Long Aotian, Who Broke Off the Engagement, Begged Me to Get Back Together

An old enemy is an old enemy. . . An old enemy cannot become a wife. Once you become a wife, you can no longer look your old enemy in the eyes frankly and tell him that I am going to kill you. . If you become a wife, you can only huddle under the quilt together at night and get into the hotbed of desire and love. . So the old enemy can only be the wife. . Oh no. . . I mean. . . So the wife can only be an old enemy. . . Feel sorry. . I mean. . . Rival. . . Serious version: It's so good, it's completely shocking and delicious! Reading the article for the first time made me want to read it again. The relationship between the two of them is so flirtatious and ambiguous. It is no longer a simple scheming dog and an arrogant cat. The charm can be described. The writing style is so powerful and makes me so happy. Every time they get along, I can savor it for a long time. Hehehehe...

The writing is very good, and the characters are very realistic, not paper-like. But there is a problem. It may be because I am too controlled. No matter whether it is strength, strategy, or even appearance, I will always be second. It makes me feel a little uncomfortable. But after all, is this book about Long Aotian? [Grievance] Long Aotian must have maxed out all his skill points😌 But every time I feel like I'm being deceived, I feel very uncomfortable. I don't know if you can understand this feeling. 😔

So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is a god It was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water

Double strength! ! ! ! ! (Emphasis added) Aotian's character is also different from those of the popular Long Aotian male protagonists. He has a bit of a venomous tongue, but it's really cool! ! ! Xianya is super strong~ What impressed me deeply is that there was a small plot where he did not wait for Aotian to save him, but he had already solved the little cannon fodder. Both of them are currently in the God Transformation stage (of course the villain they encountered must be stronger than the God Transformation stage), so it seems that the protagonist is not strong, but in fact he is already very strong. After all, the villain created in the article must not be too weak. Recommend [Sending Hearts]

It's a pain to follow the serial... The names in it are so nice, hehe, the personalities and images are very appetizing 😋 The transportation is good and I have a taste of it. Boss, let's play a game with dozens of chapters updated every day.

It's so hit, it's so beautiful. At first glance, it makes you lose your temper, forget your love, and lose your life. It's very beautiful. The growth of the protagonist is different from other fairy tales. It's not that he is a waste at the beginning and then slowly grows up. There should be a little interlude that mentions their previous things. It's very beautiful. At present, the system of this book in more than 6 chapters is really very useless. It is a kind of routine human trafficking sub-system. I haven't seen anything likable so far. I thought it was quite interesting at first, but later I found that it was useless and only issued some tasks. Mission accomplished, no reward. There is a penalty for mission failure. In the early stage, I felt very warm watching Shou and Gong fight each other, but in the later period, especially the seven days when the system opened punishment, I felt that Shou was particularly weakened. After all, it was a dual-power setting. I felt that Shou was suppressed except for a little help from outsiders. He was coveted by the system, and he was punished by the system. Even the part where the fantasy was forced* seemed very interesting at first, but looking back, it was not rape, but this is just the setting of this book, and I still like it. Finally, I would like to ask if the system can be terminated earlier. I want to see the couple's warm daily life.

It's very beautiful😄 The characters and everything really poked me •˶ɞ˶• The writing is also good ⊹꙳ ˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳ Jun Daochu seduced our cool Xiaoxian like this💛💛 Little Couple 99

The author's character portrayal is very delicate: Gong is not an impolite face, Yuan is not pretentious, the elders are reasonable and will not unconditionally favor anyone, the supporting characters are not jealous of this one and harm that one, and everyone has their own career line. The plot and emotions are described very naturally, and the characters are all flesh and blood, with their own highlights and cuteness. Come on keep updating!

