[Puzzle-Solving, Scheming Demon Lord X Cold, Shattered Immortal Venerable]
Qu Yuanxiu transmigrated into a book.
It was a mysterious novel from an unofficial website. He remembered it for one reason: the protagonist had suffered an absolutely miserable fate.
The protagonist, an Immortal Venerable named Yuyuan, had once been the moon in the heavens, only to be dragged down by a sinister Demon Lord. After that came the usual tropes of this kind of story: imprisonment, humiliation, degradation... In the end, he lost every last shred of pride in the Demon Realm.
Qu Yuanxiu: Ugh!
That was too awful. He could be the Demon Lord instead. He wasn't nearly that bad.
Then his dream came true. Sitting atop a high platform, Qu Yuanxiu looked down at Yuyuan, the Immortal Venerable, surrounded by demons and looking utterly wretched. In that moment, he seemed to have become a little bad himself.
If he took over, it didn't seem like such a bad idea, did it?
Unlike the Demon Lord in the original story, Qu Yuanxiu had no taste for watching a high-and-mighty beauty fall from grace. If Yuyuan wanted to be the bright moon, then Qu Yuanxiu would be a star in the heavens, keeping him company... one he couldn't shake off or get rid of.
The teacher's writing style is quite online, but I personally don't like pure hate couples, so the deputy CP just feels that it is crazy and always wrong. The main CP emotional line is a bit overwhelming for me personally, and the sobriety makes me feel a little uncomfortable. However, in fact, I feel that this may be a more real love in real life. It is not desperate, nor will we do it until death. I don't really like to watch this kind of plot where two people go through various things and finally separate. Although regret may be the normal state of life and the end of most relationships, after all, the purpose of reading a novel is to see something that is not in life!
The story setting is very novel. But I only read two chapters of the article, and there were at least four parts in it (I didn't write a paragraph, I was afraid that people would think I was deliberately looking for trouble, and would be accused of guiding the author's writing). It didn't look like it was written by a human (no derogatory meaning), and it looked like an AI talking in its sleep (not that the author really used AI). The big logic is there, but the fighting started at the small logic, and the use of adjectives, quantifiers, and nouns was a bit confusing. The author can finish a novel with 100 chapters, which is already very impressive. After all, there are a lot of people who don't have the perseverance to finish the novel, and there are a lot of people who have stopped updating. It has exceeded 🍅50% of the authors. Come on, I feel that I still need to write more novels and read more good literary works. The wording will gradually become more accurate. If the author improves his writing skills in the future, he can take out the articles he wrote in the past (such as this one), revise them, and improve them. I'll slip away first, come on, author.
The main CP ended up being fucked in the extra chapter, spreading flowers, I quite like the character of the main CP, but Gong is too sober, I thought he might give up and go home, but he went home in the end, and the deputy CP Chun Hate doesn't like food very much because he is a bit perverted and can't eat it, and I don't understand how the love between the two pairs of deputy CPs came about, especially the pair of demon kings who are so sudden 🤦, overall the author's writing style is okay, very smooth, there is no complicated plot, and you can read it without thinking 🤔
This book was completed in just a few months. The story inside may indeed have some flaws, and I am reading your comments. I still want to thank you all for your support and guidance. I will continue to work hard and write more good stories. Thank you again for reading.
