Apocalypse: Transmigrate Between Two Worlds, Save the Sisters from the Start

What a pity. The subject matter is good, and the gimmicks are good, but the writing is rushed. In the early stage, it is relatively relaxed and pleasant. During this time period, you can write a lot of attractive content, such as the customs and some small events in the apocalyptic world, to promote the warming of emotions, the introduction of modern items, etc., But in order to write multiple heroines, you force the temperature to rise, create conflict events, various misunderstandings and coincidences, and then directly establish industrial chains and enterprises. Oh my god, how many chapters are there? You must directly write about the struggle against various forces, construction, etc., And then intersperse various acquisitions of girls. This part is a grinder, and the attractiveness is greatly reduced, especially the shaping of the male protagonist. In my opinion, it is a bit of a failure. What is needed is a leader or a determined activist, not a pornographic guy who has no bottom line.

An old-fashioned novel written by a newbie

Samsung for now, wait and see what happens next