Dragon Tribe: Sky and Curse Binding at the Beginning Are Treated as S-Level

The plot is smooth and the emotional lines are described delicately. Generally speaking, there are no problems. The heroine should have Xiaotiannu, Zero, Eri, Xia Mi, Nono, and the other two nannies who have a good impression. However, the author said that there are only five heroines at present, so it is hard to say whether there will be changes.

It feels ok, but the emotional scene with Su Xiaoqiang is a bit difficult to break down. The protagonist's perfect Tianyu Tyrant, with some enhancements, can't react to some of Su's actions, let alone deliberately letting her bite other parts of the body. There's no problem, even if he kisses her on the mouth, you can't react? Isn't this contradictory to the previous unwillingness to accept Su? Maybe he wanted to express Su's persistence and love, but Lin Ye is the protagonist, and the foil is a bit reversed, making the protagonist a bit indecisive. At this time, wouldn't it be possible to change it to better reflect the protagonist's personality? The changes come bit by bit, and there is no emotional plot in the middle. The direct changes are a bit abrupt. Also, Lu Mingze and his small group of drunkards were so angry that they didn't teach her a lesson or give her a hard time. They made the protagonist feel like a noob. It felt like everyone wanted to take advantage of the protagonist, which was really a bit frustrating. Being a fan of salted fish money is a kind of character, but you can't force the protagonist to be a fan of salted fish money. The main character's strength, not to mention becoming an ancestor and being an ancestor, also makes some people who are not very strong (Jiu De...) Dare not easily provoke him. I feel like it doesn't matter whether it's a nanny story. Whether it's the protagonist becoming a real king alone or taking a bad boy with him, I feel it will arouse some emotions in everyone's heart. When watching Dragons, I also hope that someone can save this world full of regrets and sorrows. Sometimes I also fantasize about someone being able to change this world. I just want to express my personal sentiments, I still like some of the plots @_@.

Yes, the author did a good job. He just wanted to portray the feeling of the tyrant Tianyu, who can throw sticks and catch bullets. The fighting scenes are good, and the character portrayal is also good. He is an ordinary person who is not familiar with the world and just wants to make money. An ordinary person who can kill the first generation. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss], Su Xiaoqiang's writing is also good. Judging from what you wrote, I guess you will join the nanny group after this.

Harry Potter: My parents are dead. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I grew up living with relatives. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I was admitted to an extraordinary school hidden in the ordinary world. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: The school I went to by train. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: The Headmaster favors me. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I defeated the villain again and again under the principal's arrangement. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I still have a soul inside me. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: After going through hardships, I tore apart the villain and became the savior. Lu Mingfei: Me too... I've been through five books and I'm still a loser.

I like this kind of cold, handsome, and straightforward protagonist. The author just doesn't spoil people when flirting with girls. I don't know why I can't stand most of the hot-blooded novels now. The last time I was hot-blooded was watching the early "Slaying God". The protagonist is very good, really invincible, not dragging

No kidding, there's a pretentious, stuffy, bourgeois, youthful air to it.

OK, I am also King Akaishi and I have shown you that the writing is better than Jiangnan, Gao Ran is more invincible than Chen Dong, and the sugar is sweeter than the Third Young Master of the Tang Family.

In fact, the author does not need to make such a reluctant excuse to make money, but can use "My parents are the beacon between me and the world. My parents are gone, and I need an important beacon to determine my position in the world. Money is a concept, it can be anything, I choose it to be a beacon."

A cup of coffee with a strong aroma, but if it continues to be strong, it will only be sour. I want to see a bad boy stop being a bad boy, not another bad boy, especially the reason why the bad boy is bad is not whether he is strong or not. Very powerful and extremely weak, there is a precedent.

Tomato does not have the copyright of Dragon Family The higher the score, the faster you die. Su Xiaoqiang's part poisoned me I am reincarnated into the dirt to take revenge

It's great. I love watching it. It's so interesting [laughs evilly] Pig's feet really likes to pretend to be a pig. He is obviously very strong, but he looks so useless. He even pretends not to see the girl's affection. What's wrong with the little goddess? Everyone has told you their cards, but you are still pretending to be a fool. What a good customer.

