HP: White Night Rose

The emotional line is quite sweet, the plot is novel and interesting, and the overall feeling is good, but some parts are quite OOC [laughing awkwardly]. For example, at the beginning, the heroine's mirror was confiscated and she didn't use the mirror to communicate. Draco was depressed and later went to Hogwarts. I didn't say goodbye to my family properly when I was there. I felt that I might be disappointed, but it was a bit too much. Draco still cared more about his family. Although they had been in contact for a long time, Draco would not be depressed because of this. It would have an impact, but it would not be like this. Later, Harry and the others accidentally broke the mirror, and Draco got angry and cast a curse. He was thinking about something else when he was scolded by SS. It feels like the author forcibly destroyed the character in order to set off Draco's love for the heroine. It's a bit OOC, but overall it's okay. The writing is very good and the plot is exciting [Sending Hearts]

Nice! Super pretty! The author's introduction describes the collision of the vastness of Russia and the arrogance of Britain, which is really special! Recommended to see it! An unexpected collision💥 A princess from the North Kingdom and an heir to an ancient British family, Decorah was so hooked that she willingly entered the princess's world and changed it. The setting of the princess heir is really awesome [love] I really like watching it! This book is different from some other fanfics in that it does not follow the story line of the original work, but creates the plot of the original work in its own unique way, such as the part about Dobby and the treatment of the basilisk, which is super interesting. My thesis is about the Russian Orthodox Church. The author's writing is super interesting and the author is also very active. When the author has something to say, he expresses some of his own views. It feels very attractive and it immediately tied the knot. All in all, it's good-looking 🤩 I'd love to see [admiration] for more updates! Come on, the author will write a lot! I will keep watching!

Highlights from the author 1. The heroine has a golden finger, which will purify the soul. The wizarding world has a religious setting. There will be words such as church, cross, Heavenly Father, etc. I apologize in advance if any beliefs are offended. 2. The heroine's stance is chaotic and neutral, and the family comes first. Voldemort's soul is useful to the family, so he will join the main line, but he will not become friends with the protagonist group. 3. Most of the plot is different from the original work, and the plot is adapted very strongly. 4. The heroine and Draco first met online and then went to Hogwarts to study Western magic. 5. The relationship with Draco is fast and accurate, with nurturing and pulling, and the heroine takes the initiative. 6. The author has a glass heart, generates electricity for love, and hopes to respect and tolerate each other. If you can't accept the settings, you can just delete it. You've all seen it here. If you're curious, just click on it and take a look. Welcome to Svetlana's world. Everything is for the family, for the family, for the family. It's not as fun as punching and kicking you right from the beginning. It has to be laid out for the family according to the development of the plot! !

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty! ! ! ! It comes from the author's last book. I rarely followed the series before but now I do it almost every day! The author's writing style has improved greatly compared to the previous book! At first, because the setting was novel, I wanted to support the author. As a result, I fell in love with the family, the plots are interlocking, and the writing is very good! The author also included pictures for some of the descriptions of jewelry and clothing, and it can be seen that he put great care into it. I originally wanted to wait until I read it all before reviewing the book, but I just couldn't help but praise it. The heroine is the Russian Grand Duchess, a real little princess. At first, he was locked up in a castle and lived a depressing life every day. Later, I accidentally met Xiaolong through a mirror, and became the first student to study in the UK. After they met, I was so sweet that I twisted and crawled, and Xiaolong and the heroine both have the demeanor of heirs. He didn't interfere with Xiaolong's behavior, but with excellent people around him, Xiaolong also became excellent. The heroine's family comes first throughout the whole story, and the second grade's battle of wits with Dumbledore strives for the interests of the family. To be honest, I didn't understand it the first time, but then I saw the author's explanation in the comment area, and I suddenly understood it! Teacher! I will always follow you! ! ! ! Promise me, more updates! OK! ! I want to protect the author! ! I really doubt what the reason is for such a good book to be criticized maliciously. Is it reasonable for Draco to kill everyone? A child with a unicorn wand cannot do such a thing, okay? The following is a bit of a spoiler, I hope everyone who clicks in can read it carefully and not be affected by the negative comments in the comment area. Except for necessary plot advancement, this article is almost entirely written around Draco and the heroine. Draco becomes better and better in the company of an excellent heroine. He has the heroine's preference, a strong family, and a broader vision... In short, he is far beyond his peers in all aspects, and he can really bear the pride of Malfoy. There are actually some negative comments in the comments saying that it always revolves around Harry Potter and Gryffindor, which is really speechless. The heroine is using the savior, to be precise, she is using everyone except Draco. I just prefer Draco. I really don't understand the mentality of not allowing Harry Potter to appear in Harry Potter fandom. Author! You must not be sad! I finally found a good author, and now I really come to see you every day. Big! Don't be offended by those people! ! Support! ! ! !

