's very interesting, and the narrative in the article suits my taste. Even though it's a bit depressing, I can keep reading. But after finishing the main plot of Xi Lian, I can only say that it was too painful, and a double sadness was rubbing at me [face covering]. I have to save it for later.

If the author can continue to do so, the ending of this novel will definitely receive an evaluation of 8.6 Or above. In order for this novel to continue to live, I will invite others to watch it with me. Although it is difficult to describe, I can only say that the writing is very good, and the thoughts and choices of the characters are written, so that I can really see another possibility, a possibility of a good ending. I wish the author better and better! I hope other readers can find books they want to read.

It's super nice. The author will update soon. It's the first time I saw Xingtie and Moyuan together. It would be nice to strengthen Xi Lian a little. After all, the messenger still crushes all beings except for Enshin and the like.

Although the novel written by the author is not purely a role-playing novel, he is indeed a good author who listens to and responds to readers' comments. It just always feels like the protagonist's combat power jumps repeatedly, and he just gets stronger and is immediately weakened.

It's really great. I have lost the desire to read books recently and basically can't read any books. I originally discovered this book by accident when I was searching for Dangan fanfics. I read it because the subject matter was novel. The result is really great. I have never read Magic Circle, but I can feel that every character is very three-dimensional (mainly the part where Kyubey threatens the protagonist really made me angry)

It's okay, just a little overwhelming, but everything else is good.

The writing is very good, it reminds me of the first time I watched Madoka a long time ago, Sayaka's super love brain gave me a headache.

Good book Author update soon The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the curse: The Supreme Lord's decree, transcend your lonely soul, escape from the sea of ​​suffering, and be reincarnated as a human being.)

Is the protagonist a boy or a girl in his previous life? Will this book be a lily or just a post with everyone?

It's beautifully written, and the protagonist is very relatable. The fusion of Madoka's worldview is also harmonious.

Except for being cut by the protagonist, everything else is pretty good.

This opening introduction made my eyes light up, and I look forward to the subsequent development. If the official main line of Bengtie is that Xing/Qiong has a Xilian that belongs to him alone, then Lin Ye has created a Xilian that belongs to him alone. It can also be said that he has created a Linye that belongs to Xilian alone.

It looks good and has no obvious shortcomings that may offend readers. Let's review it. It's written in a very restrained way, which is understandable. It's also very harmonious in terms of concluding the world line. But I haven't heard anything about Alicia in Chapter 58, which feels a bit emm. The introduction is fraudulent [face covering] A suggestion can be given to Madoka and the others to enter the Paradise of the Past to receive training from the Thirteen Heroes.

The writing is really good, and the emotions of the characters are well grasped. It is not a mindless piece of writing😭

Support the author, come on

After this, at the end of the book. Will the end come, and can we witness it...

I really can't do it anymore, why should I torture "Xi Lian" like this [crying]

It's very interesting. Different from other fan fiction [laughs], this book integrates the world view of Xi Lian and Mo Yuan very well. Moreover, it has the bond with the protagonist group and Xi Lian wants to use his own power to save the girls of the protagonist group. It feels very healing after reading it [almost crying] [almost crying]

We give you five-star praise [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I'm exhausted after reading the latest chapter, and I don't know what the author is writing about [Petrochemical]

Lian, my Lianbao, how can I live without you [crying][crying][crying]

It's beautiful, and I love the speed of this update. Big cheers to the author [blowing kiss]

It's pretty good-looking, but it just doesn't look like Xi Lian himself. It doesn't matter. Give it five stars to encourage the author~ Record it, time

Not bad (*❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*Come on, there are still 6 chapters left for me to keep up. Kishien's Madoka's journey is also a story that is different from the past (◕ˇ∀ˇ◕).