Elf: There Is a Dog at the Beginning, and the Elf Relies Entirely on Picking It Up?

It's okay. Regarding Suicune, the male protagonist's operation is quite confusing. He clearly saw and heard others polluting the lake and was preparing to capture Suicune. He also knew that there was a Heavenly King spirit on the other side, but he didn't immediately run out of the secret realm to call for someone. Instead, he had already forcefully [eat melon]. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have been sprayed to death by the wave of evil.

Fast forward to hate the fate of not having Sharingan~ The Third Power Rotom Nenghu

It's the bread and butter of Pokémon fan fiction + level. The interaction between people and Pokémon is harmonious, the emotions are delicate, the evolution is full of surprises or natural, the overall writing is good, the plot is well-chosen, and there is no description like elementary school students' writing. Highly recommended!

The first part was very good, but it started to fall apart when it came to the Suicune part. I even doubted whether it was written by the same author. There are continuous flaws in this part, which can only be said to be a pity. Alas, considering that the previous part is really good, I still gave it four stars.

Very interesting novel, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

Actually, I think it would be better if the main character is a researcher and he can add functions to the prosthetic eyes.

The idea is quite strange. It's the first time I see the protagonist and Rotom fuse together.

The writing is very good, the character descriptions and elf descriptions are very good, the plot design is also okay, and the world view is relatively complete. Elf World is really disgusting. It's all about those champions. I'm tired of it. The integration of reality is quite good. The adventure story of the protagonist and his good brothers is really good. I look forward to the following plots and urge for more updates~

The plot is also quite interesting, not so cookie-cutter, I recommend it [shy]. But I would like to make some small comments: The level improvement feels too slow. The author has written so many chapters and it is still over level 30. The plot progress is a bit slow.

Well, actually, it's okay. To avoid this for everyone, there are Pokémon for sale. And I really don't understand? Why write about Pokémon without having a plot about selling Pokémon? ! Can we not write about Pokémon as a commodity?

A pretty good Pokémon novel

The subject matter can be very novel

Not bad, the setting is quite novel.

Chapter 1 is the same day as my birthday, so I'll give it five stars anyway.

Good-looking, non-toxic, well-paced, and very comfortable to watch [Adoration][Adoration]

Very unique start

Not bad, very pretty

Very much in line with expectations

A pretty good Pokémon novel

To sum it up in one sentence, it is a very good book.

Yes, very thoughtful, especially the golden finger is very interesting, consistent with the setting, well-founded, and not like an inexplicable system! Have you noticed any problems? There is no description of the interaction between the protagonist and the elves in the plot.

It's okay, just a bit bland

Love it. Simple and clear.

Not bad, nothing bad, just the difference in qualifications is not obvious enough

It's okay, I hope some details can be optimized more

Okay, okay, that is, the protagonist's elf should be able to super evolve as much as possible.

It's really well written, but not many people read it.

It is considered to be a relatively high-quality Pokémon novel in Tomato. It is worth following. The interaction and relationship between the protagonist and Pokémon are also worth reading. It is just too short. I hope the author will update it soon.