I Should Have Known Better Than to Play Like This!

After reading this for so long, the writing is very good. The only flaw is that the reactions and behaviors of the female protagonists are a bit split. That is, the thoughts are extreme and the behaviors are bland. It is very strange. Is it difficult for the male protagonist to develop relationships with them? No, buddy, this is no different from the male protagonist eating leftovers. I hope the author can answer me. The book is really good👌🏻 The book review has been changed. There is a reason why 400,000 Children has an 8.0 Rating. If you don't have the writing power of a harem, don't write about a harem. There are so many female protagonists who don't have any ambiguous plots at all. I think the most ambiguous thing in the whole book is the princess peeling an apple for Soros. It's really hopeless. If you want to write about the male protagonist, you have to add a tool person to disgust the readers. Do you think that you write these to show that the protagonist has a big structure? Do you have deep thoughts? In summary, if you can't see the male protagonist insisting on self-discipline, you can run away. The first 30 chapters are almost all about it. Before the male protagonist had sex, the female protagonist had been flirting with the tool man. I am Shennong, so don't thank me.

I finished the sixty chapters in one go in the middle of the night. The author's writing was quite to my liking. The previous one, Tokyo Ghost Exorcist, was also good. I read about a hundred chapters. Seeing that there are opinions about the princess in the paragraph, I personally think it's okay. After all, there are no intimate activities, so it's still acceptable. Now I have to keep it and watch it (I won't keep it to death, right)

It's a new one. It's very interesting. Compared with the previous books, it has a different flavor. Although the beginning is a bit cliche, it is still quite interesting, and then the author cheers [like], let me ask, will Genshin Impact be updated again? , I started following that book [face covering]

Two words: top quality. It's not a loss to get into the trap, it's a good-looking batch, and I didn't see any bad points, and it was very enjoyable and comfortable to watch. And depending on the development of the plot, it is estimated that there will be a bunch of yanderes competing for the protagonist in the later stage [laughter] Just a reminder, it's not soul travel. The protagonist is always the protagonist, body and soul. The author will write about it later. Then there is the princess to whom the protagonist is engaged. This protagonist has a clear demarcation line. Although the engagement is not canceled later, the protagonist and this fiancée maintain a relationship of strangers, and it is impossible to earn a harem for others. Doing this will directly criticize her, and there should be some scenes of the fiancée in the follow-up. After all, her identity and talents are here, and it will be useful later, and she is equivalent to a tool person or to promote the development of the plot. Of course, if you can't stand this, then go ahead and read some short stories. If you feel that you have a relationship with the protagonist and you insist on being with the protagonist, or if you have a relationship with the protagonist and you can't have any contact with other men, then I can only say that you are invincible. This novel is definitely very well written, but everyone has different tastes, but it is very interesting to give suggestions for getting into the trap, and the author writes it very well.

The narrative structure of this book is indeed exquisite, especially the passage where Lin Daiyu drives EVA Unit 1 on a rampage and fights against Godzilla, which is full of emotional tension. But it must be admitted that Thanos's Infinity Gauntlet played a role at the critical moment. If he hadn't eliminated half of the dementors with the snap of his fingers, the egg-fried rice showdown in the Hogwarts auditorium might not have ended. In addition, I especially admire Liu Bei's decision when the Wall Street stock market crashed. He said into the microphone, "Keep playing music and dance." This shows the stable core of Shuhan Group CEO in the face of the financial crisis. All in all, this is an excellent work that combines Eastern and Western strategic wisdom and multi-dimensional universe narrative.

