Douluo*******

The characters are consistent and vivid without any O oc. Details. The process of finding memories is also particularly perfect. The love between Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena is also particularly well described.

When I retravel the journey, I don't look back with regrets, but with the cherishment I have had later, I measure the deep love of these ten thousand years. The dragon scales reflect the moon, and I have you on my way home. This is the most profound look of love [crying] [crying]

It develops too fast, and the transition from Chapter 2 to Chapter 3 is a little abrupt. It would be better if I could write from the place where we met all the way to Shrek Academy! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]Linyue cP99

It looks good and the writing is very good, but I think it's better to lower the points [Thinking], feel free to enter Linyue Kitchen [Like]

I am currently reading Chapter 29, and when I saw Wulin and Gu Yue kissing each other while watching the game, I knew I was reading the right book. Currently, I am more curious about whether their sons will appear later, and when they will make hatred.

The writing is good, but a bit strange. The article keeps emphasizing that it was thousands of years ago, but there are many signs that it seems that only a few decades have passed.

Finally got some candy, I must give it a 5.

I hope this Innate Douluo is not blocked too much now.

One setting problem is that it has been ten thousand years now, and the furniture in Hui Aolai's house in the city has not yet weathered. It is a bit difficult for Tang Wulin to still be able to buy the breakfast he was familiar with ten thousand years ago [smile] (although it is the fault of the three ghosts), but the writing is pretty good and makes up for this part, just don't be an eunuch.

The regret has been made up for, and I look forward to the follow-up. Cheers to the author. It is recommended to write in multiple threads. From now on to Chapter 97, Linyue is the main thread to narrate. You can write the plots of other characters @youyou [Send Heart]

Beautiful, very beautiful The content is consistent with the original work, and the writing style is also good. The interaction between Gu Yue and Wulin is very sweet and realistic, and is very consistent with the original work.

Yes, that's what I want to see

Awesome, this is the feeling I want

The brushwork is delicate and continues successfully. 😘😘

Although some settings are inconsistent, it is very good.

I can only say that it is better written than Sanshao

Kougua, this is the orthodox fight of 4 kouya Give it a try, I found out some time ago that it's gone.

I've lowered my rating and hope the author can continue writing, with a lot less regrets.

Looks good, makes up for the regrets

I'm curious, how many years after Dou San! If it were ten thousand years, the two of them would be in a lot of trouble, and their technological level would be as advanced as

So good, so good😎

Why is it so sweet?

Much better looking than Dou Si

After reading it for so long, I realized there are no comments

Okay, kids, don't worry about the original work or whether it's reasonable or not. The sweetness is enough to overwhelm everything

My elementary school memories finally got a perfect explanation

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

It's good to read, but there are loopholes. In the novel, it is written that Mo Lan is the last queen, but overall it's okay.

Good book, recommended by Lin Yue Chu. The author's writing is very good and there are few poisonous points. I highly recommend it.

Author, you must work harder to write, it is more than one and a half stars better than San Shao!