Organized, logical, well-written, thoughtful, the characters are not broken, and the plot is novel. No one of the young lovers is stronger than the other, only who can pretend to be more vicious than the other. You deserve to have the brainless cookie [give heart]

I am Chaowei. The author's writing style directly supports this huge world view. Boss, is this still a tomato? I remember, aren't we monks? Oh, I went and finally had meat. This character design is also very touching. I just couldn't stop eating it. Those who like dual heroes can watch it, those who like group portraits can watch it, those who like sword cultivators can watch it, and those who love family relationships can watch it. I think the deputy CP is very good, it adds a different flavor to the world, and it makes the world fuller. It's really delicious😋 I only evaluated it after reading it all. It's so innocent.

Leave a comment about Chapter 60, which may contain minor spoilers: The writing style is okay, and the reading is not boring or obscure. Except for Shen, who has his own system, the words and sentences used by other characters are in line with the current context, and there are no weird modern colloquial words that exceed the outline, which is a plus! ! The language and writing style are relatively relaxed and humorous, and there are jokes but not very vulgar bad jokes. In the early stage, the main emotional line, of course, the plot line also develops, the emotional line is relatively slow to develop (I like this, thank you, thank you, if you have a lover, you should get to know each other deeply, so that the emotional foundation is very solid). In Chapter 60, Shen is not fully enlightened, and he feels confused and nervous, which is so cute. There is also a lot of foreshadowing and suspense. I hope the author will remember to fill in the holes later. These sixty chapters are all written quite naturally, and the characters and plots are not broken, nor are they deliberately created to create a delicate and fragile slave made of industrial saccharine. In short, both of them are quite strong, and they are completely made for each other. Chapter 60 is not enough to read at all, but I plan to read it because I am a forgetful person, otherwise I will forget most of the previous plot after reading it in a few days (big hugs to the author) I hope that the subsequent plot can be carefully polished and not collapse. I am very optimistic about this book~ ❗There are a little spoilers I haven't read Yang Persimmon for a long time. I came back and reread this article. I've reached chapter 164 and I think it's okay so far. It's just that the main plot line in the middle and late stages is a little dull. Of course, the main CP is still very powerful. I didn't expect it to be a love at first sight scene. The time view and background are quite grand. Depending on the situation, there is more than one world line, including rebirth/return. There are quite a lot of characters, and there are group portrait elements. Overall, it is good. If it has not collapsed in the middle and late stages of writing, I can only say that this article is indeed worth reading.

Good to watch, good to watch, good to watch [Shy] Watch it if you like dual heroes, watch if you like old enemies turned lovers, watch if you like wolf-dog attacks, fishing-type attacks, watch if you like true fragrance attacks, watch if you like ambiguous pull, watch if you like love at first sight, watch if you like each other but don't realize it, watch if you like plot reversals, watch if you like good writing [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The logic of this article is clear, the characters are full-bodied, and more importantly, there is no embarrassing thing for the protagonist to do for the sake of the reader's happiness. This kind of article will become more and more popular as time goes by. I am already following the update, and I can only read two chapters a day. (Blessed are those who follow the update) I have done the receiving and attacking 3 times, and the soul 3.4 Times [laughing] Attacking this person will also benefit himself. Once in the devil world, this kid kissed Shou while he was not paying attention, and successfully received a slap from Shou✋. Then there is Gu, don't be affected by it. In my eyes, it is a good relationship (Gong originally fell in love with Shou at first sight, but Shou came on the scene a little late, and Gung regretted it after he canceled the marriage. Didn't those scenes of robbing things and doing tasks after that show Shou's creation?) Then the author buried a lot of pits and filled them up. The writing is really good, so go for it, (Hungry Rice Rice (＾ｖ＾)😘)

Must be 5 stars, must be 5 stars! ! ! ! ! ! It's so beautiful, and the writing is so good. Anyway, I think so. Every character created has its own characteristics, and I like every character very much. Because I stored my brain in the first chapter, I was confused when I read it later. But then I took my brain back, and it didn't seem to be of much use after I got it back, so Because my brain is not very good, but the writing is really good. I think it is the best book I have read in recent times. I cried several times after reading it. It was the kind of involuntary tears. The relationship between the two is not cruel. It is a sweet story (I think it is). I recommend everyone to read it. You will not be able to stop after reading it. Believe me, everyone should read it! ! ! ! ! It's a great article with great potential. It's 9 o'clock or so. I trust my old bookworm's intuition. Let's go and read it. Once you read it, you won't say anything, and you won't be able to stop after reading it [shy][shy]