I finished reading it in more than a day and read some book reviews. I have to say it's fair. This book is a classic. It's not the kind of book that sounds good and classic but not bad. The author integrates various elements very well and very naturally. In short, this book is better than previous books. It is a master of this kind of book. If you like to read similar books, you have no reason to miss it. Then I read the comments for a few days and said that I was very unhappy... No, brother, you want to read the brainless cool articles and turn left to see the King of Urban Soldiers when you go out. You have to make your presence felt here. There are too many unhappy articles. Then you will cry when you read "Dun Yong". In short, the protagonist is well portrayed, there is a touch of spirituality in the classic, and the plot is definitely not as frustrating as some reviews say. All in all, it's a good review. I originally thought the only drawback was that the update was a bit slow. But I just found out that the author is updating two books at the same time, which makes sense. It's really slow [vomit]

Why is it so good to read? Among light novels, the writing and plot are top-notch. The long-term and short-term goals are very clear, and the foreshadowing is also very exciting. Where can I find another light novel with such a good description of war? The only drawback is that I don't feel comfortable with the princess's attitude. She says she doesn't care but talks and laughs with others, but she is a little bit weird towards the princess. If she really doesn't care, just chat normally. If she hates her, just say she hates her. The writing here is a bit too pretentious.

How should I put it, is this the calmness of a veteran author? There is no poison in the whole, and the character design fits the character. Oh my God, the character design is normal for me after eating too much. This is already a plus point for me. The story itself is not bad. In fact, the story is quite classic. It is better to say that the current novels are just like that. The story of this book is smooth and the characters are normal. I wouldn't say it is a masterpiece, but compared to Tomato's Most Answers, this book is indeed gold. I just can't stop it. I have read many good works and they have been stopped. I hope this book can have an ending.

There is currently a very good "Sword and Magic" type of masterpiece. As far as I am concerned, there is nothing poisonous about it. The combination of storyline and foreshadowing also makes this world and story more exciting. The author's writing style is also very delicate. Many micro-expressions and descriptions of scenes seem to be really visible. Of course, you have to take a closer look. It is a story of passion and sadness. The plot is also well-written and well-chosen. There is also the Shura Field that attracted me. Currently there is only one (probably?) Scene and it ends hastily. When can the author write more? I hope that the protagonist and heroines can meet more. I want to see the warm (Shura Field) daily life of Chloe and the heroines. Please, please update more I want to see blood flowing into the mouth of a river [laughing evilly]

I have caught up to the latest, and it seems to be a very classic Western fantasy novel. At first I thought it was a simulation novel when I read the introduction, but there is not much description of the past life. The plot design is very old-fashioned and classic, but the author's writing style makes up for this very well. The combat power system is also set up reasonably. There is no one who can leapfrog challenges at will just because he is the protagonist. The character descriptions are also very good, and they basically have their own shining points. Now it seems that the several lovers in the past life are relatively independent, and the combat power gap is very large. They may have to be locked up in the basement. There is also a blood feud between humans and demons. And there is no Shura Field yet, but one of them has already recognized the protagonist. Let's see the follow-up development. The author has also dug a lot of holes, and I don't know if he can fill them in later. The word count is too small and the space is too small to spread out. Currently, I give it four stars. I will take a look at it when the story is almost complete. After reading it for a long time, it feels a bit like an AI article, but the author should have revised and polished it. Overall, it is very good. However, the two stars are because the author is really slow. I feel that the author wants to write a long story, but you are so slow and the plot develops so slowly. Why do you still want to write a long story? 2,000 Words a day, sometimes 2,000 words a day or two. A couple of sentences of dialogue and some memories are gone. It's like you haven't watched it. I'll change the rating when the amount of updates comes up [smile]

It's quite good. When I read the introduction, I thought it was another simulation novel, but it turned out not to be. Overall, it's a Western fantasy. The author's writing style is okay and makes people feel very comfortable. The plot development is not so abrupt. I haven't read a lot now, but I can feel the big world background that the author worked hard to render. There are two lines in the whole, but one is bright and the other is dark, but it is still written around the protagonist. It seems that the author has done a good job. Come on! [Blowing kiss]

The plot synopsis is not very innovative, but it excels in the smoothness of the writing and the control of the overall rhythm. It can be read smoothly, just like finishing a bottle of Coke in one breath, or finishing a bowl of noodles with a stick of noodles. It is very comfortable to watch. The small number of words is actually a shortcoming, not just for fun, but for interrupting the reading of the novel every time to wait for updates. This will greatly reduce the smooth reading experience.

