Immortality and Immortality Start with Practice Makes Perfect

I think it's quite good-looking. The protagonist is relatively stable. He doesn't behave like he wants to keep a low profile but ends up being too public. He's not very angry. The people he meets are normal and he can weigh the pros and cons. He's not very brainless, and he doesn't behave like he says he doesn't have a heroine but ends up with a lot of confidantes.

This book is really good to read. The protagonist is very restrained and calm. He doesn't say that he can't do it after being entangled in it. He makes a decisive decision and plans before acting. He does things in an orderly manner and works very hard. Although there is a cheat, this cheat is not his biggest drawback. His biggest thing is actually his own efforts. He follows the instructions every day. His own plan to complete a series of events is very methodical. He will not be influenced by external objects or tempted by anything. He is genuine. I like this kind of hard work to make himself stronger and stronger. Then he learned a lot of skills, such as spiritual planting, alchemy, drawing talismans, weapon refining, snacks, wine making, etc. This These are not given by Golden Finger, they are all practiced by me seriously and very hard. There are some parts that I really don't understand. He is only used for enlightenment at most. He will not be merciful when encountering enemies. He will be decisive and will not delay two or three cards. Moreover, when he first entered the sect, he may have been lucky or he was about spiritual planting. His skills are very in line with the needs of his sect. Basically, he didn't encounter any bad guys in the early stage, and he also defeated a few bad ones. They were all good, the atmosphere was great, and they looked good, but there were too few. The author should update it quickly. I really hope you can directly pass on all the information you know about the ending ❤️❤️❤️

The thirteenth level of Qi training has been explained in the article, but some book friends are still confused or don't like it. Let me explain again, this is related to the protagonist's foundation building, and it provides a strength foundation for some of his subsequent actions. There is no such setting in the later realms. The Thirteenth Level is not deliberately intended to suppress the protagonist's realm. This setting was already there before the book started, and it is also found in many novels about cultivating immortals.

This book is okay. Except for the story, which lacks a little bit of appeal and lacks a little bit of fun, the rest is quite good. The readability is still very good [like][like][like] It's like driving high and leaving low. Various descriptions in the subsequent plot include too many AI narratives. It's too awkward to watch. Go away, go away.

It's so steady, you have to hide everything, and you hide it fearlessly, especially since the main character's sect is very peaceful, and there is no need to hide it at all (most of the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read in the past also hide in shadows, but I never felt tired from reading it. This book is exhausting to read, and even more so after reading it)

The protagonist is cautious, steady, and kind... The plot chapters are clear and appropriate, and each character's personality, background story, and language and image creation are very consistent. Beautifully written, keep up the good work

I like this kind of peaceful immortality novel, but I don't like the misfortune-star protagonist who follows him wherever he goes and gets into trouble. The price setting is also very reasonable. Rare and best

I finally know why the score is low. I used too much AI when writing, and many details were not handled well. I saw many readers raising loopholes. Although there were explanations, they were still not handled well in the early stage. The plot rhythm and exciting points are well grasped, but some details are not handled well, and it feels simple and refreshing without soul. But if you like farming articles, you can read them. Don't get too hung up on certain details. Although you use AI, you can still read them to pass the time. Read Chapter 52 and still reading...

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that I can rank it in the middle. Among the many histories of tomatoes, although it is not gold, it is still a piece of beautiful jade. The only thing I feel bad about is that there are a lot of scenes describing food in the article. It is well written and can be read, but it is a bit too much. I feel greedy every time I read it, but it feels like the cake the boss drew for you. It is disgusting. There can be less content like this. /This comment is not malicious, I really want to give the author my advice [smile].

It feels good to me, look at the quality at the back - purple (to be determined)

A good-looking movie is really a long journey to seek immortality. I will search from top to bottom. The key point is the first one, that is, if there is no heroine, it will be the king of career👑. At present, the story is still being spread in a small area. I think it should be a few thousand pieces. I think I like it very much. Please support it. I will ask my three or five friends to come and support the author.

Very comfortable cultivating immortality [covering face]. This is the first time I've read such a bland and yet boring novel.

When I read Chapter 72, there is indeed no heroine, and I like this ordinary daily life + the calm, hard-working and versatile protagonist

Not bad, not bad, farming and cultivating immortality! It's just a trick of the author to use the system to quickly get through the embarrassing period of Qi refining. After the foundation is established, the system is basically useless. It is equivalent to directly canceling this setting. It is estimated that it will take a long time to settle during the foundation building period.

Love to watch, love to watch. It's much better looking than those flowing water stories. Although there are proficiency panels for realm spells that are analytical. Looks more realistic

Personally, I really like this kind of fairy tale novels. The author's writing skills are good, the whole story has a reasonable structure, and it is told eloquently, like a cup of tea. The only thing that needs to be improved is imagination. It is most taboo to write a martial arts story about cultivating immortals, as that would be meaningless.

Flaws are not hidden, no heroine, few adventures, great talent, but when will you learn the art of formation and weapon refining? Come on big

Very nice to look at. The protagonist is diligent in his studies, has a good personality, and is steady and steady, unlike a loser. The atmosphere in the sect is also good, and there are two or three close friends.

It's very good-looking, the training speed isn't rushed or slow, and the characters are pretty good. It's a good article. Come on, author, please keep updating.

Okay, pretty good-looking It was okay at first, but then it became unreadable, especially after Jin Dan. The protagonist seemed like a pseudo-person with no emotions, and the writing style was very AI, making it hard to watch.

It's very interesting. The world view must be written in a big way, so that the protagonist's growth is not too dangerous. The kind of protagonist who is in danger of life and death at every turn is usually a fantasy before death. However, the further you go, the harder it becomes to write. It requires more speculation.

It still needs to learn. The narrative style is rather bland. The advantage is that the story rhythm is OK, but it lacks detailed description. It is already worth 3 stars. I will add 1 star to encourage the author to write his first book.

Small and fresh, not bad, nice to watch

Very good, Gou Zhong also has an enterprising spirit and works hard to make progress, Gan Emperor. The protagonist has a good personality, and there are not many intrigues among the sect. It can be considered a harmonious small sect.

It's okay for less than 200 photos. I don't know the rest

It's okay ~ I just feel like the economic system is a bit broken

The only bad thing is that after the 13th level of Qi training, there will be no limit after the foundation building is completed. Break the limit.

It looks good. The protagonist is indeed very stable, and he is also decisive when he changes to killing and attacking. However, I personally don't feel useless. I have dabbled in all kinds of cultivation arts, but I don't feel bored watching them anyway! There is no female protagonist cultivating the immortal masterpiece, and so far I am very committed to the Tao. It is very good, I love watching it.

After reading chapter sixty-nine, it was the first time I encountered a book that suited my mood of cultivating immortality.

Really good novel [like][like]