The System Runs Away and You Get Immortality

Although the writing style is a bit immature, the approach is right, and the outline is okay. It would be better if the character's personality and experience were more delicately portrayed, because the Chang Sheng text is originally a group portrait text. It can have a protagonist, but it cannot only be about the protagonist. Personally, I understand that it is a long story. Life is inherently a curse, and only absolute reason will not be swayed by emotion, but emotion is the most indispensable thing for reason. When writing about immortality, you cannot just write about immortality, but also about the world of mortals, the joys and sorrows, the ebb and flow of clouds and sunshine, the passage of time, the world of dogs,

It's amazing. The protagonist has gone from being ignorant, timid and cowardly at the beginning, to gradually becoming mature and powerful through repeated setbacks and hardships. Every change is reasonable and traceable, allowing me to see the whole process of a person's struggle, struggle, and transformation in difficult situations. The setting of this growth line not only makes the character more three-dimensional and full.

Good. When I first started watching it. I saw someone commenting on Chapter 11 earlier. Let me correct that. He had no eyes. It should be skipped and watched.

Hello everyone, my writing is more realistic [laughs] Thank you so many readers for reading! Urgent update! Reward! Thank you all! Hello everyone, I am the author of this book. Thank you for reading it! Comment! Follow up! I don't know why the ratings are always so low, rising and falling. I would like to apologize to everyone. I have worked very hard to write. At the same time, the readers have carefully asked questions. I am very honored to have you as a group of teachers to correct me! The data has dropped so much recently that I am almost dying [I am about to cry]. Every update is basically a chapter (more than 3,000 words), with no synopsis. I don't want it to be unfinished. Dear readers, it's really good. I beg you to come in and take a look! I have worked really hard!

I'm an old bookworm, but I have the desire to listen, but I'm short and weak ੯‧̀͡⬮\

I have basically never used this immortality [covering my face]. Survival depends entirely on luck.

It's very beautiful and well written [like][like][like]

Not bad, nothing poisonous

Those who are behind are catching up with those who are ahead [Like] [Like] [Like] Come on, come on, come on

It's the type I like to watch, but it's not enough

Not bad, very good complex

The writing is very realistic and practical.

You can still work harder

It still looks pretty good.

I've read more than 30 chapters, and I can't help but feel sorry for you.

The writing is very good and smooth, without any too many negative points. Why are the grades so bad? The writing is much better than the books on the recommendation list.

The subject matter is good, in the housekeeper genre, you don't have to be the first, you can also be the second. It is said that you are a servant, but in fact, by the 16th chapter, you are already a family with the young master.

Good-looking, quite good-looking

Very good book, worth reading

I think it's okay, look at it, I hope the author won't write it crookedly

I want to ask, where is Zhao Tianbao's father and his aunt?

The concept is very good and the writing is also very good. It is one of the better novels in Tomato, but the author's writing style needs to be polished [laughs][laughs]

Give it to some Taoist monks in Xu I started watching it and felt like the male protagonist was a eunuch.

Very interesting. The plot has ups and downs.

Excellent, concise, capable, keep up the good work!

Damn, that's hilarious. Simply. Don't miss it if you pass by.