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. , But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

The biggest advantage of this book is probably the writing, and the setting of the worldview is also well written. The early stage is actually very well written. The oath battle is exciting and the plot is exciting. It doesn't feel dull. It also briefly draws out the emotional lines of several female protagonists, which can be said to be quite appetizing. But when it comes to the war experience, it's a bit boring. As for the previous part, the author used a lot of pen and ink to write the scenes and other characters. It really outlines the cruelty and tragedy of the battlefield very well, but it also leaves the protagonist with too little plot and psychology, which is difficult to substitute. Compared with the previous ones, I think this is a big failure. Moreover, the introduction of the book focuses on the Shura field, but the emotional progress in the beginning is indeed a bit slow. Until now, I still haven't made any progress after reading it, especially the emotional line of the princess. At present, the two people do not like each other, and the protagonist has no feelings at all, so I feel that even if the princess likes the protagonist later in the book, it is still not sweet and awkward. Overall, the book is a good one. After all, it is only the early stages, and there is still a lot of room for development later. It mainly depends on how the author writes later.

The writing is very good. I haven't seen any bad points so far. The layout is also very good and the protagonist has been well established. To be honest, this book can give many 9-point books from Tomato. Suppressed the rating? There are still people who maliciously lower scores.

It's a very interesting novel, which caused me to stay up all night again. Although the protagonist is a soul traveler, and the princess's understanding of her relationship with the male protagonist is very abstract, the other parts are really interesting. Another thing is that the author is a little short, each chapter is not many, and the plot is not fully developed. It is a novel with unlimited potential.

I came to comment after seeing Chapter 28. The battle is cool. Although the plot is very cliche, it is well written. It's okay to break off the engagement and not be able to do so. I said I wanted to go our separate ways but we got together because we were in a team. It's hard to judge.

Well, the rhythm is good and the emotion is good. Well, my feeling is that you may not be able to see the stunning transition, but you will feel very comfortable reading this book. I can't tell you the specifics. Well, reading this is at least better than eating rocks.

This book is one of the best I have read in the tomato western fantasy genre [like it]. The male protagonist's crazy fighting style won my heart and gave me a feeling of crazy biting [laughing and crying]. I don't know if you have ever played Eternal Calamity. It's like playing a fire-fighting man, jumping and slashing with a long sword, chasing others to bite, winning or losing, life and death in just a moment. The male protagonist is not like those in Japanese light novels. He is given a bad hook and talks about how he will be awesome in the future, and then the plot continues to falter. The male protagonist of this novel is capable of fighting. I like the fact that my hair turns silver. After all, I loved watching Dragon Ball when I was a kid [laughing] (Don't go too deep into the realm of combat, abilities, etc., It's just fun) As for the heroine, it's obviously a harem. The current fiancee heroine is a bit like chasing her husband in the crematorium. In the early stage, due to the needs of the plot, it was written that the heroine chose to break off the engagement with the hero because of another man. However, the author has a strong desire to survive and emphasized many times that the heroine and the man have no special relationship [face covering]. (In order not to bias some sensitive people, I still want to say that there is no hat plot) There is not much development about the other female protagonists for the time being, it is all foreshadowing, so I will not mention it for the time being. (In fact, I think the male protagonist's sister is quite touching. She has to straighten her back at a young age and hold up a facade for the mother who loves them, but she is a kiss, so she is up to date). At present, I feel that the author wants to make this book long and well-written. I don't want to spoil the plot, but I'll just mention a few points in the online article that may dissuade some people. The male protagonist is not soul traveling, but is similar to awakening Su Hui (memory of the past). The current body, as well as the experience of the text simulation game, are all his own. The above is my current personal experience. Basically, I only mentioned the advantages. Of course, this book will also have shortcomings, but the flaws cannot outweigh the advantages. The so-called shortcomings are all my personal opinions and cannot be expressed in words.

Is it standard toilet paper or female toilet paper? He is the kind of person who uses his acting skills as an excuse to talk about forbearance and break off the engagement, but in fact treats the readers as if they are fools and pretends to be crazy. He says he will be forbearing and beats up his peers in public, and even says that he wants to break off the engagement with his female partner. In the end, he forcibly ties her up to death, and then finds that he can't take it anymore. He said that it was all acting and part of the plan, and then he made up some agreed upon rules. Anyway, they were all within the rules and you couldn't touch me. Finally, a late-stage figure from the Mechanicus sect said, "This kid is interesting" and forced him to recruit Hard Circle.