Give me the score! ! Not a brainless article! Really pretty! ! The early system was useless because it was broken! ! ! The mystery hasn't been completely solved yet, but I feel like it's because I want to save Fang'er! So you are not allowed to scold Tongzi anymore, you are so pitiful! And! I was forced to do the tasks in the early stage because of the main system. It seems that there are very deep threads buried in it. I can't say too much. If I say it, it will be a spoiler! It's really amazing! ! ! Then there's the character! I love the trappings of this arrogant kitty! ! A beautiful woman with a hard mouth and a soft heart! The fighting power is off the charts! Aotian is also very good! I really beg you, the sinister bastard, to pretend to be dead Aotian! When his old enemy slapped him, he had to think about it for several days and said that his wife's hands smelled so good! ! And there's the plot! The author has buried a lot of foreshadowing! Looking forward to unraveling! Show me! ! Really sweet! (I call it part of the past life. I don't know if that's right. Anyway, it's a bit sour but okay.) No loss in investing! A little bit of micro-group portraits, not too many, but everyone's characters are so interesting! ! I eat eat eat eat eat eat!

It's so well written [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] The emotional line between the two people is very well written, there is no plot of forced love, and the characters are well created. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's been so long since I've seen a book that suits my taste. I'm so touched [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

Maybe it's because I haven't read enough of it, but the author's writing style is different from what I've seen before. The protagonist's image is very novel, and I like the idea that it doesn't follow the routine but can be achieved very much. I'm short on words, but it's just good-looking. I like qwq. Therefore, I am not satisfied with whether the author can update 100 chapters. I also recommend a longer article and hundreds of thousands more words. I'm going to start a serialization and follow up. Come on, author! Good! Qwq!

Frog fun, frog fun, this setting really pisses me off! ! ! Shen Bao, just catch people and motor vehicles to death. Motor vehicles, I still like your unruly look before hahh. The author of the preface said that he is too modest to say that his writing is not good. The fighting scenes are wonderful, and every character is handsome and lively. The interactions between friends are not lacking, and there are also small daily interactions between the protagonists. They are so cute! ! ! Every baby is doing well! ! ! The plot was also well received! ! ! The author is really good at keeping people's appetites. There are many doubts. What is Shen Bao's life experience? Why do you want his soul? What exactly does "He" want to do? … 30,000 To 30,000, just sitting there and waiting for food, do you dare to update 100 chapters to kill me? ! ! Come on! ! ! [Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] @ Thirty Thousand Words I don't care, this book is my Bai Yueguang, how can it be so good! ! ! Everyone must go and take a look, you won't lose money if you buy shares! The summary of this book is this: The legendary vinegar king Motorcycle kept eating the top-level succubus + hooker every day after becoming wise, without knowing (?) The jealousy of the stuffing 😄 The perfect correct answer! I don't know if it's my own fault or the fact that 30,000 yuan was written as Taiku, which makes me feel like I can do anything (except official roles). . . No matter, it's just one word anyway! Look! It's him you're looking at! Emmmmm, this book is also finished. I started reading it from chapter 50. There was bitterness and sweetness along the way. I feel a bit regretful that it ended so soon, but I still want to sprinkle some flowers ~ I am also a die-hard fan, haha After finishing this book, I re-read the previous scenes. I have to say that the fight scenes are the best I have ever seen (don't be stubborn, I have read hundreds of books, more than I have read). The fight scenes in this book are really the most well-organized and not exaggeratedly sloppy I have ever seen. It's really good! ! ! Of course, in addition to the fighting scenes, there are also family and friendship scenes. How could they be portrayed so perfectly😱The young couple are sweet and at ease, with almost no abuse... Right? There is one more thing I want to clarify here. Some people should not just say that this is AI just because the writing is good. AI has a way of judging AI by talking nonsense. If you insist on thinking that this is written by AI, please show the evidence, otherwise you can only be regarded as a Joker, and if you don't read the whole text to me, shut up.

