[Doomsday] [System] [Cthulhu] [Destroy monsters and upgrade]
When he woke up, Lin Hang fell into a strange world. Modern ruins intertwined with primitive jungles, and indescribable things lurked in the darkness. In a desperate situation, the [Tian Luo Exchange System] awakens. With the help of the system, he started from ordinary mortal bones, exchanged thaumaturgy, controlled exotic treasures, and in this desperate cage, fought his way to the throne of the supreme god.
Reader comments
The protagonist finally met someone, and then he followed her directly to the territory, only to be dismissed. The protagonist obviously already has a great skill and so on, he has developed spiritual power, survival materials can be redeemed on the system, and he also has the space to go wherever he wants. You have to follow a person you met to go to the gathering place. She said she is very friendly and treats everyone. Do you believe it? In other words, even if it is good for everyone, does everyone include you, an outsider? What's wrong with building a gathering place in such a weird place? If you want to get information, just communicate with her directly. If someone really kills you, your death will be in vain. Just like the other party said, a person who doesn't know any common sense, isn't this a pure liar? What did you say in the end that for her sake, he would pay attention to you regardless of your past experiences, and then, the protagonist just stayed here? If you don't leave on the spot for fear of offending the other party, at least leave here as soon as possible after the other party leaves. What is the protagonist's brain circuit? Although he almost threatened my life, he accepted me, so I plan to live here?
To be honest, the early part of the lone wolf is really well written, weird, calm at the beginning, despair, hope and other emotions are very in place, and then the unknown, full of suspense, strong desire to read, all kinds of weirdness in the jungle make people feel full of reading, but starting from joining the gathering place, a kind of old-fashioned feeling arises spontaneously, and there is no sense of strangeness like before. Although the author's settings in the later stories should be huge, there is no longer the feeling of reading every word without skipping a word.
After reading all the updated chapters so far, let me tell you my actual feelings. Not only is the weird atmosphere at the beginning of this book captivating, but it becomes more and more interesting the further you read! The author has a good way of writing horror. He doesn't need to call it scary outright. He relies on the small movements in the environment and the unknown pressure in the dark to make the picture cold. It's okay. Sometimes my back feels tight, and sometimes I am drawn to the page by the unpredictable weirdness. The sense of proportion is particularly accurate, which is really good.
Let's talk about the protagonist. Lin Hang's growth line is also comfortable to write. At the beginning, he had an exchange system, and he would panic when facing an unknown world. The setting of exchanging source material for materials by defeating monsters made it inevitable for him to find a human settlement. So I understand his behavior when he meets the half-human, half-beast Xiaoyao. After all, it is better to work alone than in a team, it is more humane. Later, when he arrived at the settlement, he slowly met many unique and interesting companions from being alone, and finally formed a team of "four people and one beast". The scene was quite interesting, and the atmosphere of this kind of team fighting was really exciting. Everyone faces unknown dangers together, and the protagonist upgrades and accumulates essence, which is much more exciting than fighting alone. However, speaking of this "one beast", the transformation of the thunder beast must be praised. Haikou thought it only had animal nature at the beginning. From their life and death battle to later fighting side by side with the protagonist and even joining their team, it became a reliable partner. What is interesting here is that the author did not write it as a simple tool. Beasts, on the contrary, reveal the idea of animism. Some descriptions or interactions are a bit interesting. What is even more surprising is that the plot progresses, there are always some unexpected turns, and sometimes they do not follow the routine. The further they go, the more they want to know about the strange people and things they encounter next, or the weirder dangers. To be honest, it is indeed a good article. Whether it is the atmosphere, characters or plot rhythm, it is worth following up!
It's very beautiful. The details are really well described and very immersive. I support it and look forward to more updates.
I've been waiting for days when will the update be released? From the settlement if the author's time permits. Change to the second version, the second story direction. Instead of a settlement, there are some other unexpected and wonderful journeys, which will be a very good masterpiece. Come on come on! I still support you. But please update it as soon as possible, or give me a message, do you want to revise it from the settlement? Turn the tide? But some parts of what you are writing now are quite good and interesting.
Classic ai woman novel
It's well written, and the story is very tempting. After reading the first part, I thought about the second part, and after reading the previous chapter, I thought about the next chapter. Keep reading, haha!
When you arrive at the gathering place, your sense of reading will plummet📉, mark it.
Inexplicably joined the survivor camp
This book is well written and the writing style is also very good. Good luck to the author [top post]
The early stage was fine!
She appears as a young girl and has no desire at all.
Luo Li, there are too many unnecessary descriptions.
Well written, very attractive and talented. Thumbs up for you👍👍👍👍👍👍!
Beautiful to read, the story is engaging and compact.
The story is rigorous, the characters are plump and vivid.