I've been following the last book since my last one, and it's so good! I have been particularly looking forward to the update of Boss, which is not only good-looking but also gives me a blind box surprise, because Boss is one of the few writers who does not include many original plots! ! Although it's a bit off topic, I'm really fed up with the superficiality of fan fiction and the stuffing of the original plot, so why else should I read fan fiction! ! This one is completely different from the last one! I like it so much. Hey, His Majesty and the Prince. Hey, hey. This time, some Catholic elements were added to the plot of the secret room, which really surprised me! Looking forward to a different plot in the future! ! Boss, update soon!

The heroine is like a queen! This pure blood is very elegant. How can the heirs who have been carefully cultivated since childhood not be as good as a group of lions. Draco doesn't just show off his temper. He will work hard to keep up with the heroine. He will not complain and disturb the heroine when she is busy with things. Instead, he feels that he has to work harder to stand by the heroine's side. In the early stage, the whole process is full of sweet stories, in the middle stage, we start to spread the net, plan the route, and finally close the net. The growth route is arranged very reasonably, and the cultural differences are well displayed without any drama. It's true that many other HPs always write the kind of plain language with funny jokes, which is very dramatic. This one is very good.

The big rice is so delicious. It looks so good. I really like Her Royal Highness the Princess and the little dragon. It reminds me of that story, that story of the princess being carried away by the dragon.

If this book continues to develop with the current level of enjoyment and writing style, it will be ranked among the top three HP fanfics I read. The heroine's identity as a Russian princess is quite rare in HP! (I dare not say that other books do not have this identity at all, at least among the dozens of books I have read personally, it is the only one). The author has a very plump female protagonist! Lanna is not just a happy little girl in love, but what the author describes is a rich man, an outstanding heir cultivated by the royal family with all their efforts. This may be what attracts me the most? (I also like the description of jewelry! It feels like the description is very detailed, and there are basically pictures!) The plot has been changed a lot but most of the characters don't feel OOC! Some changes also make people feel that they are reasonable and even satisfying (Xiaolong's destiny is really good hahahaha) Another thing is that the author is really hard-working and writes several chapters a day (I originally wanted to read it all before writing a review, but I couldn't help myself). I hope you can still see a lot of plots and magic in the future! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] @Everyone calls me to listen

I just finished reading the last word, and my heart seemed to be warmly illuminated by a small cluster of sunshine. I couldn't help but want to write something to tell my wife. As a reader of Harry Potter, I have seen too many unhappiness over the years - people who were broken, missed, and had no time to say goodbye in the original books. I have been secretly hoping that someone can give them a different possibility. So I am really lucky to meet your story. Thank you for creating Lanna. This Grand Duchess from the land of ice and snow blew into Hogwarts like a gentle wind. She is not the kind of golden finger that falls from the sky, nor does she try to "reverse" anything. She is just there, believing and protecting in her own way. Because of her tiny existence, some trajectories that were supposed to lead to tragedy have quietly changed. It was you who made me see that with a little kindness and a little persistence, those characters we love can move towards another life. When reading, I often think, you must love them very much. Because someone who truly loves you will not be willing to let you suffer meaninglessly. The protagonists in your novel will experience wind and snow, but they will not be drowned by it; you give them hardships, but always keep a light and a door for them. This kind of just right tenderness is more difficult to write and more touching than simply "cool" or "torture". I can feel that when you write every word, you are blessing them seriously in your heart. Precisely because there are so many unchangeable regrets in HP, we need such a parallel time and space - where Sirius can live with Harry, Dumbledore survived and solved the regrets that lasted for fifty years, the dean does not have to die with guilt and regret, and Xiaolong can meet someone who is willing to understand him. Thank you for constructing this time and space, allowing me to continue walking back to reality with this peace of mind after I close the novel. It's enough to make me feel warm in my heart when I think of it. May you and the world you write be treated with gentleness forever.

