Quick Transmigration: You Say I'm Your Husband!

The author should be a newbie. I have just watched a few worlds. The settings are quite attractive and the writing is okay. The micro wallpapers would have been very eye-catching once they were written. Unfortunately, the plot rhythm is not good. What should be unfolded is not developed, the transition is unnatural and the ending is hasty. It does not rise when it is exciting. I always feel that there is something wrong, but it seems to have potential.

The young couple is so sweet and so sweet. The character of the protagonist is also very charming, and the content can be continued to be expanded. The end of the first chapter was a bit too fast 😢 😢 I haven't seen how sweet they are yet.

A little brat pretending to be a big dick (the evaluation of the opponent is to be like)

It's super good-looking. It has a dual-power setting and is evenly matched in attack and defense. If you like it, just play it straight. It doesn't drag out, doesn't blur, and doesn't get entangled. The pace is fast. The ending of the first two worlds is a bit abrupt, but the later ones are much better. The further back the game is, the better it looks.

I like the tunes of several worlds written by the teacher. They are very beautiful. Thank you for the cooking. It's just that the psychological changes in the first few worlds and the introduction of relationships are not so clearly described, and it always feels very sudden. The last world is obviously a bit improved, and I look forward to Teacher Inspiration Modo Modo.

Overall this book is excellent, fast paced and sweet. It is excellent as a novel to kill time after a meal or to accompany a meal. It is recommended not to turn on voice reading when there are people at home. It's just that I saw it a bit late and didn't pursue it, which is a bit regretful. I hope you stick to it until you finish writing it, and I will always follow you. It's really good. I watched it for several hours. If I hadn't gone to work tomorrow, I could still watch it. I would like to give you a suggestion. You can write more details in some places. And I can definitely add more😏 Alas, there is a childbirth plot in the Zerg world😢😢😢, but the rest is quite interesting. (Avoid someone like me who is quick to give birth to children) But when I searched the full text, I only saw that this world has children and can be skipped. I don't know if it will be written later.

I like the author's settings very much. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and it is very interesting to watch. However, I feel that some of the content could be more detailed. I feel that some things are not written out, which makes it feel a little awkward to read again.

The author is so good, the characters are full-bodied, the emotional scenes are very, very exciting, and it's not verbose at all. Love to watch!

I just finished watching the first world and suddenly realized it was over. It was so scary. After reading the second part, it was still relatively short. The character setting was good and attractive, but it was too fast. The author should write more deeply. It is absolutely amazing ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

The first world was not written well, or it was deleted, it was a little faster.