Frieren: Becoming a Sword Immortal in a World of Will

It's good to watch. If you ignore the protagonist, you will find that you have watched the original anime again.

At present, the author has made some modifications. It can be seen that the role of the protagonist has increased, and the character design has not collapsed. The protagonist is not invincible from the beginning. He has his own strengths. The positioning instrument in the protagonist group is relatively clear. I personally feel that it is good. Come on, author

Shit, I didn't read the label when I came in. After reading it for a long time, I realized it was a soul-traveling game. It was written well, but I still couldn't accept the soul-traveling setting, especially when there was a female protagonist. It would be great if it was fetal transmigration or reincarnation or memory awakening. At least it is written this way. The protagonist's body is his own body. The soul transmigration gives me the feeling that everything is just a wedding dress for others🤦 I have walked away, and I have no motivation to continue reading. The protagonist in Japan is either reincarnated or summoned to another world. How come he has become a soul-walker when he travels to other worlds in China? You hate your own body so much and like other people's bodies, right? 🤦

There are no surprises, but there are not that many opportunities for the protagonist to appear, and the author did not take advantage of many events where the protagonist could be cool, resulting in it looking almost the same as the original work. But the author probably knew how to change it, and it gradually changed a bit more later on. Anyway, I hope the author will keep writing. After all, there are basically no non-OOC Frilian fans, and many of them have been discontinued.

The original novel did have a lot of plot in the early stage, but the role of the protagonist is also increasing. Currently, I feel that the clone of the Water Mirror Demon is a small climax of the plot of the protagonist. This is considered the best among the Fulilian fanfics I have read (I pat the author's head to praise it).

I want to give it a 4.5. The only drawback is that the protagonist has a little less role and the original plot is a little less, but it doesn't stop me from calming down and watching it again. Just treat it like I've read the original work. It's pretty good.

I feel that even though it is a fic, the protagonist is well integrated into it, giving it the bland feel of the original. I just finished reading the latest one, and it feels pretty good. If you like this kind of thing, you can check it out. The writing of Goldfinger is also very smooth, not a traditional cool novel. If the author wants the protagonist to work hard to come up with and introduce various magics by himself, I think it is quite good. I think it is good to follow the plot of the original work, but I always feel that there is something missing that can express the protagonist's personality or dialogue. The protagonist here is more like a member of the group, just like the protagonist has been added to the original work. Of course, this makes it less likely to explode and make mistakes. Alas, I can only say that it is fan fiction after all. Can be used as a meal replacement. Well, that's good as it is. As long as there is no sudden cheat or something that has a big impact, I can keep chasing it. I hope the author will get better and better so that this book can continue. It is already pretty good without the kind of cool classics that can greatly affect the plot and ruin the perception as soon as it comes out. Because I'm tired of seeing this.

There are no surprises in the plot and the plot progresses smoothly. The proportion of the protagonist's scenes is gradually increasing.

It's quite good-looking, and the characters don't feel OOC. I just feel that the protagonist's presence is not very strong. Maybe there will be more in the future. At the moment, I don't feel that the protagonist has much presence. Good luck, author [sending my heart]

It's good-looking, no OOC, and has the same sense of fun in daily life as in the original work. But the scenes between the protagonist and Celia are probably in the later stages. I don't have a specific connection with the protagonist yet. I'm still working on the main plot with the protagonist, and I'm waiting for Celia's plot.