There Is Indeed a Problem with My Youth Love Story, New

It's quite good to watch. It really gives people the feeling of the second part of the erotic novel. To be honest, there are a lot of erotic novels written. It's the first time for me to see the group with Komachi as the protagonist. It's very fresh. By the way, the current service department has assembled a triangle lineup again, Flower of the High Mountain, full of vitality, decadent and dead fish eyes.

For now, I think it's a perfect score, just my personal opinion. Unlike most Harmono fanfics, it writes about events after Harmono's story. It is also a very novel approach, and it really feels like reading a spring novel. There are no big OOC characters, although there are not many original characters in it. It's really good. The author must keep writing more and don't stop. To be honest, this book gave me the feeling that it could be its own book. The protagonist is like a great teacher, but his background is different. By the way, who will the heroine be? To be honest, Komachi currently feels that it is unlikely that she will fall in love with the male protagonist. But I really want to know where the big teacher and the male protagonist are fighting because of Komachi. I'm so curious. No matter what, please come on, author, don't stop. It's best to update 10 times a day [please take a closer look]

The five stars are well deserved. Let's start with the author's side story about Hachiman and Yukino in college. It usually starts with reading Komachi's letter, summarizing the previous events, and our Hachiman and Yukino give their own evaluations. This also made me feel dazed. They are doing well in college now, and these two seem to be doing well recently. The author's main story has the flavor of a light novel. The three members of the service department: Chiaki, who has become somewhat candid after being an awkward loner, Chizuru, who is aloof and a little rebellious, but is still hiding things in her heart but showing her heart, and our lively and lovely group pet, Mr. Komachi! Of course, there are many more, such as: the angel class leader, Natsume who is positioned as "Hayama", a weak newbie in the workplace who has a cute sister but a teacher with racing attributes, Tsurumi Rumi's sister who accepts him, etc. The author handles the characters and the plot very well. I am very happy to witness their "Sobu High School" high school life, and I would like to thank the author for allowing me, the Yayuki Party, to have food again. On a side note, I stand with Xiaohe here! (The above is purely a personal opinion. Please feel free to criticize if there is anything bad to say. My personal literary quality is not high and I may express my meaning incorrectly. Sorry, I have finished reading the second volume of this book review.) PS: The author should update quickly, the majority of netizens can do anything (っ╥╯╰╥c)

It can be regarded as a "sequel" to Harmono. Compared with the more delicate and full-bodied Hachiman in the original work, the male protagonist Kifune does not have the warmth of the sister-in-law from Komachi, but the over-frequency electromagnetic force of Komachi and Dango. It is like a transformation of the original work. I hope that more characters will appear in the book, whether it is characters like Hiratsuka-sensei or Ayaka, which can make Kifune's transformation in the book more natural. The capitalization is very good! Come on

I like this one. Compared with the original work, it is more straightforward, with more delicate emotions. There are also a few scenes that make people smile, and a few must-have links to sexual things [note]. However, the image of the protagonist is still a bit thin at the moment, so the author will add more soon [laughing]

It is a continuation of the original work, and it can be seen that the characters written by the author are very good. After all, if a light novel is to be good, good characters and plot are indispensable. There are both original and original characters. Most fan fiction authors follow the plot of the original text. On the premise of ensuring that the general plot of the original text remains unchanged, the author's secondary creation of the original text can be called "dancing in shackles." Of course, I do not mean to belittle this type of article. It is relatively easy for new authors to write a fan novel that does not deviate from the general plot. The author of this article chose a very appropriate point - Hachiman's sister is the new minister. It is very reasonable and more in line with the development context of the original text. In general, I think this fanfic written by the author mainly has a novel angle. It expands the minor characters in the original work and shows us a character with a richer image. Of course, the personas of the original characters in this article are more or less based on the original work "Spring Things". I personally think it is understandable. If you want to completely deviate from the original work, it is no less than writing a serious original novel 😂

A treasure trove of fan fiction. The quality is good, I almost thought it was a continuation of the original work. Currently I feel half happy and half sad about this novel. I am happy because the quality is very high and the characters are very detailed; I am worried because I am afraid that the author will discontinue updates like a high-quality fan I have read before. Finally, I hope that the author will continue to work hard and write more while maintaining the quality. It is simply not enough.