The writing is quite good, who are the heroines? [Explore] The heroine should have Nuonuo [exploration]

It's good-looking, very pretentious, and very enjoyable, but it feels like it goes by very quickly. Every stage of pretentiousness comes too fast. It doesn't mean it's unnatural, but it means it can be written in more detail, including each person's personality or some circumstances. , Otherwise there wouldn't be much to write about. The more exciting parts of the first part of Dawn of Fire were basically written in fifty or sixty chapters. , I can write a little slower, and I have to say that there are shortcomings that will make me feel aggrieved later on. , The protagonist's character is too good. Lazyness is just laziness, which gives people a slightly aggrieved feeling. When I scold you, you still don't respond, when I slap you in the face and you don't react, and sometimes I mock you, it's not lazy anymore. I feel it's just aggrieved. Also, the protagonist lacks a means of attack, especially when the cursed spirit is added to the cursed spirit system in the later stage, it seems a bit fragmented, you know. , And then the author had to suppress his combat power due to writing problems, and never gave the protagonist a strong weapon. I was only given one Youyun, and in the later stage I used a Black Flash to transform into physical education, and then Warlock Cang Ahe was basically useless. It was absolutely impossible for the Soul Eater Knife and Tian Ni Mou to come out. After they came out, I just played it.

It's okay, I quite like it. As for the heroine, she's almost a little goddess, Zero, Xiami, Nono, and the other one is almost Eriyi. The main reason is that Eriyi hasn't appeared yet. I haven't confirmed it yet. I saw that the author said it was 5. I don't know if there will be more. Also, the update is too slow, two chapters a day. Here we recommend 10086 chapters a day.

The writing is good, and the writing style of the drama and emotional lines is balanced, which is considered good in Tomato. There are no bad points so far, but the original Dragon Clan novels have not made any corrections or corrections. I hope that in the future, I won't do anything like other Dragon Clan fandoms, and try to make it longer.

The setting that is linked to the spell is a bit disconnected, but the writing is good and the writing style is still there. Come on, the author [Upvote] [Upvote] [Upvote] You don't need to read some people's comments in the comment area. I saw one person who had read more than 7,000 books and only read 3,000 hours in total. Niu Boyi could only say, I don't know where to write comments.

I disagree with your point of view. I think this pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. Because of the length of this screw, it can easily directly affect the torque of the excavator. When you smash it in, it will produce a large amount of high-energy protein in an instant, commonly known as UFO, which will seriously affect economic development.

..., To suppress the fighting power, you can eat if you are really hungry [laughing awkwardly]

I think the writing is very good, and the multiple female protagonists are also very good. The characteristics of each character are retained, and the character arrangement is reasonable. It is not like other characters of the same type that lick Chu and Kai. However, after the spell is integrated, the follow-up content takes up too much. I need to hurry up and push forward the emotional line!

It must be five points, and the original protagonist Dragon Clan fanfic ranks among the top three. I didn't become the main character's nanny, and I didn't write directly according to the original line. The original part of the plot has reasonable connection, reasonable changes, reasonable character design, and strong combat power. There is also a group of people who give low scores. I think it's because some people are used to reading The Dragon King's Son-in-law and the Immortal Emperor's President Invincible, so they gave this one a low score.

It's pretty good. I watched Dragons a long time ago, but to be honest, I wasn't very satisfied with the ending. I didn't really like the pessimistic ending, especially the ending of the junior sister and Eriki. Life is hard enough, why should I endure hardship while reading a novel? But after watching this, I felt willing to continue reading. It's very simple and it's just satisfying.🌚🌚🌚

It's really a cool story, it's not semi-invincible. By the 150th chapter, the Dragon King is no longer his opponent. There was a mechanism category before that used experience cards given by the system, such as the Injustice game that ignores distance. In order to save people remotely across half the world, in fact, with the strength of the protagonist at the time, he could save people without such experience cards.

The writing style of the Dragon Clan fanfics I have read so far are all good. If you like to read Dragon Clan, you can try this one. Anyway, I personally think it is much better than those Douluo Continent fanfics.

He is one of the dragons with good physical fitness. I hope the update will not be interrupted [Blow kiss]

It's very well written, keep it up, author.

This book is pretty good and pretty It would be better if the templates of Heaven, Curse and Six Eyes could be separated.

A rare dragon fan, very well written

How to say it? I don't understand what the hero is doing, is he so short of money? (￢_￢)

I think we can add Moxuluo Ten Kinds of Shadow Spells Moxuluo Moxuluo

I feel good, but my ability to express my personality is a bit poor.