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Shennong is coming It's a harem development series, the protagonist's soul travels, and the settings are basically based on the original version. The plot also has a clear main line, and there are no poisonous points. However, there are many chapters introducing the background and settings of the narration, about 1/5 of it. Some people like to read it, and some people don't like to read it. Personally, I still recommend grain.

The plot is okay, it's basically original, it's a harem travel story about growing up, and there aren't too many poisonous points. The main shortcoming at present is that it lacks major conflicts and battles, is not exciting enough, and is a waste of time. Apart from the beginning, the protagonist's strength does not change much later on. The main part of the story is devoted to improving the strength of the harem. It is equivalent to the sense of déjà vu where the protagonist drinks soup and the crew eats meat.

It's a good read, and it's more of a daily routine. Personally, I like to watch daily routines. The selection of girls is also reasonable, and there are some original contents. The only drawback is that about one-fifth of the content is about introducing various settings. It is more friendly to readers who have not read the original One Piece and fan fiction. However, it seems more verbose to readers who have read it, which affects the viewing experience.

The harem travel articles are not lacking in excitement, and they are enough to be read at a glance. Three updates a day are enough. Stealing a ray of truth from Hongmeng, I dare to break through the blue sky with the magic flame. Jiuyou has been walking for thousands of eons, and thousands of roads have been used as fuel to burn the old dust. If you don't worship the Three Pure Ones and follow my path, you will swallow up the sun and moon and control the universe. When Zun Cheng looked at the ancient world again, he saw only the same people who had bowed before him.

There is nothing poisonous about this harem travel story. I hope Yamato can get on board in the later stage. The protagonist's abilities can be referenced by the Stealing Immortal in Sun and Moon Tongtso in the later stage. Poor physique A domineering move Theft of space Stealing the fruit

The Okay Developing Series is a good read, and the writing is pretty good. The author will go to Wano Country to abduct Yamato, then return to the East China Sea, develop for a few years, develop his power to dominate the world, and make Zoro Sanji a subordinate subordinate.

Not bad, not bad. I really like it. There aren't many poison points. It's quite interesting to collect and eat. But I feel that the combat power increases a bit quickly. This is all due to Teacher Kai. Although I can't beat him at all and it's a team battle, I can pass a few moves and I'm almost close to the strength of a candidate general. There are only more than 150 pictures. I don't know how the author will write in the future. I hope there can be more and it won't end too quickly.

For me, I can agree with this kind of fanfic's interpretation of the original character's character and some settings of the original work, which is enough for me to give it five stars. The fruit this book gives to the protagonist is quite innovative to be honest. It is not the same kind of fantasy beast species, but a functional superhuman system that can assist in cultivation and has some more practical ones. The ability is quite interesting to watch. The plot is not about fighting for hegemony. It has multiple female protagonists, but it is not a harem story full of women. It is a stamp collection style that brings some original characters on board. As for the specific plot, you can think of it as traveling to a foreign country, seeing the scenery, collecting treasures, and just joining in for fun.

After forming the ship, it was indeed a harem group, and they were all trained since childhood. It's just that they are all female team members, but other than that, they're not toxic at all.

The quality is okay, there are some original parts, some descriptions are really unnecessary, just simple descriptions are enough, too many will only make it look wordy.

How can I put it, the daily episodes in Haifu, the fights are like diaries, the harem eats meat, the protagonist drinks soup, the fruit development is exactly like the indigenous people, the innovative fruit ability is not as good as the vampire fruit next door, which directly stores all the blood with the fruit ability into one's own body. This stolen fruit can only obtain some basic memory, recovery, and energy, and other things are unimaginable.

Can we say that the One Piece world itself is special. Devil Fruits are the embodiment of people's imaginary abilities, and they have countless abilities. When people eat them, the Devil Fruits change their own genes, and the children born will inevitably be affected. The fittest continue to survive. The average physical fitness of One Piece people continues to increase, and strong people emerge in endlessly.

200. Mainly in collecting and cultivating, it is more daily, but sometimes it will make you feel sick. Can't you just be too weak to survive? Isn't it a cool article? It seems that the protagonist's combat power is about the same, or even weak. In the end, he insists on fighting against someone whose strength matches his own. In the end, he won't lose. But do you think it's cool? !

Very nice. The protagonist does not delay in acquiring a daughter, and he is also very thoughtful in developing his abilities.