I like Harmono very much, but I don't read Harmono fanfics. So I was pleasantly surprised when I saw this book, because most Harmono fanfics feature the protagonist breaking up Yatsuki, and Yukino falls in love with the protagonist for no reason. The Yukinoshita Yukino I know is definitely not like this (the Yukinoshita Yukino I know is always beautiful, honest, not deceitful, and can be great) Dare to say what others dare not say; even if there is no place to rely on, she still remains standing. Her beautiful figure is like a frozen blue flame, and it is so fragile that it makes people sad. I think I must long for Yukinoshita Yukino.) Moreover, Yatsuki is destined, and no one can replace them. This book is set two years after Yaxue graduated and tells the story of Chizuru Saeeda and Chiaki Kifune. As Duhang said, "The story of him and her begins."

A very good sequel fanfic It is not much different from the original work. The core should be centered around the "real thing". The male protagonist is similar to the great teacher, but his heart is more delicate, and with the tsundere setting, his heart still prefers to escape. Chizuru hates lies. She must have been hurt by lies in the past. She has a venomous tongue and a sinister tongue, just like Yukino. She is a different kind of old flower. Natsume is Hayama's position. Judging from the plot, she should also be a member of the group who has a crush on the protagonist. And Isshiki is Yangno's position and should not participate in party struggles. The fairy tales she tells are actually her own stories, so she should still like the great teacher. The author is Yukino Party, so he should be more inclined to have Chizuru as the heroine, and the picture is probably Dango's positioning To be honest, I hate partisanship. In the first part of the anime, the teacher was disappointed with Yukino. The reason why the atmosphere in the club was bad was because, in the plot of being hit by a car, he knew that Yukino was not completely right. I wonder if Chizuru will also have this idea in the subsequent plot? Will she be disappointed with the male protagonist? It's really a stomach-ache episode, but that's how Japanese love affairs are, 80% of them will have stomach-ache plots —————— The above are just my humble opinions. If there are any differences, please do not comment.

The last time I saw such a good Harmono fanfic was "My Youth Love Story" by Feng Shu. It is different from that book which is full of the author's personal complaints and most of the ridiculously dismantling cp and crazy OOC novels nowadays (here I will mention Feng Shu's The juxtaposition of the work with those "Guitian Shuangwen" does not mean that the book is on the same table as "Guitian Shuangwen"). As a fanfic, this book has the flavor of the original work, and is clearly different from the original work. It can be regarded as the only one among the Harmono fanfics I have read.

The author really has something, and the reading is comparable to the original work. The plot is very consistent with Harmono's usual real thing, and there is also the self-destructing truck that everyone loves to watch. The character creation is very delicate, and there are many details echoing the original work. I highly recommend reading it.

It's like the sequel to the novel "Spring Things", but the author also wrote it in his own style. It's very beautiful, really very beautiful. Who is not envious and has delusions about having or having had such a wonderful youth time...

There is no doubt that he is qualified as a Harmono fan, and he is also one of the few in the Nikgaru circuit in Tomato (but unfortunately the update frequency is too slow). The author is also sure of character portrayal, and he also has his own style based on imitation. His own style is mainly reflected in the original characters, and Chiaki Kifune is the most obvious one. As a replacement for the original teacher, he has a clear difference from the teacher. He is willing to handle things in a softer way (the self-destruction soldier Hikigaya is already a thing of the past). On the contrary, Sae Chizuru's character portrayal is much rougher. The same venomous tongue attributes and superficial indifference as the original Yukino make her look like a Yukino. As for Teacher Jing's counterpart, the descriptions of her and her sister are my favorite parts of the book. My sister's complaints about the teacher always make me laugh. The author can also read "Times and Years" at ordinary times. I feel that the style is slightly similar, which may be helpful in writing. I hope the author can continue writing, after all, if you read a chapter every ten days, you will forget a lot of the plot. (After writing this, it feels like a long review for five yuan a piece on Pinduoduo) [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

This is my favorite Harmono fanfic I have read so far. It's like a sequel. Don't stop, okay? I'll do anything [I'm about to cry] Why are you dying? 😡

I'm really blessed. It's a great novel, and it doesn't feel like it's dragging at all. I read the latest chapter in one breath, and I feel like I still have something to say. The article is solid and sophisticated, and there aren't any major plot points, but it's still enjoyable to read. Each character is explained in one or two short chapters. The characteristics of Chu Liao slightly evoked the characters without facial makeup in other scenes. It is a pity that I read it too early. It is better to read a novel like this in one sitting to have a sense of completion. Hehe, by the way, author, update this matter not in a hurry but in a hurry. Do you understand what I mean? [Blowing kiss]

It's good to watch, I love to read it. It's very novel to use Komachi's generation as the protagonist of the story. It doesn't have some repetitive plots with anime like other Harmono fanfics. This change of perspective is very interesting (personal opinion). I hope the author will not stop updating.

