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I don't know how to describe it. Lin's personality is relatively calm and silent, and she doesn't like to get along with others. Although she is a time traveler, she is still very similar to the Uchiha clan's personality. She feels like the very light and soft moonlight that is about to disappear, or the softest handful of snow under the shadow of the sun and clouds in winter, cold but vaguely warm. It's a bit like mung bean cake, sweet but not greasy (in fact, I thought Lin would be the kind who looks cold but has a gentle voice) The characters' personalities are basically well established. There is nothing too OOC, and there is no reason to forcefully join Class 7 and integrate into Sasuke's life because he likes Sasuke. Hmm... It's quite a surprise that Rin and Sasuke are CPs. To be honest, I felt very sorry for Sasuke after reading the original novel. His life is like a dream wrapped in a beautiful candy wrapper, which can be shattered at the touch of a touch. When he was young, he was like thunder above icy water with a desperate madness. The rest of his life seemed to me like the rainy season, sparse and never ending... After the rain stopped, it was not a clear sky but damp air and moist ground. The bitterness and helplessness of swallowing it are indescribable... Fortunately, it is a fanfic. After all, fanfics must have a good ending! The appearance of that system is actually unfounded, but after thinking about it, although Lin has traveled through time, she does not have very high talents. If she wants to compete with Sasuke, it is okay to have low combat power, and it is not that difficult to accept. It is more in line with the plot. I hope you can continue to update, the author greatly ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆCome on However, I feel that some of the paragraphs are not reasonable, some are too long, and people feel that they have no desire to read on, and there are many repetitions. I feel that they can be changed.

It's pretty cool, but I feel like I care a little too much about Sasuke, giving him a sense of attachment [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Very well written, love reading it! [Blowing kiss]

Now, after reading a little bit, Sasuke hit the red gong (?) Three times in the Chunin Exam, and the third and second times were exactly the same. Similarly, Rin hit the sword twice and Cheng twice were exactly the same. Overall, I feel pretty good. Maybe I prefer more depressing plots (?). I will comment later after reading it!

I really like it. Writing for a niche audience is not easy. I hope the author can stick to it! ! I will finish the chase! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

To be honest, the CP should be Sasuke, right? [Smile][Smile] Don't tell me that the CP I've been watching for so long is not Sasuke.

The description of Sasuke's character is very detailed. It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic that portrays an anime character so seriously. I'm so touched.

The description is really delicate. Except for some parts that were repeated several times in the early stage and almost made me quit, it is really beautiful. The writing is as delicate as water, but it feels like it still needs polishing.

It fits the character very well, no OOC, nice looking

The subject matter is novel and super good-looking. In addition, the later part is a bit too biased towards cultivating immortals. I want to watch the plot of Naruto.