A Lane: I Got a Life Script and Started Cheating

It's very interesting. When I first read the synopsis, I felt that Shanshan had to change for the better. I found it difficult and very resistant, but after reading it, I felt that the author wrote it very well. Shanshan's change to badness was due to the oppression of the environment, which also caused her character to become very self-interested. With the heroine's guidance to her, she stood firm on her own and got better and better. Seeing that the author separated his parents, I felt that it really came naturally and was the inevitable result. The writing is beautiful, the plot so far is smooth, and the heroine will take it back when she is bullied.

It's so good to watch, Xiao Ting and Dong Zhe are having fun, Huang Ling finally got rid of her shackles, and Tu Nan is not constantly being teased. It's really good to watch. I hope the author will update it soon. I can't bear to finish reading it.

It's very interesting. Through the author's writing, we see another side of Suzhou, not just the filthy parents in the TV series, but also the customs and customs of Suzhou as well as the author's cultural heritage and love for culture. I am very grateful to the author for creating a different Zhuang Xiaoting and letting us see the city of Suzhou through her mouth.

Overall, it's okay. It's watchable, but it's a little stretched, but it's really in line with that era, and there's nothing I can do about it. Finally, it would be better if the author's writing style could be strengthened, because in many places it feels more like telling one thing, just like writing a composition, without any ups and downs.

The reason I read this book is because of the author's attitude towards Shanshan in the comment section, which made me think it was worth reading. At present, some of the highlights of this book are: 1. It's the friendship between Xiaoting and Shanshan (when Shanshan realizes it earlier; when the environment gives her a little help; I think it is possible to have this friendship. Finally, I agree with the author's point of view, she should not rot in the mud, she should be as free as a bird (praise) 2. It's Shanshan struggling to fly out of the quagmire (it's also very real, patience, strength, and finally freedom) (oh~ why is the author so good at writing, praise +2 3. It's the mother-daughter love between Huang Ling and Xiao Ting (I almost cried in the middle of the night. God knows, Huang Ling said to Xiao Ting: You are the one I least regret giving birth to. You are so good at crying and writing. 4. Arguing and fighting scenes (there are more in the article, so if you don't like it, I suggest you skip it. I enjoyed it very much) 5. The Suzhou described by the author is very beautiful 6. Huang Ling's parents' love for Huang Ling 7. The awkward stumbling between Zhang Min and Shanshan (referring to the relationship between the two girls under the influence of environmental factors and vested interests) is very real. If the author has read my comment, I will strongly praise it again! 8. Huang Ling divorced, and Zhuang Tulan became more independent. 9. Changes in Dongzhe's emotional attitude towards Xiao Ting (so young, so cute) 10. The reason why the heroine traveled through time (this is the first time I've seen this happening, it's fun) These are all relatively favorable points, in no particular order, and I will urge you to update them at the end! Teacher, teacher, come on!

It's really good to read. When I read the introduction and the first chapter, I didn't want to read on [feeling aggrieved], but [sending my heart]!!!!! Fortunately, I am accustomed to giving ten chapters a chance when reading, and the rest of the book is really great!!! And the golden finger is not exaggerated!!! The writing is really good, and the emotions are very delicate. It is the best fanfic of Alley People that I have ever read. The only shortcoming is that it is not finished yet 🤦

It's very good-looking. I can say it's one of my favorites among the many alley-dwellers I've seen. Each character is very three-dimensional, very vivid, and very immersive. The characters are also well drawn. Generally speaking, there aren't too many OOCs. It just feels like what they can do. You can see the characters growing and changing, and the heroine is very enterprising and tenacious.

I have read so many fanfics, and this one is more concise and smooth. The writing style is also quite delicate, there are no obvious insults to women, and the female characters are well portrayed. The only thing I personally think is a bit bad is the bookmakers. The introduction said they were going to get divorced, but I didn't expect the divorce to take quite a long time. Overall, it's still very good-looking, and the author is definitely a delicate and gentle girl, so keep up the good work! See Chapter 159 It's too early to say, but the lyrics are still insulting to women. I really like describing things in alleys. It feels very warm. The part where the heroine writes a book to collect stories is also very beautiful. Maybe it's because it's a long story, so there are more descriptions about the banker. I felt really bad when I saw it. Although the heroine didn't suffer a loss, it was like seeing mud. Even though she didn't step on it, it was still disgusting to watch. And when I was listening to the book, I didn't remember anything. I just listened to the constant "slap" and "slap", one slap for you and one slap for me, which made my ears hurt a little. Let's not talk about that era. What would happen if the younger generation slaps the elders in public? When it comes to such quarrels between bankers, there must be slaps. Either the heroine slaps her or Huang Ling slaps her. When I first watched it, I felt relieved. After watching it too much, I just felt bored after hearing it too much. Obviously, when I wrote about the heroine before, the writing style was still very fresh. It feels like I have changed my style. And I don't understand why I have been entangled with the banker and got divorced. The heroine also said that she wanted to change her surname to Huang, but she has said it twice but has not yet taken any actual action.

The author's writing is beautiful and the logic is clear. Using Zhuang Xiaoting's perspective, we see a different alley family. The characters in the play also have other directions. Huang Ling breaks through the thorny constraints of the "eldest sister-in-law". In addition to looking up at the stars, Tunan is also down-to-earth. What remains unchanged is the cute puppy Dongzhe🐕 and the Lin family. I really look forward to what kind of love story the different Xiaoting and Dongzhe will have ~

It's very interesting to watch, the story line develops very smoothly, and I also like the girls helping each other. Under the influence of Xiaoting, Shanshan's development for the better is really good. Huang Ling's awakening was also written very smoothly and naturally 🥰 However, I feel that seeing the current process of writing about violent bookmakers, the role of the system is a little less mentioned. I will slowly look forward to the development later [Thoughts]