This work itself is just like Spring Things. After reading it, it always arouses thoughts or resonance. You can always find your own piece of sky in the fine words, and then you can naturally get involved in it. You imagine yourself like the protagonist, like the great teacher, how to self-destruct, how to transform, how to find the real thing in your own world, and even the route is planned. Later, just like the great teacher, he was still willing to take the first step even if he saw the true nature of the thing. I think the biggest feature of this work is that it allows readers to think or look back on their youth or life experiences.

Personal opinion: This book gives me a sense of stability. As a fan-oriented book, adding characters from the original work can reduce the original character's abruptness in the style of the original work, and it can also write about Baxuetang (hee hee) The character Chiaki Kifune does not have exactly the same style as Hikigaya. The two have different solutions to problems. In the same cultural festival turmoil, Kifune's solution was different from Otoshi's similar "covering up the problem", but more radical. Perhaps the author designed this character to "have the ability to solve problems, but he needs to judge and choose whether to use his ability through his own reactions to others." Sakuragi and Chizuru are probably Dango and Yukino. If Komachi hadn't joined, the three of them would have been like this. But that would be very template, which is why I think this novel is good. (Guilty) But because Sakuragi's previous performance seems to have paved the way, the trend is a bit unclear. There are only four stars because there are still not enough chapters due to greed, but I really hope the author can finish this book. Brothers who write novels must not be discouraged.

She has a sharper tongue than Yukino, is brighter than Dango, and is more self-destructive than O-sensei. She does have that taste. You know, I have always been a member of the Chizuru Party. She and Qianxiao have an incredible tacit understanding. I think they will have a good chemical reaction together. Sometimes it is difficult to make a decision. After many days and nights of thinking, I decided to join the Chizuru Party. I can't wait to see the two of them spreading sweets. As for the senior sister, I wish her all the best in the service department.

It has a very springy feel to it, and the writing structure is very similar. As a Japanese language student, I can directly visualize the words in the article as Japanese😇😇 I remembered the days when I watched Chunwu. I was very moved and gave it a five-star rating.

This book is so good, I even thought it was a sequel to the original work. It can be seen that the author really put his heart into it. I hope the author will become more and more popular like this. The work should not be read by only a few people. Come on, author.

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Personally, I feel that it really has the flavor of Harmono, and the subject matter is very novel. It can be regarded as a continuation of Harmono, and the appearance of characters such as Rumi Tsurumi is really surprising. The only thing that makes me dissatisfied is why the author can only update twice a day! Quick update! Can't sleep at night! ! !

It's so good that it can be rated 12 points. If you like spring things, don't miss it!

A novel that is most consistent with the original work. Not to mention the good writing, the connection between the relationships between the characters and the development of events is very perfect. It really feels like Du Hang is writing the follow-up. The only small drawback is that Chizuru's character creation still cannot escape the shadow of Yukinoshita, and it feels like it lacks a little innovation. But Komachi's portrayal made my eyes shine. While it fit the character's character, it also allowed me to see a reasonable and different Komachi.

The writing is very good, the taste is right, and the events are interesting. Gua, wow, wow, it's the ultimate evolved version of Super Dumpling, we have it.

Maybe it's based on some of Harmono's original characters. I think the author's characters are very distinctive. It is the best one among the Harumon fanfics I have ever read. Good luck to the author. I would like to ask, has the author considered adding the option of writing about their own inner activities and conversations with the male protagonist from the perspective of Eri and the others, just like in the original work? This should increase the author's workload, but I feel that it may make the characters in the novel more prominent and have a distinct sense of individuality. Just like when Tuanzi failed in the end and the teacher went to find Yukino, Tuanzi failed to retain the teacher in the end. At that time, Dango's personal monologue almost made me cry. Although I am a Yukino party member, I still feel sorry for Dango. It doesn't matter if you don't have it, the author has already written it very well.

Why is my score only 6.9? On the other hand, forget it, let's just give it 8 points, so it won't be seen by more people (selfish [blowing kiss]

Oh my God, I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. It really made me feel like I read the spring novels in the first place. Moreover, I feel that this book can be read as a sequel to the erotic novels. I was really moved. I hope the author will stop being a fan [almost crying] [adoration] [adoration]

The best quality among the four high-scoring spring novels I have read. Not only does it have the writing style of Chunwu, but it is not as cumbersome as Duhang's language, and is more suitable for the physique of Chinese babies [Send Heart] I just regret that I read it too quickly and finished it after staying up all night [laughing]