OK. Very nice! Very nice!!! Well, maybe because he poked my xp too much, I gave him some points in my heart/ᐠ - ˕ -マ Ⳋ But I do think it looks good I think they both love each other very deeply, but actually I kind of want to see Qu Yuanxiu return to modern times and think about Yuyuan day and night. He will go crazy thinking about it but he doesn't regret going home. He can't sleep every night and every time he closes his eyes, his mind will be filled with the image of the other person's determination and he will secretly shed tears. Xiaoqu is a very good person. If Xianzun had been tougher and asked him to stay, wouldn't he have been really trapped? Moreover, I just wanted to see how the Immortal Lord was doing during the three days he stayed. But if the Immortal Lord was unable to recover after a fall, he would not be able to live and he would not be able to leave in this life. But actually I thought that even if he accumulated enough points, he would stay with Xian Zun for two more years before leaving. And suddenly I realized that this task could be easily accomplished if it was not good for Master. After all, the Immortal Lord at the beginning was already very numb in his previous life. He won't resist anything, he can complete the task in 10 days or less, and then continue to let the rotten demon come back to abuse him. But no, he honestly acted as a dog to the Immortal Lord, and actually he did some things later. I actually don't think it was too much, because although the Immortal Lord was a little reluctant, the two of them are now in the stage of true love and it's not that uncomfortable. The characters are also quite three-dimensional. I think the author writes it very well and the story is written very smoothly. Overall, it's quite sweet. I don't think it's a bit sour, right? I quite like the three pairs of CPs in it. Well, I can only say that the author's CP is a bit too similar to mine? Well, anyway, overall it looks good, looks good, has some minor flaws, but I don't think it affects the overall look and feel. Let's talk about some extras. I really like watching the interaction between Fang Jing and Qu Yuanxiu. They are so funny. When I see Xiaoqu again in the extras, I call for people to kill him because he wants to support the other party. I really like reading this kind of novel where the protagonist has friends, and it's not just about 1 and 1 being friends and 0 and 0 being friends. A sweet and heartwarming redemption text? Okay Quyu99 These two warriors of pure hatred felt that they would love each other to death later on, and then they would have convulsions from time to time and cause minor injuries to each other. Well, but the whole thing is the daily life of dogs and their owners? Guard and master? Jin Meng is also very cute!!! This diaosi demon is indeed very popular. OK, forget it. Qu Yu99 It's normal for Xiaoqu to want to go home. . . Everyone misses home, right? It can't be said that their love is not deep enough. I've been reading it over and over again Everyone said he was sober. But I actually think that he is sober and sinking mainly because Xian Zunren is so good! Otherwise Xiaoqu really can't leave I still want to watch... I also want the extras Happy New Year!!!
The plot of the story is interesting and funny, but mixed with a sour flavor. The reason may be different from the ending of most cross-book novels. Like Dongzao, it is sweet at first and then sour. The main focus is on the desire to return home after completing the task and the pity and love for Shou. The process is sad and infuriating. The rest of the characters and the deputy CP are very crazy and weird. Their hatred is mixed with the feeling of mental illness, but it is still funny. I can only say that the main character loves Shou but is sensible enough to do his best to help redeem him like entering the dungeon, but he does not sink into it. I have always been firm in my original intention [I want to return to the real world and have a family and a career]. Maybe it is to be simple and yet not lose my original intention. Use warmth to reshape the soul of the master and give him a different ending. Of course, I don't recommend it to those who want to read a sweet book about salvation, because this book actually does not belong to the real world. Instead, it is more about the salvation of real subjects. It has a sweet and sour feeling. The so-called cold tea after the Chinese New Year.
The writing is very nice and the writing style is also good. When I saw the ending, I always thought that if the protagonist had a bad life in the original world or was an orphan, he would definitely stay. But this is exactly the opposite. The first time I saw the protagonist not staying here, I felt a bit uncomfortable. Fortunately, the extra chapter is a little satisfying. Good luck to the author Ovo
Sweet and delicious But when I was reading the copy, I saw the puzzle master. I thought it was really the Demon Lord picking up the pieces of the people and putting them together... It turned out to be the redemption of the text to spell out the broken hearts ((((((I've been reading too many san-related things lately) I like the character design of Xianzun
It is particularly beautiful, the writing style is humorous, and it has a quiet feeling. The plot is smooth and natural, and the characters are real. Probably because I have experienced similar things, I feel very deeply, although in comparison, my experience is very funny. But the feelings I have experienced are very clear and have been activated by this article. I understand them! No, it's really easy for me to understand. . . Woo hoo hoo, I saw the figure of that person in the immortal, and I also saw a little bit of me in the protagonist. I am not as strong as the protagonist in my heart, and I am also very weak, so comparing the ending of my story, not to mention tragic, at least it is very funny. Alas, I can't help myself. After all, it has brought back my sad past. Woo hoo, this is probably the meaning of the novel, tears. When it comes to this article, I have to praise it. It is real, so real. The author understands the psychological journey and motivations of the characters. Everything everyone does is very natural. I also particularly like the writing style of this novel. After reading it for a long time, you will feel that the world is very quiet, and the originally noisy sounds will become calm. Redemption, the Immortal Lord is worthy of being saved by the Demon Lord, and the Demon Lord is worthy of being loved by the Immortal Lord It's really beautiful! And this ending is very happy. The author is really good at writing about the atmosphere of falling in love. It's so sweet, so sweet. Every couple is so sweet, even the sex and hatred are so sweet. It's super good-looking. If this book doesn't become popular, it's God's fault!
It's super, super good-looking. Although the ending feels a bit unsatisfactory, it's all quite sour and bitter, but the hero's personality is the essence of the show, haha, it's so fun, and the Immortal Lord is very gentle and cold, so 7️⃣feeling, so broken! It's been a long time since I read a book that suits my taste. I read it for three hours at a time.