An Eastern Boy Cultivating Immortality Will Meet a Western Magical Witch

It's invincible but not brainless. The protagonist's low-key development and understanding of the rules of the world feel immersive. The combination of Eastern and Western cultivation systems is imaginative, and the author pays great attention to the details (such as the setting of the jade pendant), but occasionally the dialogue is a bit wordy, but overall it is worth reading.

New friends come over. Nice to meet you. Let me introduce this book. This is a slow-paced Western fantasy novel. The elements of cultivating immortality in the book only focus on the male protagonist. There is no mindless martial arts and abuse of food all the way. Please do not substitute the settings in other people's books into this book. The core of the story is a modern man with the ability to cultivate immortality. With his own knowledge and thoughts, he steps into this Western world full of magic and fantasy. He will meet several girls with different personalities and work together to solve the ensuing incidents, and inadvertently, quietly rewrite the direction of the world. Friends who are interested may wish to click on it and read it for entertainment. If it does not suit your taste, there is no need to waste time. If you have any questions or ideas, you can leave them in the comment area and I will reply to them one by one. Everyone is very welcome to actively discuss and ask questions! [Blowing kiss] The classification is also thrown into Xixuanli, so everyone really shouldn't catch the word "cultivation to immortality". Of course there will be a collision between immortality cultivation and magic, but it is more of a harem novel.

The author is a novice and can tell that there are occasional typos and awkward sentences, but you can feel that it is written by hand and with care, and he responds to every comment with a sincere attitude. This sense of interaction is a plus.

The setting of Eastern magic colliding with Western magic is quite innovative. The scene where the immortal cultivator travels to the magical continent and pretends to be a pig to eat the tiger at the beginning is not awkward and the reading is smooth. The protagonist's complaints and nonsensical comedy scenes are very good, but some of the setting and foreshadowing are a bit cumbersome, but overall it is a fun story that can be easily read.

I like the character of the protagonist. He is neither cold nor pretentious, but rather talkative and pragmatic. As soon as I arrived in the town, I was thinking about finding a place to live, asking about how to practice magic, and thinking about the elf lady. This little thought was written very vividly, like a real young man.

The details are well prepared. The settings of the Taiyi Jade Pendant and the Nine-turn Reincarnation Gong are clearly explained in advance. There should be no deus ex machina in the subsequent plot. The process of the protagonist growing up in a small town and inquiring about magic practice is very natural. There is no rush to advance the plot and it is effortless to watch.

The overall style is a light comedy that relieves stress, without complicated plots. Chen Heng has gone from a cultivator to a stranger, trying to grow while finding his way home. His occasional complaints and jokes are very relaxing. Some of the dialogues are a bit cumbersome, but it doesn't affect reading. I plan to continue following updates.

Overall, it is a steady and enjoyable fantasy novel. The protagonist falls from the world of immortality to the Western magical world. The process of adapting to the new environment and exploring the magic system is very real. The setting of body refining foundation + later magic exploration is fresh, but the rhythm can be more compact, and some daily scenes are a little dull. And... I like the harem [laughing evilly]

It's a new author, and I personally think it's pretty good. Five stars for encouragement. Some settings still require more thought before being finalized, and care should be taken to avoid setting conflicts when the plot advances. For some points that are easily controversial, do not use too much space, blur them, and just mention them in one sentence. The character and performance of the protagonist must be well measured. It feels like it's trying to show the protagonist's ease and spontaneity, but sometimes it goes too far and it just ends up being careless. The prerequisite for being confident and relaxed is the necessary careful preparation. It's impossible to have a female protagonist in a purely comical show, so it's reasonable to make fun of it. As the relationship with the heroine progresses, I feel that there is little interaction and they fall in love too quickly. The emotional line cannot be forced by design events, but the shining points can be found in daily interactions and life contexts. This is very difficult to grasp, so the author needs to work harder. I didn't have the urge to stay up late to read it, probably because the plot wasn't ups and downs enough, and the connection between plot chapters was too bland. Can't tell. I'll just use my mouth, just for reference.

The only drawback is that in the early stage so far, there are too few elements of cultivating immortals. Some people may feel that the book is not right if they come here for the title. However, the author explained that the elements of cultivating immortals will be reflected in larger scenes, so look forward to it.

It's very interesting, the subject matter is very good, the writing is also good, the logic is smooth, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and it gives people a very comfortable feeling when reading. Of course, there are also shortcomings. As a novel about Eastern immortal cultivators traveling through the Western fantasy world, there are currently few elements of cultivating immortals. There are not many differences and advantages between cultivators and magicians. The attractive point of this subject is to see the differences, exchanges, collisions and integration of Eastern and Western fantasy cultures. In the later stage, the male protagonist can lead people from his own camp to cultivate immortality together, or the barrier between the two worlds can be opened to promote the integration of cultivation and magic.

Not bad, wearing more than Xiangqie in many novels

The male protagonist kills decisively, and the writing is not well received. Can the author do it more quickly? The number of chapters is too few to read [shy]

It's pretty good. The protagonist is a normal person. He doesn't show off, doesn't kill innocent people indiscriminately, and he treats the opposite sex in a relaxed manner.

Why does it show that it was updated to 58 chapters before 12 o'clock, but I can't refresh it now? It's still 56 chapters. I keep brushing but I can't reach the back.

Quite interesting. Come on! I have been in a book drought for too long, and now I like to write new books that are not highly rated. As a new author, the writing is very good, there are no poisonous points, and the plot tends to be bland. It's just that the word count is too few, and the story line hasn't been fully developed yet.

So far, there is nothing poisonous about it, and I still have the desire to read more.

The subject matter is good, the plot is relatively smooth and has no poisonous points. As a new author, it is already very good, but there are too few updates.

Okay, it's more everyday, but I feel like the rating shouldn't be so low [what]

It looks pretty good so far. I feel like it's pretty cool in the early stages, but the college line is a bit boring in the mid-term.

It's pretty good, give it five stars

Come on! Well, come on!

Really good, really good

Very good, I personally feel it has great potential

It looks good now and suits my taste quite well.

The senses are quite good, and at least the characters' IQs are at a high level. It's worth watching.

It's very novel. I feel good about it so far. I hope the author will write better and better.

Looks okay now

Come on, the author is very good-looking

Come on, newbie