I feel very good after reading it, the writing and plot are very smooth (*＾-＾), I haven't found such a novel on Tomato for a long time~(＾-＾)📚It's just that I discovered it too early and haven't read more🥹🥹🥹I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot, please come on, author ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It's super good-looking. I haven't read such a good-looking book about cultivating immortals for a long time. The world view is grand and the logic is clear. It feels like it's not something Tomato can write. The writing is also super good. I really like the relationship between the attacker and the sufferer. I love this kind of beauty training dogs! ! The author should update a little more, and please give me more meat👀. Come on, the score will definitely reach 9 points or above

Hahahahaha, shocking and delicious, hahahaha, stuffing, you are so cute, hahahahaha, the writing is smooth and the plot is good, every interaction makes me happy, little lovers, you must keep it up...! ! There are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stage, because I often forget to watch without thinking, and sometimes I can't react, but it's a small problem) It's delicious with a bit of humor 😋 It can be seen that Brother Chu is a bit of a dog, so just keep going! This is exactly the 500th comment. Hahaha, boss, I love you and I want to follow you. Also, I think Hyudu is also fun, hahahaha.

It was so enjoyable to write! ! ! I really like the protagonist's character and Long Aotian's confession in the later stage (Hey kid, it turns out...), There are so many questions. Wow, is the author foreshadowing step by step? It's so fun to watch! I'm really looking forward to the foreshadowing scenes later on! ! ! I really like the idea of ​​​​the article, flying upward step by step. Oh my god... It's so shocking to watch. And Aotian's character is also very good (wow, this is boring...) Author, you must write 30,000 words per day! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I really like the characters of Gong and Shou! The attack is dark and affectionate, the mouth is poisonous and agile, and the awakening is very late. In the early stages, he frequently makes sexy moves and tries his best to smooth things over, which is full of tension. The two top geniuses compete with each other on a daily basis, but they never show weakness or hold back. They seem to be enemies, but in fact they hide a secret love and caution that will never change for a century. The more blunt the straight man is, the more awkward and ambiguous the two will get. The main plot has novel ideas, and the protagonist group brings together geniuses from various sects. The characters are vivid, the interactions are lively and interesting, and the bickering and discussions are full of youthful spirit. At present, there is no internal strife or suspicion in the right path. When encountering difficulties, we stand shoulder to shoulder and dare to take risks. It has the relaxed spirit of a young man, but also has structure and warmth. It is very enjoyable to read. Up to now Chapter 146~~

The following is my personal opinion, suspected of being a bit of a spoiler. This is also my first time writing a long review. I hope I can sign it in the future. I think it is very good among books of the same type. The setting of "Long Aotian" at the beginning of Jun Dao also stands up, especially the part where the Wu clan risked the consequences of damaging their foundation to save Shen Xian. I really dreamed about the male video. Long Aotian used all his trump cards and started to lose his life and cut off his foundation. After waking up half-dead and dying for a while, the first thing he did was to coax the angry Shen Xian: Why do you look so bad? Who made you unhappy? However, I think the turn of the love line is a bit abrupt. Although it can be seen from the beginning that Jun Daochu has a good impression of Shen Xian from the beginning, but suddenly he said that he fell in love at first sight from the beginning and fell in love with him to death (? It's actually a bit weird, but it gets much better later on. It's very exciting to see the young couple clinging to each other in the demon world. The first one to think of divine intercourse is God. One thing to say, this book is still worth reading. The protagonist and all the characters are well-developed. However, Jun Daochu and Shen Wuwang are both uncles, so they don't have the sense of youthful micro-group portraits. Good book, like it, recommend it.