It's not bad. How could Draco, who had an elite education and a certain amount of talent since he was a child, not be good at all? Draco here has used his talent to be particularly dazzling. Harry is not the savior who only knows how to be reckless and destroy your weapons. Ron is not so um... Unreasonably noisy. Hermione, who is excellent in all aspects, and Krum, who is equally outstanding, are perfect together.

In Grand Duchess Lanna, I saw the Slytherins who are united to the outside world🐍, and there was really sexual tension when Lanna x Draco had sex. Everyone loves Lanna not only because of her extremely noble status and powerful magic power, but also she is very friendly to the pure-blood family. At that time, she also took the initiative to save Pansy who was petrified by malicious intent. I really like this novel.

Let's talk about the poisonous points we have seen so far [The heroine Baobao's family feels that everyone looks down on Xiaolong] The main heroine is a cool article, but I was deceived into it by the 1v1 pure love mentioned in the jpg. The author added religious elements based on HP's world view, and the writing style is very good. You can completely feel the world of the North Country through the text. I really like the background setting of the heroine's family (it can be seen that a lot of careful research has been done!), And the addition of Russian and English is really easy to understand. The interactions between the girls are also very cute...! It may feel a little uncomfortable to watch as a romance novel or a drama, but it is very suitable to watch as a group portrait of a heroine with no cp and a group of girls. If you like watching 1v1 young couples, you can read more comments and think more about it. If you like the heroine of HP world view, you must not miss this book!

It's very good-looking, some are different from the original work but not inconsistent with it. It has the characteristics of the author. The Draco in it has been changed very well and is not as annoying as he is sometimes in movies and novels. And the funniest thing is that Lucius actually had the idea to make Draco the prince's wife from the very beginning, which made me laugh to death [laughing] I have to say, he is very outstanding and far-sighted hahaha

Lanna, the very charming Grand Princess, was very resourceful and won everyone's surrender. She also sincerely became friends with Slytherins of the same level, and Pansy also became the heir. For Lana to take the initiative to become stronger and better for Draco, both of them had their own highlight moments. In addition, Draco became the heir to the Black family and obtained the ancestral property. We get along sweetly every day, doting on each other, and growing and progressing together. Lucius paid a lot for Draco's royal husband hahaha. The story line does not focus on the three people, nor do they become friends. Some different plots develop naturally, and the loop can be closed in the end, which is great.

I like this book. I have basically read all the Draco-related books except Two Guys. The author really grasped the feeling of an heir and described the relationship between them very delicately. Her identity as the Grand Duchess was also well written without losing her responsibility and dignity. Overall, the writing was good but not enough to read [shy]

It's rare to give a five-star article without finishing it. I don't know why the score is so low. The writing is not bad, the logic is self-consistent, and the characters are three-dimensional. The most favorable thing is that in the intimate chapters of the lower grades, the author can skip the reminder before the chapter, and it is not very ambiguous, which is very good among the fans (you can check it in the five-star category on my bookshelf, there are really very few five-stars)

My girl is so beautiful. What does it mean to be so beautiful? If nothing else happens, this follow-up will be my top two HP novel. The subject matter is so novel that I want to punch myself unconscious. When I woke up, I found that the author had added 10,000 chapters.

