My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, as I Expected: New

It's quite good to watch. It really gives people the feeling of the second part of the erotic novel. To be honest, there are a lot of erotic novels written. It's the first time for me to see the group with Komachi as the protagonist. It's very fresh. By the way, the current service department has assembled a triangle lineup again, Flower of the High Mountain, full of vitality, decadent and dead fish eyes.

For now, I think it's a perfect score, just my personal opinion. Unlike most Harmono fanfics, it writes about events after Harmono's story. It is also a very novel approach, and it really feels like reading a spring novel. There are no big OOC characters, although there are not many original characters in it. It's really good. The author must keep writing more and don't stop. To be honest, this book gave me the feeling that it could be its own book. The protagonist is like a great teacher, but his background is different. By the way, who will the heroine be? To be honest, Komachi currently feels that it is unlikely that she will fall in love with the male protagonist. But I really want to know where the big teacher and the male protagonist are fighting because of Komachi. I'm so curious. No matter what, please come on, author, don't stop. It's best to update 10 times a day [please take a closer look]

The five stars are well deserved. Let's start with the author's side story about Hachiman and Yukino in college. It usually starts with reading Komachi's letter, summarizing the previous events, and our Hachiman and Yukino give their own evaluations. This also made me feel dazed. They are doing well in college now, and these two seem to be doing well recently. The author's main story has the flavor of a light novel. The three members of the service department: Chiaki, who has become somewhat candid after being an awkward loner, Chizuru, who is aloof and a little rebellious, but is still hiding things in her heart but showing her heart, and our lively and lovely group pet, Mr. Komachi! Of course, there are many more, such as: the angel class leader, Natsume who is positioned as "Hayama", a weak newbie in the workplace who has a cute sister but a teacher with racing attributes, Tsurumi Rumi's sister who accepts him, etc. The author handles the characters and the plot very well. I am very happy to witness their "Sobu High School" high school life, and I would like to thank the author for allowing me, the Yayuki Party, to have food again. On a side note, I stand with Xiaohe here! (The above is purely a personal opinion. Please feel free to criticize if there is anything bad to say. My personal literary quality is not high and I may express my meaning incorrectly. Sorry, I have finished reading the second volume of this book review.) PS: The author should update quickly, the majority of netizens can do anything (っ╥╯╰╥c)

I like this one. Compared with the original work, it is more straightforward, with more delicate emotions. There are also a few scenes that make people smile, and a few must-have links to sexual things [note]. However, the image of the protagonist is still a bit thin at the moment, so the author will add more soon 🤭

It can be regarded as a "sequel" to Harmono. Compared with the more delicate and full-bodied Hachiman in the original work, the male protagonist Kifune does not have the warmth of the sister-in-law from Komachi, but the over-frequency electromagnetic force of Komachi and Dango. It is like a transformation of the original work. I hope that more characters will appear in the book, whether it is characters like Hiratsuka-sensei or Ayaka, which can make Kifune's transformation in the book more natural. The capitalization is very good! Come on

It is a continuation of the original work, and it can be seen that the characters written by the author are very good. After all, if a light novel is to be good, good characters and plot are indispensable. There are both original and original characters. Most fan fiction authors follow the plot of the original text. On the premise of ensuring that the general plot of the original text remains unchanged, the author's secondary creation of the original text can be called "dancing in shackles." Of course, I do not mean to belittle this type of article. It is relatively easy for new authors to write a fan novel that does not deviate from the general plot. The author of this article chose a very appropriate point - Hachiman's sister is the new minister. It is very reasonable and more in line with the development context of the original text. In general, I think this fanfic written by the author mainly has a novel angle. It expands the minor characters in the original work and shows us a character with a richer image. Of course, the personas of the original characters in this article are more or less based on the original work "Spring Things". I personally think it is understandable. If you want to completely deviate from the original work, it is no less than writing a serious original novel 😂

A treasure trove of fan fiction. The quality is good, I almost thought it was a continuation of the original work. Currently I feel half happy and half sad about this novel. I am happy because the quality is very high and the characters are very detailed; I am worried because I am afraid that the author will discontinue updates like a high-quality fan I have read before. Finally, I hope that the author will continue to work hard and write more while maintaining the quality. It is simply not enough.

I like Harmono very much, but I don't read Harmono fanfics. So I was pleasantly surprised when I saw this book, because most Harmono fanfics feature the protagonist breaking up Yatsuki, and Yukino falls in love with the protagonist for no reason. The Yukinoshita Yukino I know is definitely not like this (the Yukinoshita Yukino I know is always beautiful, honest, not deceitful, and can be great) Dare to say what others dare not say; even if there is no place to rely on, she still remains standing. Her beautiful figure is like a frozen blue flame, and it is so fragile that it makes people sad. I think I must long for Yukinoshita Yukino.) Moreover, Yatsuki is destined, and no one can replace them. This book is set two years after Yaxue graduated and tells the story of Chizuru Saeeda and Chiaki Kifune. As Duhang said, "The story of him and her begins."

A very good sequel fanfic It is not much different from the original work. The core should be centered around the "real thing". The male protagonist is similar to the great teacher, but his heart is more delicate, and with the tsundere setting, his heart still prefers to escape. Chizuru hates lies. She must have been hurt by lies in the past. She has a venomous tongue and a sinister tongue, just like Yukino. She is a different kind of old flower. Natsume is Hayama's position. Judging from the plot, she should also be a member of the group who has a crush on the protagonist. And Isshiki is Yangno's position and should not participate in party struggles. The fairy tales she tells are actually her own stories, so she should still like the great teacher. The author is Yukino Party, so he should be more inclined to have Chizuru as the heroine, and the picture is probably Dango's positioning To be honest, I hate partisanship. In the first part of the anime, the teacher was disappointed with Yukino. The reason why the atmosphere in the club was bad was because, in the plot of being hit by a car, he knew that Yukino was not completely right. I wonder if Chizuru will also have this idea in the subsequent plot? Will she be disappointed with the male protagonist? It's really a stomach-ache episode, but that's how Japanese love affairs are, 80% of them will have stomach-ache plots The above are just my humble opinions. If there are any differences, please do not comment.

There is no doubt that he is qualified as a Harmono fan, and he is also one of the few in the Nikgaru circuit in Tomato (but unfortunately the update frequency is too slow). The author is also sure of character portrayal, and he also has his own style based on imitation. His own style is mainly reflected in the original characters, and Chiaki Kifune is the most obvious one. As a replacement for the original teacher, he has a clear difference from the teacher. He is willing to handle things in a softer way (the self-destruction soldier Hikigaya is already a thing of the past). On the contrary, Sae Chizuru's character portrayal is much rougher. The same venomous tongue attributes and superficial indifference as the original Yukino make her look like a Yukino. As for Teacher Jing's counterpart, the descriptions of her and her sister are my favorite parts of the book. My sister's complaints about the teacher always make me laugh. The author can also read "Times and Years" at ordinary times. I feel that the style is slightly similar, which may be helpful in writing. I hope the author can continue writing, after all, if you read a chapter every ten days, you will forget a lot of the plot. (After writing this, it feels like a long review for five yuan a piece on Pinduoduo) 🤦 🤦 🤦