Pirates + harem + growth flow I saw Chapter 180 and I finished it in less than 2 days. Do you have your own settings, no obvious flaws (if you don't go into details word for word), are there any differences between some of the settings and the original work? (I saw it in the comment section, I didn't create it. I haven't watched One Piece in a long time, so I basically read it as a fan). The protagonist's soul travels. If you mind, don't enter. I have to eat 2 people at the moment. There is nonsense in the content to introduce the background of the story. You can skip it and it will not affect it. Overall the writing is okay. The overall evaluation is about 8 points. It is suitable for book shortage, a change of taste, or if you really have no books to read, you can take a look.

The first 350 chapters can still be read, but after 350 chapters, I feel like they were written by AI. Two paragraphs below (a figure walked out of the cabin. He had short black hair, wheat-colored skin, a few freckles on his face, and a naked upper body with clear muscle lines. There was a white beard logo tattooed on his back, but there was a long scar on the logo, like a scar burned by flames. Ace is now Akainu's deputy.) At this time, the red dog is still a general ("Marshal, the Five Old Stars want to talk to you." Akainu turned around and took the phone bug. ) The writing is not good when describing the fight. Maybe this AI is free?

You can steal talents, Neptune-like vitality, and domineering energy!

@Show. It has no poisonous points so far. I wonder if the author can get a big sharp knife and let the protagonist eat the artificial blue dragon fruit with the knife. Create something similar to the Qinglong Yanyue Sword. When I think of the protagonist holding a Kaido, he can breathe fire and wind. Just want to laugh. [Laughing out loud]

To design a borrowing fruit, ability means that you can design a loan contract. For example, a person with ability will pay 5 million beli and borrow half of your power for 99 years. If the borrower dies, there is no need to return it. Similar operations can be unlimited, life span, understanding, physique, strength, resilience, learning ability, charm, luck, etc. Everything you have can be borrowed. How is this ability? Awakening is a forced loan. Before awakening, borrowing requires the consent of both parties. After awakening, you can unilaterally force a loan.

There is nothing poisonous about it, and it was written relatively late, so there will be no backstabbing in the original novel. The theory of fruit development is also quite thoughtful. Maybe the original novel will explain the mechanism of Devil Fruit clearly when the time comes. The secret fruit is well known because it was eaten by the protagonist. It is said that the fruit will be born. It evolved into the form of the Human Fruit, Phantom Beast Species, and Thieving Demon King, just like the rubber fruit. It was originally just a very ordinary superhuman fruit. It was only because the person who ate it was Happy Boy, and his legend and people's belief in it, that the fruit evolved and became the Nika fruit.

Let me tell you this, I have read the last chapter of this novel in nearly a day. You can check it out. Pig's feet are not invincible at the beginning. They also have time to develop. There are many female protagonists. You can check it out and try to absorb everything that should be included.

It's nice to look at, and has a bit of a daily-text feel. It's very comfortable to read. Collecting Devil Fruits is also in line with my collecting mentality. I can use it, but I can't live without it.

This is the best pirate novel to my liking. The fruits are distributed reasonably among all the members, the strength grows smoothly, and it is heartwarming and full of passion for fighting. Harem has a lot of writing about each female character. It's not the kind of thing you just accept and ignore. It's a story that keeps growing along with you. It's a great pirate novel.

The author can take a look at the name of the move. The prefix represents the power used. For example, Kaido's overlord-colored winding move has a prefix of great power. Zoro's moves are prefixed with ghost energy. The latest Yama prefix should be Overlord color attack. Is the author interested in writing a book about traveling to Marvel with Sauron's template?

? ? ? ? ? ? Watch it, then go have a meal and then be gone

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Damn it, what about the books? Why are they gone after cultivating them for so long and finally producing results?

The book is still okay, at least there are not many things that cannot be explained. That is, in the two pages 291 and 292, where did the incident of causing a big fuss about Maria Joe come from? Did the author forget to change the previous plot, or forgot to change the following content.

It's very interesting. The author has his own understanding and thoughts about One Piece. He is neither a navy nor a pirate. I finally see a protagonist who looks like a normal human being in One Piece. However, the subsequent battle descriptions are a bit repetitive. The two Mario books are also very good, but they just feel a bit extreme, not like time travellers, but more like native pirates.

Doesn't the fluttering fruit flutter once and then permanently? Why is it that Dasqi keeps controlling it?