[Praise]
Everything was fine before entering the gathering place. But I was almost killed at the entrance of the gathering place. Don't you feel uncomfortable?
Go directly to Chapter 14.
Come on [like][like][like]
Too much useless psychological description nonsense
The protagonist finally met someone, and then he followed her directly to the territory, only to be dismissed. The protagonist obviously already has a great skill and so on, he has developed spiritual power, survival materials can be redeemed on the system, and he also has the space to go wherever he wants. You have to follow a person you met to go to the gathering place. She said she is very friendly and treats everyone. Do you believe it? In other words, even if it is good for everyone, does everyone include you, an outsider? What's wrong with building a gathering place in such a weird place? If you want to get information, just communicate with her directly. If someone really kills you, your death will be in vain. Just like the other party said, a person who doesn't know any common sense, isn't this a pure liar? What did you say in the end that for her sake, he would pay attention to you regardless of your past experiences, and then, the protagonist just stayed here? If you don't leave on the spot for fear of offending the other party, at least leave here as soon as possible after the other party leaves. What is the protagonist's brain circuit? Although he almost threatened my life, he accepted me, so I plan to live here?
To be honest, the early part of the lone wolf is really well written, weird, calm at the beginning, despair, hope and other emotions are very in place, and then the unknown, full of suspense, strong desire to read, all kinds of weirdness in the jungle make people feel full of reading, but starting from joining the gathering place, a kind of old-fashioned feeling arises spontaneously, and there is no sense of strangeness like before. Although the author's settings in the later stories should be huge, there is no longer the feeling of reading every word without skipping a word.
After reading all the updated chapters so far, let me tell you my actual feelings. Not only is the weird atmosphere at the beginning of this book captivating, but it becomes more and more interesting the further you read! The author has a good way of writing horror. He doesn't need to call it scary outright. He relies on the small movements in the environment and the unknown pressure in the dark to make the picture cold. It's okay. Sometimes my back feels tight, and sometimes I am drawn to the page by the unpredictable weirdness. The sense of proportion is particularly accurate, which is really good. Let's talk about the protagonist. Lin Hang's growth line is also comfortable to write. At the beginning, he had an exchange system, and he would panic when facing an unknown world. The setting of exchanging source material for materials by defeating monsters made it inevitable for him to find a human settlement. So I understand his behavior when he meets the half-human, half-beast Xiaoyao. After all, it is better to work alone than in a team, it is more humane. Later, when he arrived at the settlement, he slowly met many unique and interesting companions from being alone, and finally formed a team of "four people and one beast". The scene was quite interesting, and the atmosphere of this kind of team fighting was really exciting. Everyone faces unknown dangers together, and the protagonist upgrades and accumulates essence, which is much more exciting than fighting alone. However, speaking of this "one beast", the transformation of the thunder beast must be praised. Haikou thought it only had animal nature at the beginning. From their life and death battle to later fighting side by side with the protagonist and even joining their team, it became a reliable partner. What is interesting here is that the author did not write it as a simple tool. Beasts, on the contrary, reveal the idea of animism. Some descriptions or interactions are a bit interesting. What is even more surprising is that the plot progresses, there are always some unexpected turns, and sometimes they do not follow the routine. The further they go, the more they want to know about the strange people and things they encounter next, or the weirder dangers. To be honest, it is indeed a good article. Whether it is the atmosphere, characters or plot rhythm, it is worth following up!
It's very beautiful. The details are really well described and very immersive. I support it and look forward to more updates. I've been waiting for days when will the update be released? From the settlement if the author's time permits. Change to the second version, the second story direction. Instead of a settlement, there are some other unexpected and wonderful journeys, which will be a very good masterpiece. Come on come on! I still support you. But please update it as soon as possible, or give me a message, do you want to revise it from the settlement? Turn the tide? But some parts of what you are writing now are quite good and interesting.
Classic ai woman novel
It's well written, and the story is very tempting. After reading the first part, I thought about the second part, and after reading the previous chapter, I thought about the next chapter. Keep reading, haha!
When you arrive at the gathering place, your sense of reading will plummet📉, mark it.
Inexplicably joined the survivor camp
This book is well written and the writing style is also very good. Good luck to the author [top post]
The early stage was fine!
She appears as a young girl and has no desire at all.
Luo Li, there are too many unnecessary descriptions.
Well written, very attractive and talented. Thumbs up for you👍👍👍👍👍👍!
Beautiful to read, the story is engaging and compact. The story is rigorous, the characters are plump and vivid. [Praise]
Everything was fine before entering the gathering place. But I was almost killed at the entrance of the gathering place. Don't you feel uncomfortable?
Go directly to Chapter 14.
Come on [like][like][like]
Too much useless psychological description nonsense
The writing is too abrupt