Pokemon: A Dog from the Start, and the Rest I Pick Up?

It's okay. Regarding Suicune, the male protagonist's operation is quite confusing. He clearly saw and heard others polluting the lake and was preparing to capture Suicune. He also knew that there was a Heavenly King spirit on the other side, but he didn't immediately run out of the secret realm to call for someone. Instead, he had already forcefully [eat melon]. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have been sprayed to death by the wave of evil.

It's the bread and butter of Pokémon fan fiction + level. The interaction between people and Pokémon is harmonious, the emotions are delicate, the evolution is full of surprises or natural, the overall writing is good, the plot is well-chosen, and there is no description like elementary school students' writing. Highly recommended!

Fast forward to hate the fate of not having Sharingan~ The Third Power Rotom Nenghu

Very interesting novel, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

The first part was very good, but it started to fall apart when it came to the Suicune part. I even doubted whether it was written by the same author. There are continuous flaws in this part, which can only be said to be a pity. Alas, considering that the previous part is really good, I still gave it four stars.

Actually, I think it would be better if the main character is a researcher and he can add functions to the prosthetic eyes.

The idea is quite strange. It's the first time I see the protagonist and Rotom fuse together.

The plot is also quite interesting, not so cookie-cutter, I recommend it [shy]. But I would like to make some small comments: The level improvement feels too slow. The author has written so many chapters and it is still over level 30. The plot progress is a bit slow.

The writing is very good, the character descriptions and elf descriptions are very good, the plot design is also okay, and the world view is relatively complete. Elf World is really disgusting. It's all about those champions. I'm tired of it. The integration of reality is quite good. The adventure story of the protagonist and his good brothers is really good. I look forward to the following plots and urge for more updates~

Well, actually, it's okay. To avoid this for everyone, there are Pokémon for sale. And I really don't understand? Why write about Pokémon without having a plot about selling Pokémon? ! Can we not write about Pokémon as a commodity?