It's really fun to read. It's not brainless. It's a Western fantasy genre. There are currently 72 chapters without any poisonous points. The writing is very good. In fact, I feel that if you continue to fight monsters and upgrade all the way like this, it will be very good and you can grasp it. If you really want to write those blackened bosses, you may not be able to write well, but it is difficult to change the outline. It depends on how you grasp the author.

The character creation is good, the psychological portrayal of the characters and the description of the scenes are also very good. For now, it is okay to give it a five-star rating. I will look at it later and the plot will be okay. The cover and the title of the book are too casual [smile] and I have no desire to click on it. The author created the article with his own hands [smile]

There are some problems 1. Although some characters are described, they feel that they have little effect. Lilith, who makes up for the class, has a lot of words at the beginning, but there are basically no scenes later, which is a pity. 2. While the description is detailed, some places are too detailed and seem a bit wordy. 3. The protagonist has no clear goals and motivations, and is more passive. But there are many advantages 1. It satisfies my fantasy of Western fantasy, and I can give it full marks if I only wear a little bit of it. 2. The immersion is very strong, the sense of substitution is also good, and the fighting is very detailed and picturesque. 3. I quite like the character portrayal. Anyway, cheers to the author!

To be honest, the author should be somewhat dependent on the subject of chasing a husband. But according to the writing power shown by the author in this book, if it were not for this subject, the score would be very high. At present, it seems to be a high-quality Western fantasy novel that is above the pass level. The combat part is quite well written, and the daily writing is also very interesting. The chapters where the protagonist first went to the North were really enjoyable for me to read, but the sudden introduction of the previous relationships of several protagonists was a bit inconsistent. All in all, it's really good, but again, the result would be better if we put aside this subject matter. The worldview is a bit too big. If you can contain it, you can live in it. If you can't, you'll be finished. The mid-term stretch is too long, almost like a farming article Shirin should try not to include ambiguous descriptions and just treat them as ordinary friends. The two old ladies from the past life really affect the perception. They are not as attractive as the ice and fire dragon at the beginning. They give people the feeling that they are added to satisfy XP. The protagonist can obtain the special weapon from one of the three himself.

It looks pretty good to me. The premise is that you didn't come here for the Shura field at the beginning, otherwise it will be like a bad review. I feel that there is no heroine and no Shura field, so I gave a bad review. Well, part of it is because I feel that the princess and Thoros (is that the name?) Interacted too much at the beginning (referring to the part about peeling the apple). This is not good for me. On the contrary, there are no good reviews. Of course, this is based on the fact that the author did not put her in the heroine position. I saw that now, she is indeed not the heroine. At least I don't think she is in this position. For the protagonist, she is now a passerby and troublesome. After entering the school, there is no such person. Back to the topic, the main body of this book is actually not Shura Field at all, at least not from what I can tell. The main body is the protagonist experiencing events, and then fighting monsters and upgrading. In the middle, it is mixed with emotional lines and past emotional debts, and then mixed with the protagonist's memory fragments. The fragmented memory is quite in line with the protagonist's current situation. Of course, part of the reason is because I have read his last novel, so I don't have any objections to this style. Some people also have some objections to his writing style. Okay, that's all I've explained, there's not much else to say. I can only say that people who just want to see Shura Field and multiple female protagonists and things they love to do, don't read this book, it's hard for you to see what you want.

A very good book, with ups and downs in the plot, but not too bloated and compact. The end of the novel is a happy ending. I hope the protagonist can hug some of his thighs. It would be boring to always use them to keep the secret. There could be more combat and experience. The worldview can be expanded appropriately and introduced into all realms. It is best if it is original by the author. I hope it can be written longer.

I have been watching several Shura field type movies recently, similar to (Villain * the heroine cries, ex-girlfriend * witch). According to the writing style, except for the poisonous point of breaking off the engagement and fighting together, the character description and plot are good. It seems more comfortable than the same type. Of course, everyone has their own preferences.

