Azure*****

It's a very nice book. The author's writing is very good. The setting in the book is very novel. My eyes really lit up when I saw Hina traveling through time. The language barrier at the beginning also made me feel real. The setting of this book is very different from other books that travel to Kivotos. The protagonist in the book has also changed from the teacher in the game to Hina's real teacher. Every chapter feels different, and the author's attitude really makes me cry to death [blowing kiss]. As long as you comment, the author will reply [blowing kiss]

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This is Hina's article that I love to read. There are too few articles about Hina. I have read most of them. Some relationships progress too fast, some are too short, and some are good, but after reading them, they are so cute\(//∇//)\ The end of this book is not the 76 chapters before Dao said Dao brushed it aside.

Personally, I feel that this is a very good time-travel encounter novel. There are no other students, so it is not so chaotic. It is a very good love novel from meeting to cultivating. As a Hina chef, I highly recommend it *^_^*

Author, you can improve the protagonist's life. Although I don't play this game, I really hope that the author can make Hina's life better. She is too tired. Let her have a good rest in this world. Please author. She is carrying a burden that does not belong to her at that time, and it would be nice for her to live a carefree life in this world, but Hina's characteristics need to be hidden.

Overall it's nice and sweet. The only problem I see so far is that there is a plot in the hot spring in Chapter 75 that seems to be contradictory. Logically speaking, you should know the teacher and know that you have wings and are not from this world. But it has little impact on the perception

Why are you so sharp? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] It's so uncomfortable, why is the back of my neck so big? Although I feel very sad, I just want to give five stars [cry][cry][cry][cry][send my heart]

I read the two accounts together, so the time is not equal. This book roughly tells the story of Hina's time travel to real life. The author's writing style is delicate and his thoughts are clever. It is definitely a rare and good article.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that the stage is not set in Kivotos. I hope the author can make a side story about returning to Kivotos, or that the heroine of the next book will be Nozomi or Hina. I still prefer Kivotos, because only in Kivotos can I feel that the protagonist is still in Bilan. How should I put it? The more I read, the deeper I felt. I found that this book is made up of small stories, such as the daily episodes in animation. But unlike animation, novels do not have pictures, which means the visual sense is not that strong. Moreover, if the stories are put together, it is difficult to write without a main line. It's long. It can be seen that the author Jiang has tried his best, but the main tone determines that the content of this book will only be daily life, unlike other Kivotos fans who can rely on the original plot. If you want to write a long and not so difficult to write, it is best to determine a main line, otherwise the desire to read will not be strong enough.

This is so pretty, kids, Nai Chu quietly shattered (

One day! Nice! Let the cutie have a good rest in this world

Very beautiful, highly recommended by Hina Kitchen [Like]

The writing is superb. It's the best I've ever read.

It can be my daily life [Like]

Finally, I have a novel that I can read

The subject matter is fresh and not cliched

Very pretty, Hina is so cute

Very well written, what else do you want to choose from everyday writing? After reading this book, you can read another book by the author

It's good. Get more books like this.

Okay, hina is the cutest

After reading Chapter 15, I felt it was very interesting

The emotional description is very rich. The actions of the protagonist are also common sense. The portrayal of the era is also very consistent with cognition. The early writing was a bit repetitive. But that doesn't stop it from being well written.

Hina's big baby is so cute that I love it [love] [love] [love] After watching the show, go directly to the national highway to cross I have been reading it for a long time and now I have some suggestions for the author: 1. Error: Riai's wings are similar to bat wings. The author can search for them. There are no feathers or anything like that. Also, when the Kivotos people are sleeping or unconscious, the halo will disappear. It needs to be changed. When Hina is asleep, the halo will not glow. 2. Plot: If the author can't write everyday stories, he can try to add more storytelling, otherwise he will get tired of reading everyday stories. These are some of my suggestions to the author that I hope can be adopted

This is the best book I've ever read in The Blue Files Super sweet, so sweet! Hina is ecstatic! I feel like I can heal the whole day by looking at it a little bit every day (by the way, I am now level 58, Hina is 5+3, skills are 5+7+8+7, favorability is 26, favorability is equipped with T2, is this considered a cook)

Looks great, hina chef wins

That's great. Write more. Don't forget your origins and keep writing about our cutie.

It's so sweet, so good-looking, so good-looking, why isn't he popular? I suggest the author change the cover. What should I say about this cover? I didn't recognize it as Hina when I saw it for the first time.

I like it very much, come on author