The writing and plot are pretty good. I'm almost halfway through it, so I'll save it and give it a good review first. Judging from the direction this plot is taking, I guess it's heading towards a big world view and a heavy direction. I'll read two sweet novels first and then read this one slowly. The current progress is Chapter 216, so I probably won't read any further. When I first saw the synopsis of this book, I was actually persuaded to give it up several times. I thought the protagonist would be the type where a stupid beauty does a task but is misunderstood by Long Aotian. I really had no book to read, so I bit the bullet and clicked on this one. I didn't expect this book to give me such a big surprise. The author's writing style is really good. The characters are also very vivid, I really like this book. I also like Shen Xian very much. He has a high force value. When he is asked to take away opportunities from others, he will return the things to others after completing the task. It has a very distinct personality and personal charm, and it is a double-strength article in every sense. The plot is also pretty good. The first half focuses on a relaxed tone, with the protagonist doing tasks and having fun in the daily life of cultivating immortals. But I actually didn't quite get into the second half. The author's foreshadowing was too long. There are more than 230 chapters in the book. Starting from the first few dozen chapters to more than 200 chapters, there are almost a hundred chapters of foreshadowing. It gave a lot of pitfalls, and in the end it wasn't until more than 200 chapters into the fight against the final villain boss that the explanation was almost complete. It really feels like the middle part is too wordy. But overall, this book is still very good. If you don't mind the plot being too long, this book is highly recommended.

I can't think of anything that can be demined at the moment. Maybe it's because I have a deputy CP and some treasures can't accept it. It's a double strength. I love double strength. In short, it's very delicious. Thank you to the author. My children love to eat it and the stream of consciousness is also very delicious...

2026.7.23 An old enemy is an old enemy. You cannot become a wife. Oh, no, I mean I have to become a wife. . . (10,000 Words omitted here) The little couple are so cute, Donger (Shen Xian) is this arrogant kitten. 😋You are not humiliating him at all, you are rewarding him! Motor vehicle (Jun Daochu) after eating meat, he seemed to be "enlightened" and pestered his wife [licking the screen] But it still hurts, the relationship between the young couple after several lives is too painful [crying] The deputy CP is also good, dull wood vs fishing beauty. This is a micro-group portrait, working together to save people. In short, I wish everyone peace and happiness🥰

The most delicious thing is when an old enemy turns into a wife. Then the song begins: It's so beautiful. My niece saw her menstrual period, and Lazi saw her neurosis. It's the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for people in a vegetative state. It's so beautiful that I can see how much the five-guaranteed households in the village miss and love the widow. I can see the tears flowing from the corners of my mouth and flooding into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. It's beautiful, it's God, my rose tears illuminate my dark life, it makes my world meaningful, I run, I jump, I do the tango on the balcony on the 20th floor, it makes me realize that God does exist, I'm so good that I can't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

I will tell you the truth, the simplest, and the least tortuous. I will only speak human words, and only speak the most important things. They are all the most real, clear, and to the point. I won't play around with lies, won't go around in circles, and won't talk nonsense. I will tell you everything in one sentence, without hiding anything. I will tell you very straightforwardly: Beautiful, super beautiful! ! ! Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. Don't be misled by the previous plot. There are many twists and turns. The author's fight scenes are very well written and very vivid. The young lovers are so sweet [love] [love] [love] You can tell by looking at my reading time, 22 hours, highly recommended [love] [love] [love]

It's quite good. What a pity. It's serialized. There have been so many serializations recently. It made my head ring. (Why does the cat keep ringing?). I have read the author's previous book and I feel that there has been a lot of progress. The introduction and characters of this book are very good. The characters in the text are very cute. Motor Vehicles. It's sure that two-way running is like a motorcycle. The crush in the early stage is also a secret love. It's not obvious yet obvious (what am I talking about??). It's pretty good. It's a bitter rival. It's two-way running. The relationship is quite natural. The plot is also good. It's 99 for the stuffed motor vehicle. I look forward to replenishing it. It's okay without it.