Regarding whether the male protagonist is a time traveler, my opinion is A nerd who was beaten by life came to the text adventure/novel interactive game world (the male protagonist Soros), and his soul has been reborn three times (the Demon Emperor, the Sword Master, the Mage). The world view and background have not changed but the history has changed (the sadomasochistic heroines each became the lord of a huge force, and the world situation has changed drastically). During the period when Roy became Chloe, he showed the loneliness and confusion of a time traveler (subconsciously searching for things similar to things on earth) According to the relevant time and historical background given in the book The first life: Roy the dead otaku Second Life: Demon Emperor Roy The Third Life: Sword Master The fourth life: mage The fifth life: Playboy Chloe It seems that the time traveler is possessing the good-for-nothing dude, but in fact, the time traveler is reincarnated into a dude: the memory and soul are restored and awakened at a key plot point in the original world, the princess's divorce; how can a person who has not learned magic for several years awaken his bloodline talent and step into the divine realm in just a few months? I feel a bit disappointed. The flow of the plot is to experience one event and then step into another event. I feel that the potential of the protagonist is purely based on other people's descriptions of past lives, the ranks of the heroines, and comparison with others. It seems that the author does not have the writing power to describe in detail how the male protagonist faces and integrates into the world and gets along with other people, the trends and operations of various forces, the grudges and grudges of past lives, the reactions of the strong, the portraits of other younger generations, and the development and narrative of the situation at the time level. The flow of events, the location characteristics at the spatial level, and travel (but the whole story is not written to "live" and has no sense of immersion. The setting design is very grand and comprehensive, but only the tip of the iceberg is always revealed, leaving the reader with no choice but to imagine the unknown underwater) Why is the male protagonist reincarnated? Why did the male protagonist die in his first three lives (Devil Emperor, Brave Man, and Divine Envoy)? (This does not refer to the method of death, but what events developed that contributed to his death) Why does the prologue of the story begin with a conflict between the two dragon brothers and sisters over the hero? Why is the first female protagonist that the male protagonist dreams of is the Ssangyong brother and sister? Why is the male protagonist's second dream an immersive experience and an interaction with the young Lubisis? Will there be a confrontation between the eldest princess Divia and the princess Shireen? How was the engagement with Shireen handled? What is Emperor Moen thinking? What is the future of Heart Witch Ivy-senpai? What is the plan of the Church that acts on the will of the Saint? Why did Aurora become a demon? What role does the father, Herman, the Archduke of the North, play in the entire story? What about the other young people in the Dodo family? Which world has the male protagonist traveled to? (The three corners are set in his past life, and there is a game with Soros as the protagonist) Why is the male protagonist's intelligence advantage in his previous life not shown? My pursuit of this book relies solely on my curiosity for knowledge. I would like to criticize based on the latest chapter Evelyn's behavior has crossed the line and left the category of evil. Does she love the brave Kronoy or the possibility of her relationship with Kronoy? Just because she performed such a stimulating operation on the saint, I only have negative feelings towards her (she deserves to be arrogant and wrongly paid) Finally, I want to ask: do the female protagonists understand their love for the male protagonist? If it is just the obsession and unwillingness accumulated over time, then no one will be able to usher in salvation.

Personally, I think it's good. I feel that the princess is a bit in the way, but I still need a supporting role. The multiple front names at the end of 62 unconsciously reminded me of those vague and clear shadows. Even with the shell of Western Fantasy and the aristocratic system, I still can't help but feel warm in my heart. The protagonist is a fighting maniac, and I criticized it wildly. I originally came here for the Dragon Girl. I suddenly found that fighting is really fun. As for the writing, at least I can't fault it. If the people behind me give up because of the princess, I think it's not worth it. At least I don't find it particularly difficult to accept the battle and the relationship with the princess. Anyway, I ate it, OK, so I went to play the resurrection match, and the king of hell will deduct less of the all-night Yangshou.

A good new book. Although the plot is old-fashioned, the protagonist and dialogue are handled very well. I like it very much. The second part is a little bit dull, and the main character always smiles and has a joking tone when he speaks. I can't stand the second part of it, but I can watch it in general.