Worth replaying several times! The heroine has a very high status and stands firmly by Draco's side. Their relationship is very sweet, and they don't have much communication with the original protagonists, because the heroine always puts her own life safety first and will not take the initiative to get into danger. In short, in a word, super recommended!

From the Malfoy family's adopted daughter, are you happy today, to the daily life in the underworld shop, to the princess and the dragon, witnessing the growth of the boss, every book feels warm. In this era, find a piece of pure land to recharge your soul, live with love, find happiness, and look forward to a beautiful life.

This is my first time reading Draco fanfic about "online dating". The writing is pretty good. The heroine has a good family background, a noble status, and is very outstanding. In the early days, the two people's "online love" was sweet. Each is the other's special existence. Worth a look. Very sweet and chewy. There are quite a few emotional lines, as well as career lines. I personally like stories where the male and female protagonists have more plots, so sometimes I wasn't very interested in this book, and sometimes it was all about Harry's side of the story. After reading it, I think it's pretty good. I also like the extras. ~

I have read many HP fanfics, and this is the only one that makes up for a lot of regrets, including Ron's apology, ggad, Neville's counterattack, and the discovery of Arthur's genius attributes. It's a great book.

Thank you to the author. It's very interesting. I came across this book by chance. The setting of the heroine is something I haven't seen in the HP novels I've read before. It's very novel. Thank you for updating it. It's not finished yet, so I couldn't bear to finish it all at once.

I like it so much. Is it the first time I read this kind of spin-off? Because I am very interested in Malfoy, so I came to read it. I read a lot of books where the heroine wants the male protagonist to have a good relationship with the three of them. I wonder how a Slytherin would have such an idea, but this heroine is very different. Instead of building a good relationship, she uses them to achieve her goals. And the heroine is great. The author writes very well

There are only a few protagonists who can crush Voldemort, which perfectly explains what it means to have someone outside of you. I don't think the young master is OOC. It's just that there is someone who is more obsessed with the young master than the savior. And the relationship between the CPs is very good. The young master is even a bit coquettish hahahaha

It really captures the elegance of the European last century. It really has the same feeling as when I often watch stage plays. The writing is gorgeous and great. Please don't stop updating. The author is the one who feels the most comfortable writing foreign literature. It's super awesome!

Damn, it's so pretty! ! ! I started looking forward to it from the moment I saw it, and then the more I watched, the better and better it looked. The writing is really great! ! I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it

It's beautiful, it's a different track, it's very reasonable, it's logical, it's emotionally sweet. Porridge! Porridge! I don't know what the content of my next book will be. It's very interesting to Geminis [Sending my heart]

Congratulations to your great wife! ! ! This is the best HP fanfic! ! ! It gave Xiaolong a preference and gave everyone their own highlight, which made up for a lot of unhappiness. There is really nothing better than this. Although I have commented many times with similar remarks like "Malfoy deserves the best, but this is too much", I am really happy. This is really great. Thank you teacher for letting Lanna appear in Xiaolong's life. I love the fragrant rice. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I didn't expect that such a beautiful article would have such a low score! Sisters, believe me, I'm really good-looking! ! ! I lied to you and I will be poor all my life! Great heroine cool article! Group portrait! Ahhhh, I didn't expect it to be so good. The author really writes it well, there is no OOC in the whole story, and everyone has a bright future. Some people let go of regrets, some become better selves, some grow up and are no longer reckless, and some reconcile with the past. These are all their own choices. The heroine influenced them but did not change them as hard as other books. Instead, they chose to become better versions of themselves because of the influence of the heroine! I don't blame Deng Duoduo and I don't blame anyone. Xiaolong and the heroine have become more mature and determined in their love. The heroine is also the heroine from beginning to end. It's really great! Thank you for showing us such a brilliant future of the wizarding world. Finally, I would like to offer my eternal loyalty to His Majesty! !

I really like this book. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. Well, of course I only watched the beginning, but I really liked it which is rare. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking woo woo woo It's this kind of forced separation that disappears and then we meet again (ahem, it suddenly occurred to me that I have a top guy) () Yeah, maybe I've always liked this kind of setup😋