An Old Man Cultivates Immortality: His Grandson Was Divorced and Scolded Him for Not Building a Foundation

The current phenomenon of working as a worker, eating the old, and lying down is transformed into a fantasy novel to describe it. After getting rid of the fantasy, it is just a living modern life. It is well written.

Hello, author, I am the junkie you hired with money. I read your novel for two hours. It is full of wonderful chapters. I really can't find anything to praise. Please apply for a refund.

The writing is quite good. It has changed my inherent impression of system writing. Full praise.

It's been a long time since I've seen a cultivation article that interests me. Both the theme and the content are very good. Good reviews.

To be honest, this book is quite well written, and the subject matter is relatively new. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's not easy to find a book that I can read now. Come on, and can the author give me some tips?

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The plot of the story is well set up and not clichéd. The progress of the protagonist is well controlled, and there is no rush to expand the power of the system. This book is the high-quality dry food in tomatoes.

The writing is good. I read it in one sitting and it is fascinating. But the beginning is not exciting enough. I should draw a clear line with Feiwu's son and daughter-in-law.

It's a very good book. The results are not great, but I personally feel it is quite good. The subject matter is also novel.

Ignoring the author's description of the realm: building a foundation with magical powers, golden elixirs, walking through time to find rhubarb [face covering] is generally good, the character design of the male protagonist who gradually becomes stronger in search of opportunities is reasonable, and the description of mood and behavior is more detailed, which is consistent with the state of a mature old man in his 70s who is about to die from the beginning.

Very beautiful and in line with our artistic conception

After only reading a few dozen chapters, I felt that the writing was very good [Like] Worth chasing

The system is fake, and will most likely be used for drainage. Except for the exercises given in the first few chapters, the sense of existence is zero. After that, in every realm, ordinary people cultivate immortality. They can reach the realm without vomiting blood a few times, and are forced to go out to look for opportunities. They cannot break through, and they have never considered the existence and role of the system.

Don't press too hard, break through quickly

I really like this kind of male protagonist who practices down-to-earth, is calm and thoughtful, and is in line with reality. Only those who pretend to be pigs and eat tigers will have the last laugh and live longer.

Although it is a systematic article, it is very rare to be able to maintain a slow and rigorous approach, especially some of the free writing is very good. I hope the author can maintain this

Pretty good and more everyday

This novel describes in detail The character description is specific and the objective impression is very good. Highly recommended

Delicious, think about it, think about it, think about it, think about it

It's a hard life~~ It's a bit miserable to live to seventy years old and still have to make money to support the whole family...[Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Nice! The writing is lively and funny, and the story has ups and downs. It's worth reading!

Killing is decisive and down-to-earth, which is perfect for rescuing the book famine.

The characterization is very delicate and the plot is interesting. It's worth watching.

It is human nature for a man to love a woman, and there is no need to avoid it. True temperament is the best. If you can't let yourself go as a cultivator, how can you pursue the great path?

The rating is so low. I think it's unfair. [Laughs] It's well written.

It's okay. It's not a particularly enjoyable article, but it's still good.

The characterization is delicate, the author has a lot of emotional experience, and the writing is good.

At present, the score in my mind is above 9.8

There's still one week left, what do you think?

It's not a dream to be a late bloomer with a system [laughing]