Bai E's Mushoku Tensei

Just the fact that Paul took the initiative to repent in the early adaptation is worthy of a review. Too many fans have inherited the dank treatment of the original work. This one really stands out from the crowd 😢

The unique savior of the Mi family is warm, sunny and cheerful, and his wish is to fulfill everyone's wishes. Even if he is not in the sea of ​​trees, his unique savior attributes will not change. He can run more than 30 million times for the hope that was almost impossible to exist in his eyes at that time, and he has to endure the pain of killing himself, the sadness of killing his companions, and the fire that continues to burn his broken body all the time. The tolerance and tolerance of pain are simply not comparable to the Dragon God. Bai E: "You stupid and arrogant human god! I have brought destruction to you!!"

Come on, author, it can be seen that the author is very attentive to the story and has a certain grasp of Bai E's character. The only thing that I don't understand so far is the part about Lilith where Rudeus ran out of the house and fainted in the snow. I don't know what the author was basing his writing on, but from my personal understanding, I can't imagine why Bai E's character suddenly ran away at that time. Baie not only had a firm will, but also had excellent eloquence when he was in Ochema, and he was also a debater. Other than that, my point of view is that it doesn't really matter whether it has cp or not. This is a story created by you, the author. Whether or not Baie, who becomes Rudeus, has CP, is acceptable as long as there is a logical and different story. Apart from the story... I urge the author to update! I don't know if the author plans to sign a contract and make some money while creating stories. (Whispering) If the author can't be asked to add more updates for the purpose of signing a contract, then we won't be able to see the author's stories faster. (Big boo) All in all, it's well written, so go to the author.

The combination of Bai E and Jobless Reincarnation is a good idea. But the integration between Bai E and the Jobless Reincarnation was not very good. As I watched it, doubts arose in my mind. Is the protagonist Bai E or the lustful Rudy? I feel that the author wanted to write that Rudy was not Bai E, and Bai E traveled through time with memories. The author did not say how many memories he brought with him, so Bai E should be both an adult (referring to the spirit) and a child (referring to the body), but the writing is completely about a child (referring to the spirit and body). If Bai E has a complete memory of his whole life, then he does not need to learn swordsmanship anymore, his knowledge reserve should be sufficient, and he will definitely embark on the road back to Ompharos, because he remembers love and hate, and he will not let his companions (pioneers) face the suffering of Ompharos alone (referring to the author's writing as if Bai E has not yet completed the creation of the world after digging the iron tomb). Finally, my subjective summary: a jobless reincarnated Rudy fanfic that hopes Rudy has the Baie spirit. Also, the writing is a bit messy and a bit incomprehensible.

This Bai'e only has a ray of spiritual consciousness, so it won't affect the progress of Ompharos. Bai'e must carry the world on his back until the end and cannot give up halfway, so this is the Bai'e of the If line. As Rudeus, does Bai E have fighting spirit? Does not having fighting spirit affect his swordsmanship? After Bai E's reincarnation, his swordsmanship should also be more powerful. I hope Baie's version of Rudy has short hair. Long hair doesn't look good and affects the fight.

Very good, I hope there is no heroine

Will there be a plot in which Bai E obtains fire in the future?

According to this, Wan Enemy could not be Atofei's son, right?

It's a very touching work, and the characters are well drawn. The author must finish it.

It should be the three primary colors 🤔🤔