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First of all, let's talk about the current configuration of the protagonist group. The protagonist is a social fear, but is invincible. The sword spirit is a super social cow; the first female is a stupid lady, and the sword spirit is a cooperative maid type; the monk is a martial arts idiot, with explosive force; the latest weapon refiner is a fear of women. Several people help each other, redeem each other, and help each other get out of the haze in their hearts (except for the monk, I don't see any problems at the moment, but generally this kind of problem is the most serious) All in all, it is a very good team article about rare interpersonal relationships. I highly recommend it.

I have read Chapter 54 so far. First of all, it is non-toxic. Secondly, it is more about daily life than fighting, and it has the flavor of a light novel. If you watch a lot of anime, you may even feel like you are watching a series. But the plot flows smoothly and doesn't drag out. It can be clearly felt that the author consciously added character arcs for character growth when portraying the characters. Moreover, the author's seemingly idle writing in many places is actually foreshadowing. For example, the male protagonist awakens the talent of power but is not as strong as the female protagonist, but Bing can block the female protagonist with two fingers when she is excited. This slightly echoes the latest chapter 54 where Sister Xiaoqi wants to find out Bing's origins. And this kind of foreshadowing is naturally integrated into the plot, without being abrupt or confusing. For example, Sister Xiaoqi drinks and lets the wine spill on her silk pajamas. She doesn't care that a dress matches the wealth of a wealthy daughter, but this disrespectful behavior also makes her angry. In terms of character creation, each has its own characteristics, and a certain amount of pen and ink is spent on describing the supporting characters, such as Li Wen, and the young master who suddenly changes his tune at the beginning. The writing problem is that the fairy grass is not considered good, but to me it is a good product.

The interaction between the protagonist and other people makes me physically uncomfortable [smile]

It's non-toxic and interesting, and the characters are all very good (especially Shangguan Qi). I'm really looking forward to seeing the socially fearful protagonist completely let go. There just isn't much traffic right now. Authors need to interact more with readers, otherwise they won't be able to retain people. Stop talking after reading it for thirty minutes [face covering]. Although some people think that the character changes quickly, this is a novel. If you don't change and you feel frustrated while reading, this book will not survive.

Overall, it was okay, but it felt a little awkward in some places. It was good that the protagonist's mentality changed. What Xiaoqi said was right, but it just felt a bit awkward. I felt that the way the protagonist's mentality changed was not appropriate. Those words should not have been said at that time. Of course, this is my personal opinion, other places look pretty good.

There is nothing wrong with the book, but for someone like me who is slightly trembling when talking to strangers, Sword Spirit is indeed too lively, but it is my own Sword Spirit, so there is nothing I can do about it. But that Xiaoqi is a bit too familiar, and some of her words feel a bit PUA.

Is this a girl's book? [What]

The characters are very unique and there are currently no poison points To put it simply, you have struck gold.

It's a humorous novel, not brainless, but a bit invincible. As far as I can tell, the first 50 chapters are still very good, and the character creation is also very good. I don't know where the protagonist's beast-like fighting instinct comes from. Maybe I can write about it later.

It can be regarded as a good deal [like][like]

It's very interesting, the plot is smooth, and the characters are well drawn. I just don't know if there will be a knife in the meeting. After all, Lin Zhou's words when eating hot pot made me ptsd. I'm afraid that a knife will appear later. I hope the protagonist Tuan Dou is well.

I am Shennong, I personally feel good about it

Very crazy, very happy. I haven't been so happy reading a novel in a long time. Five stars. Write more about daily life in love. Thank you.

It's very interesting and addictive, but it's blocked, maybe the author is hiding it [crying] Hidden [cry][cry][cry]

I like it very much. I like how the protagonist changes from a socially fearful and lonely person to a person who protects others.

Haokang, I am a native dog and I love Kang

Are the authors the same kind of people?

It looks pretty good so far

Come on, the future is promising

I'm Shennong, this is food and grass

It is recommended to jump directly to Chapter 22

Very good novel.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Fairy grass, no need to say more

Very nice, good luck to the author! !

Come on, you can take a look

It looks good, very good

Very good, keep up the good work!

It's interesting. I'm looking forward to what I'll write next.

Don't give up because of the protagonist's early performance. Xiaoqi's behavior will be explained around Chapter 32.